First I would like to state:
I'm terribly sorry, but I was grounded, and then I had major writers block. XX Yeah... ouch. And that's not even the top of the cake. I found out that someone actually STOLE this story. Thanks to Lynda for telling me so I inform the owner of FD dot Net and get back my FF.
Anyways, yeah I'm sorry. But umm only a few more chapters left. Let's see if we can get to at least 70 reviews ne?
Also:
To everyone who said OacYou:
Sorry but you forgot that little scene the beginning of the game. It goes like this:
"Sorry, but everyone thought OUI were a fiend."
"Oui?"
"Oui means you."
"Oh..."
Sorry my dears.
REVIEWS:
Nonkisaru- Lol sure I don't mind.
Joshua Lee- Lol...Wow...thanks, I'm flattered. ::Grins:: You really think so?
Marie9000- I updated, now you have to! ::wink::
Legata: Sorry dears, but your translation guide is wrong. Oac means yes. Oui means you, maybe you're confusing Al Bhed with French, ne?
KingKazul- You want me to update or not? ::Raises eyebrow:: I'm upset enough with this story track.... but thanks for the CC instead of the flame. XX
Mish-Yuna: ::Sees that it's actually Cid in costume....Sweat-drops:: Eh...hehehehehe... U .
Era- ::eye twitches:: Wow... I didn't know a review could BE that long... sheesh... I LOVE IT!! OH YEAH!!! ::Does boogey woogey dance!::
Lol...hehe... anyway, I'm continuing with this now...the full scene will be on AFF dot Net soon. I'll have the link in my Profile at some point.
Lustful Gaze
Light
Rikku moaned, caught between the slight pain of the spell and the enormous pleasure that was Auron. Both of their breathing was erratic.
Neither said anything about it, but Rikku simply gripped him to her as tight as she could until her nails dug into his arm and she had to bite down on his shoulder to keep from screaming.
In response to the bite Auron groaned and kissed the pulse in her neck.
----(Full Scene AFF)----
Tidus walked slowly, cautious as to what may be down there. They'd heard haunting noises all the way down, and they'd been wandering around a bit for half an hour.
They'd barely come in contact with any fiends, but the few that they did come across were strong enough that they didn't have any potions left.
Yuna kept having to heal them, Wakka seemed the worse though. And they both had to pretend they didn't notice the way Lulu and Wakka would keep looking at each other.
Kimahri was currently leading the group, when suddenly he stopped and sniffed the air.
Tidus and the others looked around, expecting to see the others or a fiend but were then shocked out of it when Kimahri turned and headed down a side tunnel and, thankfully, away from what sounded like ghosts.
Kimahri knew very well what was going on, he could smell it... so he decided to repay Rikku by leading them in circles for a bit. Rikku taught him Al Bhed, and so he would let her...
He slowed his pace to a little bit of a walk and when Yuna questioned him he said simply. "Wrong way."
It wasn't actually a lie...
After all he meant they were going the wrong way... now not that they were then.
Sorry for the shortness, but I'm not completely over the Writer's Block.
::Shudders:: I'll do what I can....
The Dark Huntress Cara