A/N, I know the first chapter was kind of crappy but I'm going ahead with the story.
Chapter 2, The Dream
Dream Sequence,
The bridge around him smelled of burning insolation and plastic. Commander Harold Potter sat at the command of the Light Cruiser Ignius. His eyes were glued to his plot as his ship was running for the hyper limit.
He could see his mother's and father's ships. Each were Super Dreadnoughts. Fully armed and operation ships of the wall. However there was only four allied ships of the wall facing 30. His eyes squinted closed as he looked up at the main plot enhancing it. The Super Dreadnought his father commanded shuttered slightly as it was hit with no less then 56 capitol missiles. It looked for a moment like the ship would simply shrug it off, until nearly the direct middle of the ship buckled and the ship was enveloped in an eye tearing explosion of a fusion bottle letting go.
His mother's ship wasn't too far from him and they both began running aswell as the rest of the fleet. Admiral Johansen had given the order to retreat before his flagship disintegrated under the pounding fire.
Enemy ships were on they're path and he watched as his mother's ship broke off and turned to present broadsides to the enemies vessel's. Not one single person on that bridge misunderstood what was going on. His mother's ship was sacrificing her ship to delay the enemy. Not too soon after his mother's ship disappeared in another eye tearing explosion identical to the one that destroyed his father's command.
The light cruiser was inching away from the destruction behind it when four nastily large predators opened up very eager eyes to see fresh prey. The four enemy battlecruisers came fully online.
The predators had perfectly predicted they're enemies escape plan and came out from under they're stealthy shielding. It was all but impossible for a single light cruiser to survive however Harry felt himself issuing commands. His small command raced forward to near suicidal ranges firing missiles and then rolling up to present the belly of its wedge.
Soon the first battle cruiser disappeared in an explosion. Not too long after a second followed suit. A third one was lamed horribly it's impellers flexing and dying to cut it's velocity too nothing.
The demonic light cruiser swung about it's missile's and graser's piercing the fourth Battle cruiser's armor. However the small Light Cruiser wasn't invincible and it shuttered under the pounding of the final enemy cruiser. The third added it's own weight to the fire. The fourth Battle cruiser disappeared in an explosion and just for a moment the Zanzibar system had a second star.
At the same time a pair of missiles got through Ignius' Point defense. The cruiser split in half as the fire sliced through it's middle. Three quarters of the crew died there instantly. The tiny light cruiser finally ceased it's motion. Just when everything looked dim the final Super Dreadnought under the command of Rubeus Hagrid swooped down destroying the third Battle Cruiser. It moored alongside the maimed light Cruiser and 276 people including a nearly dead Harold James Potter disembarked from the Light Cruiser as the fusion bottle finally failed an the ship disintegrated.
End of Dream Sequence
A/N Well, there it is. The second chapter. Of course isn't working for me so I suppose I'll simply have to wait to post it.