Presenting Carnival VI

Suze's point of view

This has gotta be a joke, this was just supposed to be a lesson on how to enhance our mediating techniques, but instead it has become a living hell.

Everything was supposed to be easy going, we were to get in , get out and go home, but of course when has anything gone my way.

Jesse and Father D were here now, and they looked about as disturbed as I was. Paul Though was looking around to find the person who obviously thinks this is some kind of game.

" Ha freaking Ha loser we don't have time for your pathetic games , you either leave us alone or we'll make you sorry that you ever knew we were here." Paul said, he was starting to look like he really didn't care about our surroundings.

" Brilliant Paul, piss him off why don't you." I commented, Paul might not want to leave here with scars but I don't.

"oh don't worry madam there's nothing that young man can say that will aggravate me." the voice called out.

We all turned around to see a Boy about Jesse's age and era walking toward us. He was sizing us up one at a time until his eyes fell on me. He smiled mischievously at me making Paul and Jesse tense up. Seeing this he smiled again and we were thrown into the chairs in the audience.

" well now we wouldn't want anything like that now would we gentleman," Then he turned to Paul, "Or should I say gentle boy." He finished.

" now I have brought you here to-" he started, before Paul blurted out,

"Who the hell do you think you are, If it's not to hard for you I suggest you shut up before I shift your ass into the great beyond." Paul hissed at him.

" Of course, how incredibly rude of me my names Jack." He said when he'd walked in front of my seat. " What's you're name malady."

" her name is 'I'm in love with Paul so back up before I break you're nose' so step back." Paul said, looking like he would rip Jack's head off. Jesse didn't look any better.

" What a beautiful name, the only problem is that you all call her Susannah." He said looking back at me. I was too worn out to really say anything.

"And for your out burst," Jack said nodding to Paul, " The Father is up first."

Father D who through this entire conversation had looked as if he had been conceiving a plan suddenly looked up startled.

"Dear boy I think we could come to some sort of an agreement." Father d tried persuading him.

" now Father you know when a child acts up you must punish him." He was grinning like an idiot.

"Then punish Paul you asshole." I finally piped in. Which I realized was a big mistake, Because I was flown in front of him bent over at the waist up.

" You will be punished for being a bad girl Susannah." He purred, but before I could make a come back he lifted his hand and whacked my butt.

" Refrain from touching her you Punta." sp? Jesse yelled, I guess he finally got pushed over the edge by my hands on punishment.

"I thought so ," Jack said satisfied, " I guess it will just have to be the Father then." He through me back into my seat at the same time Father D disappeared.

Father Dominic's point of view

I arrived in a room that seemed to have been made recently, it's walls were a light blue colored glass with a silver door. It had an aura of sad, emptiness. There was a distinct possibility of a haunting in this room.

"That you are right my love." A girl called out to me. Her voice was familiar but not place able .

"show your self ." I called out, I was getting a knotting feeling in my stomach that I had not had since my youth.

"do I really need to remind you of who I am my love." the woman was right behind me now.

I turned around only to receive a heart attach . Melana. I had not seen her since I was sixteen, when she had moved on.

"My love I have returned to you." She said with a beautiful smile on her face. I could the tears running down my face.

"But how once you're gone-"I started

" Do not trouble yourself with these questions, just know that I am here." she had rapped her arms around me in a hug. "and this time I am not leaving."

I had never felt so happy in my life, I had always wished for this moment to come.

" Break your vows and be with me my love." She said. I was trying to soak up everything about her hair ,her beautiful blue eyes, her clothes, and her wonderful French accent. My eyes snapped open.

"What's wrong my love." She asked. I couldn't believe I had fell for this trick. I sank down on the floor with no will to move and went to sleep.

Well sorry for not updating sooner, I sware it's because of the gothness eating up all my energy but whatever.

Review , try to encourage me to go on. Not. I'll get by on my own

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