Silvers: ;; I got impatient, heheh.
Shadow: For those that lack a working brain, or don't have an ounce of common sense, I am a guy, and proud of it.
Silvers: Dreadfully proud.
Shadow: -so don't you dare get the gender confused, or, or…
Disclaimer: Yu-gi-oh: twisted anime, even more warped by the English version (so I've heard). Painfully long battle scenes. As a manga, decent as far as I've seen. But why would I want to own it?
Take me with you -
somewhere away from this drifting,
.....anywhere..............................fading
But even I am fading away from you
........................drifting
Hold me…
..........Anchor me…
Confirm to me that I'm still here.
Hating to be drifting – out of your grasp.
........................fading
And now I'm wondering – would you even miss me?
Should I cease this (useless) struggling?
Because, truly, who would really miss me?
Would you remember who I am, who I was…
Or would you forget upon this fading memory, …. of me.
Slowly, here I am - I'm fading,
.....Out of time...
..............Out of sync…
.......................Out of life itself…
Quickly, please come here and rescue,
This last lingering bit of me.
Shadow: or… What was I talking about?
Silvers: u.u;;; an easily distracted mind, this one has.
Shadow: is frusterated How do you make threats?!
I have to admit, I think I've outdone myself with this part. I'm terribly proud of it, despite it being the most melancholy portion of the poem.
Xx There doesn't seem to be a real plot line… sorry peoples! I'll try to incorporate some kind of story later.
And now, the responses!
violet-dreaming- LONG REVEIWS ARE GOOD! Most of my poems have been darkish as of late. You're just going to have to bear it, and repost that story of yours pronto! – or I'll start emailing you like crazy :P
starlit jewel – You finally reviewed! Disclaimer translation: If I could (own it), I would (own it), but I can't (own it). Shadow: How could you ever forget that I am a guy?!
Dark Magician Girl / Hikaru - Lots of people seem to like Ryou, and lots of people seem to like to see him get hurt… haha, poor Ryou.
Thank yee all for reviewing and have a "Happy" Christmas as Ryou would say!
Note: just refinished it. Ignore the ...s those imply spaces