Presenting Carnival ch. 5

Jesse's point of view

" Yes she's always been a tough one." Father d commented after I told him about Susannah's attitude toward me.

" I just do not understand Father, she says she has feelings toward me but then she treats me like a servant." I was truly confused, she seemed happier when in Slater's presence then with mine lately.

" Even though I do not approve of your er, being together, I suggest you talk to her about this." Father Dominic said looking at me with some what pity.

I wonder if I should just leave it alone, I know that she will just come back to me in the end but I am not willing to wait that long. What am I talking about she has not left me yet, and I know she never will, being as 'hot' as I am, she probably will never leave.

a/n I hope you could understand that I know it's hard reading in big people talkJ

Plus, Slater is not even a quarter the man I am, yes she will come back to me in the end. I was suddenly brought out of my thoughts by Susannah's voice.

"Father, I must depart now Susannah is calling me." I told Father Dominic while focusing on Susannah.

I materialized in a room that was extremely lavish, it had good lighting and it's floor was a giant mosaic. It was not far off from what Maria's room looked like a long time ago.

"Susannah," I yelled, I saw neither her or Slater in the room.

Suddenly Paul came flying out of a cavern in the wall, he was traveling at an amazing speed and soon disappeared through an opening in witch Susannah came out. She was in a seat type thing and quickly disappeared through the opening that Slater had came out of.

I was shocked to see them in the air like that but then realized that Susannah needed my help.

Jack's point of view

The girl ,Susannah I think her name was, seemed terrified as I through her and that boy through one of the passages. Though it might seem odd her fear brought warm sensations through me. It had been along time since I had a companion, and the thought of this beautiful girl was an over powering wait on my mind.

I decided against being overly forward and decided to test her, along with the others of course, to see what these younger people where like.

Paul's point of view

I woke up to find myself flying through the air and through a tunnel similar to the one that Suze and I had been in.

I could see Suze in front of me on a roller coaster seat heading towards me. She looked like she was about to barf at anytime. It made sense seeing as she was awake the entire time.

We were pulled through another tunnel that was just like the hallway we had went through, it didn't even look like it had been occupied once. The tunnel lasted 5 minutes before we were dropped into a room that appeared to have once been a theater.

" Well now that was interesting," I said sounding cheery

" maybe for you Paul, but personally I just want to get the hell out of here already." she said on the ground while clutching her stomach.

"Well consider it this way suze, things couldn't get quite worse than this can they." I knew that I really shouldn't of said that when that French guy announced:

"Let the games begin!"

Jesse's point of view

As soon as they were gone I materialized back to Father Dominic.

"Father they are in trouble something is holding them and-"

"Calm down Jesse," Father Dominc said startled by my sudden appearance . "now tell me what you're saying slowly."

" Paul and Susannah are down in a hidden room and need are help." I said.

But before the father could reply we were materialized into a theater like room beside Susannah and Paul just in time for a voice to shout out "Let the games begin!"

Well here is a new chapter

Yes I know it sucks ass but bare with me people bare with me

Oh and yes the options of giving requests and possibly co writing this wonderful story are still open.

Here are some things that are going to happen in carnival, I advise you not to read this if you are in love with jesse or plain out just don't give.$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

The characters are going to get the poop worked out of them , Paul and suze are going to hook up, and Maria is going to come into the picture