Heyyyyyyyyyy!! Sorry for not updating sooner!! I'm getting really lazy ^__^
Meh, I've decided to add a little action in this chapter cause there isn't
any in the others. We finally got our first flamer (that's not the reason
for our long update). I'm so weird, I've been checking my e-mail everyday
to see if one finally reviewed our story and finally, one did. Hehe, I
needed some critism, anyways, enjoy the chapter~
Yasha- wow, ur our first flamer!! That was a long review!! Thnks for taking the time to go through the chapter and telling me about all the little details I missed. Anyways, here's some replies to some of your comments. The 'fangirl crap'? as u called it?? I think it's pretty much out in the other chapters. I don't know how to italicize or bold (but even if I do know, I'd be too lazy too). My friend pointed out the excessive punctuation to me too, so don't think I don't know that. I know Japanese is very hard to learn, I'm not that stupid. I know there's no such thing as 'tanakana' its katakana. Sorry for the spelling mistake. I don't really plan to learn Kanji, although I know a little, and I know what the Chinese words mean, even if I don't know how to say it in Japanese since Kanji is really just stolen Chinese words (no offense to you Japanese ppl) and I can't really buy books and take classes to learn it since if my father finds out I'm learning Japanese in secret, I'll remember to send you an invitation to my funeral. I use both Japanese and English in my fics because it helps me review what I know so far, so it's like an exercise. Let's see, what else did you say? Oh yeah, there's such thing as fanrape? O.o, but I can see your point. I'll try to keep the characters in character from now on. Notice keyword TRY. Now you've completely stumped me on my songfics. Just one question, if you don't like fanfics lyk that, y do u even bother reading them?? Meh, this is really long and I tried not to be really harsh. Anyways, thnks for the review!!
Yaoi-fanatic~ thnk u!! Enjoy this chapter!!
Akira yaida~ Really?? Thnk you!! Sorry this chapter isn't long but I promise I'll make the next one longer!! Promise!!!! Lily: Grr.... narusasu pairing
Kuroi Kitsune~ it's ok, thnks!! Sorry for the late update!!
Chibi-Mariah~ u do?!? LOL!! Sorry for the long update!! Ben feeling very lazy ^__^
Watermelon Gal~ lol!! sry this chapter doesn't really much humor, but it has some action, hehe ^__^ LOL!!
Rose~ u do?? Hehe ^__^ okk, I'll think about that idea
Chelws-Dawg~ lol!! thnks!!
C.M aeris queen of insanity~ lol!! thnks for the review!!!
Yuki-chan2~ yes he is!! Lol, I didn't know that either!! Okk, I'll think about that
Tiinka~ okk, nice idea, I'll do that too, thnks!! Lily: heyy!! You just gave me a great idea!! "whispers to Kodoku" thnks!!
Yumi-sama~ okk, we'll think about that too!!
Karu-san~ u do?!?!?! Yay!!!1
A Sakura Tree And A Rose~ okk, thnks!!!
Firess Ifrit Devil~ hehe, thnks!! U'll draw one?!?!?! Sugoi!!! If u do, can we see it?? thnks!!!
Foamy and Foolproof~ here's the next chapter!! Sry for the long update!!
Sailor Book/Water Mistress~ hehe, here's the next chapter!!!
Pretendingtobeinsane~ will u kill me now?? Eep!!
Chapter 11~Finally, some action!!
"What did Kakashi-sensei say about Sora-chan??" the blond asked for the millionth time. Sasuke was just about ready to drive Chidori into that yapping mouth of his and permanently shut up the idiot.
"Why do you care?" the dark haired boy asked through gritted teeth.
"Because I do." Naruto sang in that annoying voice of his. Sasuke flexed his fingers, trying to resist the urge to strangle his rival.
"Why?"
"Because."
"Why?"
"Because."
"Why?"
"Because."
"Why?"
"Because."
"Wh-I give up."
"Haha!! I beat you, Uchiha!!!" Naruto pointed at him in triumph, "You can't hold out for the record, can you?? Huh? Huh?? Can you??"
"I can, but I don't feel like wasting anymore time with you." Sasuke rolled his eyes and stared out the window at the swirling sandstorm outside. Naruto stuck out his tongue and pulled one eyelid down at the back of the boy's head.
"This is boring." The blond remarked 2 minutes later. Sasuke, who had his eyes closed, cracked one eye opened to stare at him.
"Then go do something." He answered, in a monotone voice.
"Do what??" Naruto asked.
"Something."
"Something like what??"
"Why are you asking me??"
"You're the genius here, stupid!!"
"And you're calling me stupid?"
"Hai..."
"But you admitted I was the genius here, so that makes me the smarter one here." Sasuke flashed him a smirk of triumph. Wheels turned as Naruto realized what he said.
"Teme!!!! Damn you!!!!" he yelled and sat down next to his rival, huffing. Sasuke rolled his eyes and returned his gaze back to the window.
"Sasuke." The blond suddenly said. The dark haired boy turned to him in question. But, Naruto wasn't looking at him. The bright blue eyes were fixed in the opposite direction. "Uchiha Sasuke."
"I'm right over here, moron." He said to his rival.
"Uchiha Sasuke!!" Naruto pointed to the direction he was looking at. Sasuke sighed at looked up to see what made his blood run cold.
There was Itachi. But not only Itachi. There seemed to be group of Anbu- leveled ninjas who were standing behind him, hands on their weapons, ready for directions.
"What the hell?" Sasuke stared blankly at his older brother. "What're the Anbu for, Itachi??" Naruto turned around and stared at his rival as though he had just realized he was there.
"Sasuke!!!" the blond pointed at him, and then turned to the older Uchiha. "You too!! Then that means... Sasuke, you cloned yourself!!!"
The room was silent as everyone stared at him with -_-;;; expressions. The howling of the sand winds outside suddenly seemed very loud.
"Idiot." The dark haired Chuunin growled under his breath, vein popping, "Why does your stupidity never fails to amaze me?"
"What do you mean you're amazed by my stupidity?" the blond asked, confused.
"It means, he's surprised at how stupid you are." Itachi spoke up, "And so am I." Naruto shrieked and pointed a quivering finger at the older Uchiha.
"Holy shit, Sasuke!! Your clone talks!!!" he squeaked. Once again, the room was dead silence as everyone in the room gaped at him once more as if he had just sprouted purple antlers.
"Why do people think I'm Sasuke's twin??" Itachi thought aloud in a very irritated tone, "Then again, little otouto is lucky he looks at least half as good as me."
"What the hell is that supposed to mean???" Sasuke glared at his older brother. "I feel very insulted when people say I look like you!!" That hit a nerve.
"I will now permanently shut your mouth up." Itachi snapped his fingers. The Anbu behind him drew their weapons. "As you probably know, I'm working for the Sand Village. They need the Kyuubi, so I'm here to get him and you're a spy, so I'll need to get rid of you."
"I thought you were going to leave me alive so I can avenge our clan and kill you." The younger Uchiha said to his brother.
"Meh, thought it over, thought the idea was crappy," Itachi waved his hand, vaguely. "Actually, no, I'll just leave you alive. I need someone to kill me, and who else besides my little otouto??"
"Er...so... you're going to attack us with all those sharp weapons with high ranked Anbu and yet you're going to leave me alive to kill you? Gee, that sounds comforting." The dark haired Chuunin eyed the polished weapons warily.
"Hai." Itachi waved toward the two Chuunins, "Attack." Swiftly, the Anbu nodded and silently began to advance on Sasuke and Naruto.
"Ah ha!!!" the blond suddenly yelled, stopping everyone in the room, and pointed to the older Uchiha, "You're Uchiha Itachi!!!!"
Silence.
"And it took you THAT long to figure it out??" Sasuke said to his rival, coldly. "You really are an idiot."
"TEME!!! I'm not an idiot, you bastard!!!"
"Like hell you aren't!!!"
"What's that supposed to mean, asshole??"
"We're about to get attacked by HIGH-RANKED ANBU in case you haven't noticed!!"
"Of course I noticed!! I'm not that stupid you know!!"
"...you're not??"
".............."
"..............."
"TEME!!!"
"While you two argue," Itachi said as he watched the two of them ell at each other, "We're going to attack, so it won't be my fault if you guys die."
"What?" both boys turned to him with -_- faces just in time to see the Anbu already a foot in front of them, kantanas in their hands.
"Holy crap!" Sasuke pushed Naruto to the floor and reached into his pouch for a kunai. "Dammit, that was low, Itachi!!!" the younger Uchiha said, focusing his chakra into his Sharingan.
"It was the only way to shut you up." Itachi said, lazily. Sasuke growled as he charged for his brother, forgetting about his rival and brought the knife under handed, aiming for the ribs of his older brother. Blood splattered to the floor.
"Baka." Itachi said as though nothing had happened. He had caught the kunai with his hand so the blade went right through. Sasuke gritted his teeth as he wrenched out his weapon and leapt up in attack.
Meanwhile, Naruto was having a hell of a time trying to take on five Anbus on his own. They were fast, swift, and very unpredictable. There was a large gash already on his head wet with fresh blood and his left cheek was slowly swelling painfully.
"Kuso!!" he swore and put his hands together, using the index finger and his middle finger in a cross, "Kage Bushin No Jutsu!!" Fifteen clones appeared behind him and began to attack the Anbu. But the high classed ninjas were very strong. One punched a clone in the stomach, another threw its shuriken through three of them, another stabbed his kantana into one, one got two of the clones to run into one another, and another threw a big Fuumi Shuriken through the rest of the clones.
"Chikuso!!!" the blond moaned, backing into the wall as the Anbu surrounded and cornered him. He held his kunai in a defensive stance and prepared for the blows.
Itachi sighed as he grabbed his little brother's wrist as it came down and twisted it rather harshly. Sasuke gave a small cry as there was a loud crack, indicating his older brother had broken it.
"Naze?" the older Uchiha kicked his brother in the stomach with such a force, Sasuke crashed into the wall behind him. "Naze?" he asked again as the older Uchiha walked over and kicked the boy's head, "Why are you still weak?"
"Because, dumb ass, I have this stupid mission that's going to take me two weeks also I can't focus on killing you right now." Sasuke coughed out blood and then swung his legs to knock his brother off his feet. Itachi merely stepped back to avoid the attack and bent down next to the boy's ear.
"I know." He whispered, his voice breathy and airy, "So I decided to get you a dress for your mission. You can come pick it up today at anytime."
"WHAT THE HELL?!?!" Sasuke yelled as he slowly got to his feet and wiped a dribble of blood running down from the corner of his mouth.
"I thought it would look really nice on my cross-dressing brother." Itachi continued, "You want to know what it looks like? It's black and has very shor-"
"Oh, just shut up!!" the younger Uchiha snarled as he charged for his brother again, pulling out three shuriken with his left hand as he ran. His right arm hung limply at his side.
"Kage Bushin No Jutsu!!!!" Naruto made his famous Jutsu once again. This time, there were ten more than last time. The blond decided that five should take on each Anbu.
He quickly dodged a punch heading for his left cheek and snarled as he sprang toward the enemy, kunai in hand. It was quickly met with a loud clang as the Anbu he was fighting blocked it with his metal pole.
"An opening!!" growled the ninja as he punched Naruto in the face. The blond flew off and crashed into the wall. The wall splintered and cracked as he made impact on it.
"Itai..." Naruto rubbed the back of his throbbing head. Suddenly, the blond disappeared with a poof. The Anbu stepped back in surprise.
"A clone...?!?!" he thought, when suddenly a fist made impact with the back of his skull. The ninja swung his pole around as the blond flipped back just in time. "Little punk, I know where you are." And threw several shuriken to Naruto who was frozen to the spot, watching in fear as the weapon came closer and closer-
Ahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!! I shall end the chapter now!!! ^__^ I'll try to update sooner, I promise!! Although Lily tells me not to make promises I can't keep -_-;;; anyways, hope u liked that chapter with a lil bit of action!!
Yasha- wow, ur our first flamer!! That was a long review!! Thnks for taking the time to go through the chapter and telling me about all the little details I missed. Anyways, here's some replies to some of your comments. The 'fangirl crap'? as u called it?? I think it's pretty much out in the other chapters. I don't know how to italicize or bold (but even if I do know, I'd be too lazy too). My friend pointed out the excessive punctuation to me too, so don't think I don't know that. I know Japanese is very hard to learn, I'm not that stupid. I know there's no such thing as 'tanakana' its katakana. Sorry for the spelling mistake. I don't really plan to learn Kanji, although I know a little, and I know what the Chinese words mean, even if I don't know how to say it in Japanese since Kanji is really just stolen Chinese words (no offense to you Japanese ppl) and I can't really buy books and take classes to learn it since if my father finds out I'm learning Japanese in secret, I'll remember to send you an invitation to my funeral. I use both Japanese and English in my fics because it helps me review what I know so far, so it's like an exercise. Let's see, what else did you say? Oh yeah, there's such thing as fanrape? O.o, but I can see your point. I'll try to keep the characters in character from now on. Notice keyword TRY. Now you've completely stumped me on my songfics. Just one question, if you don't like fanfics lyk that, y do u even bother reading them?? Meh, this is really long and I tried not to be really harsh. Anyways, thnks for the review!!
Yaoi-fanatic~ thnk u!! Enjoy this chapter!!
Akira yaida~ Really?? Thnk you!! Sorry this chapter isn't long but I promise I'll make the next one longer!! Promise!!!! Lily: Grr.... narusasu pairing
Kuroi Kitsune~ it's ok, thnks!! Sorry for the late update!!
Chibi-Mariah~ u do?!? LOL!! Sorry for the long update!! Ben feeling very lazy ^__^
Watermelon Gal~ lol!! sry this chapter doesn't really much humor, but it has some action, hehe ^__^ LOL!!
Rose~ u do?? Hehe ^__^ okk, I'll think about that idea
Chelws-Dawg~ lol!! thnks!!
C.M aeris queen of insanity~ lol!! thnks for the review!!!
Yuki-chan2~ yes he is!! Lol, I didn't know that either!! Okk, I'll think about that
Tiinka~ okk, nice idea, I'll do that too, thnks!! Lily: heyy!! You just gave me a great idea!! "whispers to Kodoku" thnks!!
Yumi-sama~ okk, we'll think about that too!!
Karu-san~ u do?!?!?! Yay!!!1
A Sakura Tree And A Rose~ okk, thnks!!!
Firess Ifrit Devil~ hehe, thnks!! U'll draw one?!?!?! Sugoi!!! If u do, can we see it?? thnks!!!
Foamy and Foolproof~ here's the next chapter!! Sry for the long update!!
Sailor Book/Water Mistress~ hehe, here's the next chapter!!!
Pretendingtobeinsane~ will u kill me now?? Eep!!
Chapter 11~Finally, some action!!
"What did Kakashi-sensei say about Sora-chan??" the blond asked for the millionth time. Sasuke was just about ready to drive Chidori into that yapping mouth of his and permanently shut up the idiot.
"Why do you care?" the dark haired boy asked through gritted teeth.
"Because I do." Naruto sang in that annoying voice of his. Sasuke flexed his fingers, trying to resist the urge to strangle his rival.
"Why?"
"Because."
"Why?"
"Because."
"Why?"
"Because."
"Why?"
"Because."
"Wh-I give up."
"Haha!! I beat you, Uchiha!!!" Naruto pointed at him in triumph, "You can't hold out for the record, can you?? Huh? Huh?? Can you??"
"I can, but I don't feel like wasting anymore time with you." Sasuke rolled his eyes and stared out the window at the swirling sandstorm outside. Naruto stuck out his tongue and pulled one eyelid down at the back of the boy's head.
"This is boring." The blond remarked 2 minutes later. Sasuke, who had his eyes closed, cracked one eye opened to stare at him.
"Then go do something." He answered, in a monotone voice.
"Do what??" Naruto asked.
"Something."
"Something like what??"
"Why are you asking me??"
"You're the genius here, stupid!!"
"And you're calling me stupid?"
"Hai..."
"But you admitted I was the genius here, so that makes me the smarter one here." Sasuke flashed him a smirk of triumph. Wheels turned as Naruto realized what he said.
"Teme!!!! Damn you!!!!" he yelled and sat down next to his rival, huffing. Sasuke rolled his eyes and returned his gaze back to the window.
"Sasuke." The blond suddenly said. The dark haired boy turned to him in question. But, Naruto wasn't looking at him. The bright blue eyes were fixed in the opposite direction. "Uchiha Sasuke."
"I'm right over here, moron." He said to his rival.
"Uchiha Sasuke!!" Naruto pointed to the direction he was looking at. Sasuke sighed at looked up to see what made his blood run cold.
There was Itachi. But not only Itachi. There seemed to be group of Anbu- leveled ninjas who were standing behind him, hands on their weapons, ready for directions.
"What the hell?" Sasuke stared blankly at his older brother. "What're the Anbu for, Itachi??" Naruto turned around and stared at his rival as though he had just realized he was there.
"Sasuke!!!" the blond pointed at him, and then turned to the older Uchiha. "You too!! Then that means... Sasuke, you cloned yourself!!!"
The room was silent as everyone stared at him with -_-;;; expressions. The howling of the sand winds outside suddenly seemed very loud.
"Idiot." The dark haired Chuunin growled under his breath, vein popping, "Why does your stupidity never fails to amaze me?"
"What do you mean you're amazed by my stupidity?" the blond asked, confused.
"It means, he's surprised at how stupid you are." Itachi spoke up, "And so am I." Naruto shrieked and pointed a quivering finger at the older Uchiha.
"Holy shit, Sasuke!! Your clone talks!!!" he squeaked. Once again, the room was dead silence as everyone in the room gaped at him once more as if he had just sprouted purple antlers.
"Why do people think I'm Sasuke's twin??" Itachi thought aloud in a very irritated tone, "Then again, little otouto is lucky he looks at least half as good as me."
"What the hell is that supposed to mean???" Sasuke glared at his older brother. "I feel very insulted when people say I look like you!!" That hit a nerve.
"I will now permanently shut your mouth up." Itachi snapped his fingers. The Anbu behind him drew their weapons. "As you probably know, I'm working for the Sand Village. They need the Kyuubi, so I'm here to get him and you're a spy, so I'll need to get rid of you."
"I thought you were going to leave me alive so I can avenge our clan and kill you." The younger Uchiha said to his brother.
"Meh, thought it over, thought the idea was crappy," Itachi waved his hand, vaguely. "Actually, no, I'll just leave you alive. I need someone to kill me, and who else besides my little otouto??"
"Er...so... you're going to attack us with all those sharp weapons with high ranked Anbu and yet you're going to leave me alive to kill you? Gee, that sounds comforting." The dark haired Chuunin eyed the polished weapons warily.
"Hai." Itachi waved toward the two Chuunins, "Attack." Swiftly, the Anbu nodded and silently began to advance on Sasuke and Naruto.
"Ah ha!!!" the blond suddenly yelled, stopping everyone in the room, and pointed to the older Uchiha, "You're Uchiha Itachi!!!!"
Silence.
"And it took you THAT long to figure it out??" Sasuke said to his rival, coldly. "You really are an idiot."
"TEME!!! I'm not an idiot, you bastard!!!"
"Like hell you aren't!!!"
"What's that supposed to mean, asshole??"
"We're about to get attacked by HIGH-RANKED ANBU in case you haven't noticed!!"
"Of course I noticed!! I'm not that stupid you know!!"
"...you're not??"
".............."
"..............."
"TEME!!!"
"While you two argue," Itachi said as he watched the two of them ell at each other, "We're going to attack, so it won't be my fault if you guys die."
"What?" both boys turned to him with -_- faces just in time to see the Anbu already a foot in front of them, kantanas in their hands.
"Holy crap!" Sasuke pushed Naruto to the floor and reached into his pouch for a kunai. "Dammit, that was low, Itachi!!!" the younger Uchiha said, focusing his chakra into his Sharingan.
"It was the only way to shut you up." Itachi said, lazily. Sasuke growled as he charged for his brother, forgetting about his rival and brought the knife under handed, aiming for the ribs of his older brother. Blood splattered to the floor.
"Baka." Itachi said as though nothing had happened. He had caught the kunai with his hand so the blade went right through. Sasuke gritted his teeth as he wrenched out his weapon and leapt up in attack.
Meanwhile, Naruto was having a hell of a time trying to take on five Anbus on his own. They were fast, swift, and very unpredictable. There was a large gash already on his head wet with fresh blood and his left cheek was slowly swelling painfully.
"Kuso!!" he swore and put his hands together, using the index finger and his middle finger in a cross, "Kage Bushin No Jutsu!!" Fifteen clones appeared behind him and began to attack the Anbu. But the high classed ninjas were very strong. One punched a clone in the stomach, another threw its shuriken through three of them, another stabbed his kantana into one, one got two of the clones to run into one another, and another threw a big Fuumi Shuriken through the rest of the clones.
"Chikuso!!!" the blond moaned, backing into the wall as the Anbu surrounded and cornered him. He held his kunai in a defensive stance and prepared for the blows.
Itachi sighed as he grabbed his little brother's wrist as it came down and twisted it rather harshly. Sasuke gave a small cry as there was a loud crack, indicating his older brother had broken it.
"Naze?" the older Uchiha kicked his brother in the stomach with such a force, Sasuke crashed into the wall behind him. "Naze?" he asked again as the older Uchiha walked over and kicked the boy's head, "Why are you still weak?"
"Because, dumb ass, I have this stupid mission that's going to take me two weeks also I can't focus on killing you right now." Sasuke coughed out blood and then swung his legs to knock his brother off his feet. Itachi merely stepped back to avoid the attack and bent down next to the boy's ear.
"I know." He whispered, his voice breathy and airy, "So I decided to get you a dress for your mission. You can come pick it up today at anytime."
"WHAT THE HELL?!?!" Sasuke yelled as he slowly got to his feet and wiped a dribble of blood running down from the corner of his mouth.
"I thought it would look really nice on my cross-dressing brother." Itachi continued, "You want to know what it looks like? It's black and has very shor-"
"Oh, just shut up!!" the younger Uchiha snarled as he charged for his brother again, pulling out three shuriken with his left hand as he ran. His right arm hung limply at his side.
"Kage Bushin No Jutsu!!!!" Naruto made his famous Jutsu once again. This time, there were ten more than last time. The blond decided that five should take on each Anbu.
He quickly dodged a punch heading for his left cheek and snarled as he sprang toward the enemy, kunai in hand. It was quickly met with a loud clang as the Anbu he was fighting blocked it with his metal pole.
"An opening!!" growled the ninja as he punched Naruto in the face. The blond flew off and crashed into the wall. The wall splintered and cracked as he made impact on it.
"Itai..." Naruto rubbed the back of his throbbing head. Suddenly, the blond disappeared with a poof. The Anbu stepped back in surprise.
"A clone...?!?!" he thought, when suddenly a fist made impact with the back of his skull. The ninja swung his pole around as the blond flipped back just in time. "Little punk, I know where you are." And threw several shuriken to Naruto who was frozen to the spot, watching in fear as the weapon came closer and closer-
Ahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!! I shall end the chapter now!!! ^__^ I'll try to update sooner, I promise!! Although Lily tells me not to make promises I can't keep -_-;;; anyways, hope u liked that chapter with a lil bit of action!!