iHola! I'd just like to say sorry to all my reviewers as I forget to mention them in the last chapter. So I really really am very sorry. And as for this story, well, things are going to start happening soon, so keep reading!
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And now this review I want to share with you all, it's by !.
! 2004-07-23 4 Anonymous
ok if this is a mary-sue it sux...cuz its looking as if it were so yeh...
First of all I want to ask you, did you even read this story? At least once every chapter I make a point of telling everyone that this is not a Mary- Sue. Or did you miss that? Also, you could at least have said why it 'sux', instead of just trailing off. So next time I suggest I think about what you write, before you write it.
Now, onto the story!
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As Zack walked into the lunchroom, Freddy's face lit up. He'd had a bad day, Katie was off sick, he'd forgotten his homework in one, well, both his lessons, and in music class he'd gone mad when for an extra-credit assignment (to make up for forgetting his homework) he had to listen to Britney Spears, Busted and The White Stripes. Consequently, he had detention. Four detentions.
This was what he was halfway through telling Lawrence and Summer when Zack sat down.
"...and then, right, Mr. Guntha gave me two detentions, for both pieces of homework, and I said that my baby sister ate it, so I had to go to hospital, but he didn't believe me, and I've no idea why not-"
"Perhaps because it wasn't true?" The gentle, soft-speaking keyboardist interrupted, tactfully.
"Well, yeah, I know that," said Freddy, dismissing the idea with a wave of his hand. "But I've no idea why not because it was a brilliant excuse, one of my favorite ones, see, along with 'I woke up, got dressed, got my homework, had breakfast and went to school, then realized that I was still in a dream, so I had to wake up properly, then I got dressed, but then Mom made me run for the bus, so I didn't have time to grab my homework.'" He finished, triumphantly.
"Yeah, that's what you said to Julie, isn't it?" asked Lawrence, as he got up and left, to go to extra keyboard practice.
"Julie?" questioned Summer, puzzled.
"Mr. Juliff." replied Freddy, as though it was obvious. "You know, our music teacher?"
"Yeah, I know him!" said Summer, angrily. "But I just don't think that it's right to give teachers nicknames like that! They are authority, we should respect them, they should not be defiled by childish nicknames-"
Then Freddy cut her off.
"So anyway, then I said 'Fine!' and then I went to Music class, and I told Julie" at this point Summer gave an exasperated sigh, but Freddy carried on, "So I told Julie that homework excuse, so he gave me that assignment thingy, and I got really mad, 'cause I said it wasn't even music but it turned out he loves Britney! So he gave me detention, and I told him that I already had two detentions, and explained, so guess what he said!"
"He said that as that was such a good idea, you could have two detentions from him as well." stated Summer, in a bored voice. Freddy looked at her in amazement.
"Well, yeah! How do you know that? You're not in our music class!"
"Because it's exactly what I would have said." explained Summer, then looked up and saw Zack. "Hi, Zack! Come sit down! And who's this you've got with you? You must think I'm awful for not introducing myself! I'm Summer, I'm sure Zack's told you all about me!"
"Yeah, he has!" said Wyverna, brightly. "You seem to be the only sensible one of the group, not that that's a bad thing. I mean, they all seem to rely on you! Without you, they would probably all be separate. You're the backbone, the glue, the manager."
To Freddy it seemed that she was way OTT, but to everyone else, she was an angel, a perfect angel.
"And you organize everyone, don't you? At band practice? Oh, I'd love to see you in action. You're my role model."
At this point Zack interrupted.
"Wouldn't you like to see me at band practice too? I could play you a solo! I could play you my song I've been writing!"
Freddy's jaw dropped. Zack was going to show her the song he'd been writing? When he, Freddy, Zack's ultimate best friend had asked to hear it, Zack had said that no-one was allowed to see it! It was too private! Now here he was offering to show it to this...this devil-spawn, this hell-hound!
He buried his head in his hands, and in doing so managed to completely miss the next bit of the conversation, the bit where Zack and Summer invited the inexhaustible Wyverna to band practice. Yes, her plan was going exactly as planned...
