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chapter 5 Harry's Birthday part 2

As planned the limo arrived on time. The limo first toke them to a grand mall that had opened near by. When they walked inside the mall To any muggle passerby it would have seamed as though it was two ordinary teenagers talking about muggle things. They had put notice me not charms before they left the house that were to expire with a simple deactivation code. They talked about a lot of things mostly the D.A. they were planning on continuing it with Ron in charge of new

members while the two of them toke care of the advanced students. They had planned a few classes and were going to give them to Albus when they next saw them as they planned t o make the D.A. s real class.They both bought a pair of swim suits and left. They walked around the mall for 15 min before returning to the limo they saw a lot of things that the made sure to remember to come back for and buy. The funny thing was that they were having a car raffle for the new 2005

BMW (yea yea I know wrong year just go along with it.) Hermione thought it would be cool to enter and they won they needed to come back in a few days and claim it with identification. They got to the hotel alright. The driver got a free room from the company and told them if they need him he would be in room 007. Their room was on the third floor rom 311 they had a great view. They went to the bathroom and got changed and went to the pool. " so Hermione up for a race" Harry said and jumped in the water closely followed be Hermione. They had fun swimming they got the entire pool in a huge game of marco-polo. After they got out of the pool they went and rented a privet spa. " Harry what do youlan on

doing when u get out of school" asked Hermione when they had gotin in the spa. "Well..... um... last year I told professor that I wanted to be an auror. But I think now I want to be a teacher you know after this war get away from it all" answered Harry. "Hermione there is some thing I need to tell you something" "you can tell me any thing Harry" "you know the prophecy that got smashed well one other person heard it. It was Albus Dumbledore who heard it he told me it now I will tell you" he toke a deap breath and said

"The one with the power to vanquish the dark lord approached....born to those who have thrice defied hi, born as the seventh month dies.....and the dark lord will mark him as his equal, but he will hae power the dark lord knows not....and either must die at the hand of the other for neither can live wihle the other survives ...... the one with the power to vanquish the dark lord will be born as the seventh month dies......( Harry Potter and the order of the phoenix pg. 841)"

It was 11:30 pm when they got back to their room the sight that awaited them was not what the expected.

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