Ch1 rated pg13
LordD: well this is my first attempt at a jak and daxter fanfic well enjoy warped!!!!! And review this plea and tell me how I can improve!
Disclaimer I do not own any of the jak and daxter series
It all starts after the war……..
Jak and daxter walk in naughty Ottsel
"To the hero's" ashlin yelled from the table. "How was the battle?" Tess said
"Well there I was, surrounded by the biggest badest kg death bots and dark makers, I pull out a blaster and when the dust cleared ….." Daxter said
"What happened next?" Tess asked
"I woke up" daxter said with a confused look on his face.
"Jak probably knows what REALY happened". Torn said downing another bottle of jack
Danels
"Well…….." jak started
Just then a big bang, jak pulls out the blaster and slowly moves out side...
"Alright jak don't take another step" Sig yelled aiming his peas maker at jak
"What the hell are you doing?" jak asked lowering his blaster
"Taking charge I'm going to turn this rat-hole town" Sig said
"What?! You don't want to do that" jak said
"Why not? If I don't report to sragus in 12 hours there going to send an army" Sig said smirking a little
"Shit I thought I could at least get 1 week vacation" jak said aiming his blaster at Sig
"Nope I came to warn and destroy you and the underground" Sig said
Just then Jak shoots Sig in the forehead jak runs inside and tells every one what happened
"We have to warn the city" Tess said. "We need an army" ashlin said "no we can stop them" jak said