Well, thanks Rayfan for the hint on double line spacing! I have something to say, IF YOU DON'T REVIEW FOR IT'S GREATNESS OR BADNESS, I WON'T REVIEW FORYOU!!!!! IF YOU DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY, DON'T REVIEW!!!!!!!On with the story! LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT (final version) It all stared in the forest. Rayman was sleeping at his favorite tree. Last night, he fought the robo-piartes and Razoff, who wanted to get his revenge. It kept him all night long. By the time he got home, it was 3 a.m. in the morning. He only got to sleep for 4 hours, which Globox woke him up. Then, he was hungry. He looked at the sundial and saw it was 12 o' clock exactly. He deiced to go to the big river and fish for trout. Then, he remembered something… FLASHBACK Hey, Rayman!" Rayman looked back and saw, "Globox! What are you doing here? "I'm hungry! For trout!" Globox saw the trout Rayman got, and ate every one of them. "GLOBOX!!!!!!!! " END OF FLASHBACK Rayman deiced NOT to tell Globox about lunch. "No sir" he thought. Then he deiced to take the shortcut to the river. The one that went threw the marsh. It was risky, but Rayman was really HUNGRY. 5 minutes later, Rayman was halfway there, but he was all muddy from falling in marsh. Lucky, Rayman found a stream and washed himself off. Then, he took a nap that lasted 15 minutes, because his stomach growled.It was a sight to see. Rayman was running at top speed, not even bothering to see where he is going. Now, a noise was heard from the bush. And out came Razoff, with a scowl. "Ah, Ha!!! I finally found you!" And with that, he started to fire like crazy. 3 minutes later, Razoff was knocked out from Rayman fast punches. "I try to warn about that low hanging branch."(and from the branch, too.) Rayman said to unconscious hunter. Then, he was back on his way. At 12:56, Rayman finally got to the river. At 1:26, he was full with trout, berries, and pure water. He deiced to head back, the normal way. Once again, he was whizzing at high speed.Then, he saw somebody. He didn't have time to avoid her. It was Ly, the fairy. "Ow!" they both said when they hit. Rayman fell into a bush, while Ly fell into a small stream that was nearby. "You O.K., Ly?" Rayman said to the fairy. "Yeah." She replied. Once Rayman got up, he helped Ly out of the stream. At 2:01, Rayman asked Ly a question, "What were you doing here?" "I was… um… looking for Globox! Yeah, Globox! "Rayman rolled his eyes and said, "Yeah… right! What is the real cause?" Ly head dropped and she said, "I need to tell you something…" "What?" "I don't belong here." Rayman started to laugh like crazy. "I mean it! In three weeks I'm going to be a queen and marry prince Klaus." Rayman said (Here it is!) "But I love you too." Ly jumped and said "Really? You're not joking, right?" "No. I don't want to go. No one (expect Razorbeard) wants you to go.' And, with that, Ly got near Rayman and hug him. Then, Rayman started to hug her too. "Don't ever leave." "I'll try to delay as long as I can." And, finally they kissed. Yes, their first kiss.Later, the whole world (almost) knew Rayman and Ly were in love. Yep, R/L were here to stay. But, some Rayman's old enemies hated it, a lot. Rayman thought this could mean marriage someday, and so did Ly. Thus, my R/L stories had to begin. Well? Is my final version bad or good? People, write reviews this time, not hints, O.K. ? See you in the next story of Rayman and Ly!!!