//--Hey everyone. I didn't get as much reviews as I wanted (again). And
I'm starting to doubt on whether I should continue or not. Not so sure
yet. But then again, there are so many faithful reviewers that keep
reviewing to my story. So this is for you all. lol The song in this
section is Lick by Joi. Download and play it as you're reading for the
total experience heheee. Lol It's perfect for the scene. I figured that I
should take sum time and reply to your reviews. So here I go..lol
losergirl-thank you so much. Reviews like that make me want to continue. And yes, its cool to live in new york. It must be mad hot to live in Hawaii. I would kill to live there. I can only surf in the summer, you have all year. I'm jealous. hehe.
Darkmarkgirl-Yes, I see where you are coming from. I was unsure about Ginny, but you'll see how she comes up in later chapters.
Qiana Elfsong-Thank you for your long and detailed review. I really appreciate ones like that, because they help me to improve my writing. I took your comments into consideration and hope that you see it in this chapter.
Serpent Du Feu--- Thank you for reviewing to all my chapters. I tried to "elaborate" on this chapter for all of you who like it. However, its hard to keep it steamy but not trashy. It's a very fine line that's hard not to cross. I hope that I did a good job.
Becca--- Thanks so much for ur awesome review. U are too nice!! Thanks!!
Btw, Thanks to all of my other reviewers. Hey, if you review, a comment to you just might appear on the next chapter. Hope you all take some time to review. Well, on with the story.
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I felt his lips touch mine, and I jerked back in surprise. This can't be happening.
"Sorry," he said looking down.
"It's ok," I said. This suddenly made me nervous.
"I...uh...I gotta go. I'll see you later about the decorations for the Yule Ball...maybe tomorrow," I said. I got up off of the floor and looked down at him. He looked disappointed.
"Yeah, that's fine," he said.
"Mione? I just want you to know that I'm sorry about what I did before," he added.
"It's...uh...okay. I'm over it. Truce?" I said.
"Yeah, definitely," he replied.
"It's....ok. I'll see you later," I said. I turned around and went back into my bedroom. I sat on top of my bed, and stared at the ceiling. I didn't have much time to get ready, so I ran into the bathroom. I flicked on the light, and stared at my reflection in the mirror. I let my hair and watched the curls fall onto my back. I searched through the draws until I found the stuff that I was going to wear. A black sheer bra, and a pair of black lacy panties. I put a very short sheer black skirt on over it and ran over to the closet. I then put on my black Manolos with the kitten heels. They were perfect. I reached over to the nightstand, and swished on some lip gloss. I said a spell that lit small candles around my room that sent off soft pink golden light around the room.
I shut off the lights, and went back into the bathroom. I once again looked at my reflection. I was basically the same girl that stared into the mirror a year ago. Little had changed. I then realized, that it was the clothes, and the makeup that made you wanted. It wasn't the personality, or the soul that you possessed. I heard someone call my name from inside my room. It must have been Blaise. I took a deep breath, and opened the door to face him.
I saw him standing there, still in his Quidditch uniform. His hair was wild, in a naturally sexy way. His skin glistened in the candlelight from the long practice. There was an innocence but wild side to him that played in to his personality. His eyes brightened from the sight of me in my new outfit.
"Wow. You look...beautiful," He said.
"Thanks. You don't look so bad yourself," I added.
I walked over to him slowly, until I was centimeters away from him. The distance between us was so small I could feel the heat radiating from his body. He touched my bare arm, tracing an imaginary line up and down, sending shivers down my spine. I stared up into his cool blue eyes and watched him look at me. I never knew that silence could be so sweet.
He pulled me closer into a soft and passionate kiss. We fell onto the bed, and kept kissing. I felt his tongue flicker around in my mouth, and it felt warm and safe. Just at that moment was when I realized that I didn't love him. He was just a safety net, a person that I could come to when I was lonely. The passion between us was purely lust, nothing more, and nothing less. But what was I supposed to do? Refuse him? I'd like to see you try. A lick running down my neck jerked me out of my thoughts. Jesus, he knew what to do with a girl.
I lose all control
When you grab a hold
And you do your trick
I love it when you lick......
He then undid the clasp of my bra, and placed sweet butterfly kisses all over my bare chest. He kissed wet, warm, kisses down my stomach and with my eyes closed, I felt him pulling my sheer skirt with my thong down my legs and over my sex kitten heels. I felt him exploring me, feeling me, touching every part of my body. I felt his finger make soft circles inside of me, causing my head to jerk back in a place filled with passion.
You've got lock and key
Every part of me
Know what makes me tick
I love it when you lick...
His tongue flicked in and out of me and I closed my eyes in total and complete bliss. He was taking over me; touch by touch, kiss by kiss.
It feels so good I'm going crazy
My eyes roll back inside my head
Explore my inner warmths of pleasure
And hold on tight
Hope you aint scared
I promise I'll return the favor
I'll do that trick you can't resist
Two rights don't make it wrong
Makin' love 'till the break of dawn
Emotions all up in a twist---twist---twist---twist....
I wiggled out of his grasp and he was surprised by this. I got on top of him and licked the side of his neck. He let out a soft growl as I nibbled softly on his ear. I kissed all the way down his muscle ridden body and saw him bite his lip as I jerked him off.
I'll put my heels on for you baby
The ones that wrap all around my leg
Your every touch excites me
And damnit I aint too proud to beg
And even when you're not around me
The tingling just won't go away
Don't make my body wait no longer
Because this pussycat's ready to play--- play--- play--- play ---play.....
We just kept kissing, in a world where time stopped, where nothing mattered, where it was just him and I.
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(A/N..I figured that I would shake things up and do something different. So I decided to do this next section in Draco's point of view. I hope that you all like this. Ps- the song in this section is Things Don't Always Turn Out That Way-by The Calling.)
I was laying in my bed staring at the ceiling for the longest time, deep in thought. Why was that Hermione getting to me? She never had before. Maybe it was the fact that she played me. Wake the fuck up, Draco. She played you. Did something that no other woman had ever attempted to do before. She had attempted the impossible and succeeded. She got one up on you. But I sort of deserved it. I was a prat to her, but what are you going to do about it? I can't help it, being tortured by that fuck of a father, always on the defense.
But before she seemed so understanding, and she also seemed honest. Honesty is a quality in people that I surprisingly value, because it's so rare to find. Not many people know it, but I do. My father being a Death Eater, lies were all around me. All my god damned life. He always had a fucking excuse for where he was, what he was doing, and who he was with.
Mione seemed so honest, there was a truth to her. Why the hell did I just call her Mione? Now I have a nickname for the girl I used to hate. You fucker, you can't be serious.I decided to stop being such a pussy and go after what I wanted. Or at least to tell her that we should be friends or something. I was so fucking nervous it was sick. Why the hell was I, Draco Malfoy, nervous over a stupid mudblood. We'll she didn't look so dirty anymore.
So I got up and stared in the mirror. I hadn't changed much since the first day of school so many years ago. I still had the white blonde hair, the pale skin, and the silver blue eyes. Ugh. I took a deep breath and opened the door and started walking to her room. I made my way towards her room, growing more nervous with every step. I had never been this nervous before in my life.
I got to her room, and noticed that the door was open a crack. I looked in slowly, just peeking my head in. My face was hidden by the pitch black hallway, but some light was shining on me from the candles all around. I saw her curly caramel brown hair falling at her shoulders, and her eyes closed. She looked so angelic and pure.
Then her eyes opened and she moaned. What the fuck was going on? A blonde head came up from the covers, but his face was hidden. He kissed her, and I could tell that they both were naked. Very naked. The face turned, and when I saw who it was, my heart dropped. It was Blaise fucking Zabini. My fucking cousin. Since when did he and Hermione start this shit?! Seeing her with him was so nauseating. I saw him kiss her neck, and her jerk back from his touch. Every time he kissed her, touched her, I wanted to be the one with her.
I growled from the anger swelling inside and had to hold myself back from going in there and kicking the shit out of him. But, it wasn't my place. She was his for that moment. She's not yours Draco, you stupid ass.
I walked back to my room and sat on my bed with my head in my hands. I lost. I fucking lost her. To my god damned cousin. Ugh.
This fucking sucked. I trusted him, told him of me wanting her, asked him his opinion about if I should go for her. He told me that I should, that she would probably want me. The bastard lied to me. So much for fucking family.
Well he can't sleep at night
And he can't do what's right
It was all because she came into his life
it's a deep obsession, taking up his time
She's all that he wants, she's all that he needs
She's everything he just won't believe
Take away his doubt, turn him inside out
Then she can see what he's been dying to say
But things don't always turn out that way......
I walked over to the window and stared out at the night sky. Outside it was so calm and peaceful, but a storm was brewing inside of me. And for the first time in my life, I wondered if it was worth living.
//----I hope that you all liked this chapter. Please, please, please review. It means a lot to me. Any questions you have, just put them in the review and I'll answer it in the next chapter. Remember, if you review, you might just get a shout out at the beginning of the next chapter. So review! Pretty pretty please! And also, thank you to my beta reader, seanbs-gurl. You do an amazing job. Hey, you'll notice the parts I added without you beta'ing. I just did it on a whim. Hope you aren't mad lol. Ok, well please review. Thanks.
xoxo,
Tinkerbelle
losergirl-thank you so much. Reviews like that make me want to continue. And yes, its cool to live in new york. It must be mad hot to live in Hawaii. I would kill to live there. I can only surf in the summer, you have all year. I'm jealous. hehe.
Darkmarkgirl-Yes, I see where you are coming from. I was unsure about Ginny, but you'll see how she comes up in later chapters.
Qiana Elfsong-Thank you for your long and detailed review. I really appreciate ones like that, because they help me to improve my writing. I took your comments into consideration and hope that you see it in this chapter.
Serpent Du Feu--- Thank you for reviewing to all my chapters. I tried to "elaborate" on this chapter for all of you who like it. However, its hard to keep it steamy but not trashy. It's a very fine line that's hard not to cross. I hope that I did a good job.
Becca--- Thanks so much for ur awesome review. U are too nice!! Thanks!!
Btw, Thanks to all of my other reviewers. Hey, if you review, a comment to you just might appear on the next chapter. Hope you all take some time to review. Well, on with the story.
/*/*/*/*/*/
I felt his lips touch mine, and I jerked back in surprise. This can't be happening.
"Sorry," he said looking down.
"It's ok," I said. This suddenly made me nervous.
"I...uh...I gotta go. I'll see you later about the decorations for the Yule Ball...maybe tomorrow," I said. I got up off of the floor and looked down at him. He looked disappointed.
"Yeah, that's fine," he said.
"Mione? I just want you to know that I'm sorry about what I did before," he added.
"It's...uh...okay. I'm over it. Truce?" I said.
"Yeah, definitely," he replied.
"It's....ok. I'll see you later," I said. I turned around and went back into my bedroom. I sat on top of my bed, and stared at the ceiling. I didn't have much time to get ready, so I ran into the bathroom. I flicked on the light, and stared at my reflection in the mirror. I let my hair and watched the curls fall onto my back. I searched through the draws until I found the stuff that I was going to wear. A black sheer bra, and a pair of black lacy panties. I put a very short sheer black skirt on over it and ran over to the closet. I then put on my black Manolos with the kitten heels. They were perfect. I reached over to the nightstand, and swished on some lip gloss. I said a spell that lit small candles around my room that sent off soft pink golden light around the room.
I shut off the lights, and went back into the bathroom. I once again looked at my reflection. I was basically the same girl that stared into the mirror a year ago. Little had changed. I then realized, that it was the clothes, and the makeup that made you wanted. It wasn't the personality, or the soul that you possessed. I heard someone call my name from inside my room. It must have been Blaise. I took a deep breath, and opened the door to face him.
I saw him standing there, still in his Quidditch uniform. His hair was wild, in a naturally sexy way. His skin glistened in the candlelight from the long practice. There was an innocence but wild side to him that played in to his personality. His eyes brightened from the sight of me in my new outfit.
"Wow. You look...beautiful," He said.
"Thanks. You don't look so bad yourself," I added.
I walked over to him slowly, until I was centimeters away from him. The distance between us was so small I could feel the heat radiating from his body. He touched my bare arm, tracing an imaginary line up and down, sending shivers down my spine. I stared up into his cool blue eyes and watched him look at me. I never knew that silence could be so sweet.
He pulled me closer into a soft and passionate kiss. We fell onto the bed, and kept kissing. I felt his tongue flicker around in my mouth, and it felt warm and safe. Just at that moment was when I realized that I didn't love him. He was just a safety net, a person that I could come to when I was lonely. The passion between us was purely lust, nothing more, and nothing less. But what was I supposed to do? Refuse him? I'd like to see you try. A lick running down my neck jerked me out of my thoughts. Jesus, he knew what to do with a girl.
I lose all control
When you grab a hold
And you do your trick
I love it when you lick......
He then undid the clasp of my bra, and placed sweet butterfly kisses all over my bare chest. He kissed wet, warm, kisses down my stomach and with my eyes closed, I felt him pulling my sheer skirt with my thong down my legs and over my sex kitten heels. I felt him exploring me, feeling me, touching every part of my body. I felt his finger make soft circles inside of me, causing my head to jerk back in a place filled with passion.
You've got lock and key
Every part of me
Know what makes me tick
I love it when you lick...
His tongue flicked in and out of me and I closed my eyes in total and complete bliss. He was taking over me; touch by touch, kiss by kiss.
It feels so good I'm going crazy
My eyes roll back inside my head
Explore my inner warmths of pleasure
And hold on tight
Hope you aint scared
I promise I'll return the favor
I'll do that trick you can't resist
Two rights don't make it wrong
Makin' love 'till the break of dawn
Emotions all up in a twist---twist---twist---twist....
I wiggled out of his grasp and he was surprised by this. I got on top of him and licked the side of his neck. He let out a soft growl as I nibbled softly on his ear. I kissed all the way down his muscle ridden body and saw him bite his lip as I jerked him off.
I'll put my heels on for you baby
The ones that wrap all around my leg
Your every touch excites me
And damnit I aint too proud to beg
And even when you're not around me
The tingling just won't go away
Don't make my body wait no longer
Because this pussycat's ready to play--- play--- play--- play ---play.....
We just kept kissing, in a world where time stopped, where nothing mattered, where it was just him and I.
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(A/N..I figured that I would shake things up and do something different. So I decided to do this next section in Draco's point of view. I hope that you all like this. Ps- the song in this section is Things Don't Always Turn Out That Way-by The Calling.)
I was laying in my bed staring at the ceiling for the longest time, deep in thought. Why was that Hermione getting to me? She never had before. Maybe it was the fact that she played me. Wake the fuck up, Draco. She played you. Did something that no other woman had ever attempted to do before. She had attempted the impossible and succeeded. She got one up on you. But I sort of deserved it. I was a prat to her, but what are you going to do about it? I can't help it, being tortured by that fuck of a father, always on the defense.
But before she seemed so understanding, and she also seemed honest. Honesty is a quality in people that I surprisingly value, because it's so rare to find. Not many people know it, but I do. My father being a Death Eater, lies were all around me. All my god damned life. He always had a fucking excuse for where he was, what he was doing, and who he was with.
Mione seemed so honest, there was a truth to her. Why the hell did I just call her Mione? Now I have a nickname for the girl I used to hate. You fucker, you can't be serious.I decided to stop being such a pussy and go after what I wanted. Or at least to tell her that we should be friends or something. I was so fucking nervous it was sick. Why the hell was I, Draco Malfoy, nervous over a stupid mudblood. We'll she didn't look so dirty anymore.
So I got up and stared in the mirror. I hadn't changed much since the first day of school so many years ago. I still had the white blonde hair, the pale skin, and the silver blue eyes. Ugh. I took a deep breath and opened the door and started walking to her room. I made my way towards her room, growing more nervous with every step. I had never been this nervous before in my life.
I got to her room, and noticed that the door was open a crack. I looked in slowly, just peeking my head in. My face was hidden by the pitch black hallway, but some light was shining on me from the candles all around. I saw her curly caramel brown hair falling at her shoulders, and her eyes closed. She looked so angelic and pure.
Then her eyes opened and she moaned. What the fuck was going on? A blonde head came up from the covers, but his face was hidden. He kissed her, and I could tell that they both were naked. Very naked. The face turned, and when I saw who it was, my heart dropped. It was Blaise fucking Zabini. My fucking cousin. Since when did he and Hermione start this shit?! Seeing her with him was so nauseating. I saw him kiss her neck, and her jerk back from his touch. Every time he kissed her, touched her, I wanted to be the one with her.
I growled from the anger swelling inside and had to hold myself back from going in there and kicking the shit out of him. But, it wasn't my place. She was his for that moment. She's not yours Draco, you stupid ass.
I walked back to my room and sat on my bed with my head in my hands. I lost. I fucking lost her. To my god damned cousin. Ugh.
This fucking sucked. I trusted him, told him of me wanting her, asked him his opinion about if I should go for her. He told me that I should, that she would probably want me. The bastard lied to me. So much for fucking family.
Well he can't sleep at night
And he can't do what's right
It was all because she came into his life
it's a deep obsession, taking up his time
She's all that he wants, she's all that he needs
She's everything he just won't believe
Take away his doubt, turn him inside out
Then she can see what he's been dying to say
But things don't always turn out that way......
I walked over to the window and stared out at the night sky. Outside it was so calm and peaceful, but a storm was brewing inside of me. And for the first time in my life, I wondered if it was worth living.
//----I hope that you all liked this chapter. Please, please, please review. It means a lot to me. Any questions you have, just put them in the review and I'll answer it in the next chapter. Remember, if you review, you might just get a shout out at the beginning of the next chapter. So review! Pretty pretty please! And also, thank you to my beta reader, seanbs-gurl. You do an amazing job. Hey, you'll notice the parts I added without you beta'ing. I just did it on a whim. Hope you aren't mad lol. Ok, well please review. Thanks.
xoxo,
Tinkerbelle