Bass's Reality Chapter 8: Protoman To The Rescue!, a mega man fanfic

Robotboy576 Wow! I really like this story! It like, totally "rocks"! Hahaha! Sorry, I just love puns! And bass! Fort, whatever!

ME: Thanks a lot Robotboy576! I really like it that someone appreciates my story. As you say, I hope a lot more people think it Rocks! Wa-ha-ha!

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the nitpick Another thing which Macross-Green didn't point out was your formatting. It would be easier to read if you started a new paragraph every time someone new starts to speak. You'll have to tap ENTER twice, as you did before, otherwise will post it all as a monster paragraph which will hurt everyone's eyes.

Me: I appreciate the critic the nitpick. But, if I started a new paragraph everytime somebody spoke, there wouldn't be much of a purpose to having paragraphs, would there! I can understand what you mean, but I don't want to space everything out so much. How do you like the story in itself?

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Macross-Green Interesting. Not a bad way to go about everything! I'm kinda surprised that you haven't recieved any reviews until now, actually. Well, here goes.

I haven't looked at your profile yet, but I can see that this doesn't seem anything like a first fic. For starters, you've gone ahead and spaced out the plot and the action. Nice.

Next, the characters seem to be 'in character', and that's a bonus right there. Bass and Wily have a love-hate relationship (about par for the course), and the Light family seems to get along, too. Not quite sure how Blues (Protoman) got into Wily's hidden base yet, but that's a minor plot hole.

A few spelling errors here and there (mostly of the your and you're variety), but otherwise you seem to be doing well in that category. Grammar is nice, and sentence structure isn't too bad either. I hope you decide to continue this. The chapters are a bit short though, and I really hope you go a bit more in depth on the characters and their thoughts in order to make the chapters longer. I'll be back for the next chapter, if there is one.

Me: This is the first review I ever got for my story and the most informative. This isn't nessecarily my first fanfic. I've practiced on different things. Plus, I had this whole story written before I posted it, so I've had the chance to do some rewriting on it.

Protoman, (Or Blues as he's sometimes reffered to) I don't know how he entered Dr. Wily's base. That is something that happens at the end of Megaman&Bass, so you'd have to ask Capcom.

I'll try to watch out for spelling errors in the future. I think the upcoming chapters, except for one, will be a bit longer than these, so keep watching and reviewing when you can! There will be more chapters, trust me!

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Dr. Wily watched his new robot begin to take form as the welding arms and other mechanical devices constructed his project. It had been two days since Megaman was captured, and everything was going swimmingly. He often led attacks on different parts of the world, and Megaman couldn't do a thing. "If this continues, the world will be mine!" thought Dr. Wily "And I'll no longer need Bass. Megaman is mine and my newest project will soon be complete. There's nothing to worry about now."

Dr. Wily sat down and let his mind drift. It was his dream come true. He had nothing to worry about now. With Megaman out of the way and my new project almost complete, I wouldn't need Bass anymore. He was powerful, but not powerful enough. He was gullible too. He remembered when he fooled him when he tested Kings power. His mind drifted to what happened when Bass blew up his ship. He also remembered regretfully how his plans were destroyed by...

Protoman "Protoman!" he said aloud. He had completely forgotten about him. He was still out there! He could- Dr. Wily yelled for Bass. Bass entered the lab stretching and yawning. "What do you want now Dr. Wily?" he asked "I need to recharge." "Never mind that, I want you to guard Megaman's cell now!" Bass groaned "Please Wily, He's no threat to us. Have some of your men guard it." "No I want you!" said Dr. Wily. Bass reluctantly obeyed, he could recharge on his own.

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Megaman lay in the darkness of his cell. He could barely move thanks to Bass. He was despairing constantly, wishing for some kind of help. If he could kill Wily... oh no. He had given himself up for his dog. Besides even if he wanted to, he couldn't. His recharge system wasn't working right. He just rolled over face down and sighed. He wished there was something he could do.

He lay for hours there, and while he lay, he slept. He dreamed a terrible dream. The whole world was ruled by Dr. Wily. Dr. Light was dead and everyone was under his power. Dr. Wily controlled everything concerning everyone. People had to pay tribute to him and left little for themselves. Rebellion rose once or twice, but to no avail. A large red robot on the other hand, was fighting against the bad guys, who didn't look like an average Wily bot, but he kept crushing them. He tried to get the image clear in his mind, was it... Protoman? It couldn't be, it was different..." Protoman. He said it in his sleep, then woke up. Protoman? Of course! Protoman could help him, but if he wanted to, why hadn't he come earlier? He fell back to sleep.

Then, as if in answer to a prayer, there was a whistle. A sound that penetrated the darkness. Protoman teleported in and looked at Megaman. He said nothing but left a box on the floor and blew his whistle once again. Megaman woke up, but Protoman had already left. He saw the box and mustering all his strength, lifted himself up and opened the box.

Inside was an energy can! He took it out of the box and absorbed all of it's energy. He felt 10 times better. He stood up and looked at what else was in the box. He reached in and took out something bulky. It was the Mega Buster! he quickly strapped it on and felt his spirits return. Now he was armed! He looked and saw nothing left in the box but a piece of paper. He picked it up and read it.

Megaman. Don't lose your spirits. The world depends on you and you alone. I've left you with these things to help you escape. Beware Dr. Wily's new project. It's twice as powerful as Bass is and can't be dealt with alone. Dr. Light is doing everything he can to find out what Dr. Wily is up to. I will try to help you. Roll was my sister just as much as she was yours and I'm not going to let the rest of Dr. Wily's crimes go unpunished.

By the way Megaman, I think you should scratch that "was" out because... Megaman

Roll is alive!