Repreview: Ok. Hiei has gone to help Kurama and Gouki fight the guard ogres. He and Kitty have confessed true love for each other. Will that bond be broken? That question and many of my other stupid ones will be answered in this next chapter of:


YU YU HAKUSHO REVISED

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*Editor's Note- you probably read the last chap and said " God this thing is gettin soooo SAPPY!! This fic reflects my feelings on the days that I write them. I was feeling romantic yesterday so I wrote sappy. I'm feeling a bit sappy and mad today. So look for both feelings in this chap! :p *

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"Ok. Now how did Hiei open this thing?" Kitty said to herself as she reached where the portal was located. She could hear Hiei, Kurama, and Gouki fighting.


" I think that he stood like this....and pressed this stone on the wall . . . next he mumbled the words 'Open, Open We need a passage home'" Kitty was whispering to herself. The portal opened and revealed the sparkling blue light tunnel.


" Hi whatcha doing?" a voice said from behind Kitty. She jumped up and turned around. Her hair was standing on end as she swiped out her extended claws behind her.


She grazed Yusuke who was floating behind her. " What the hell are you doing here, bastard?" she said as she retracted her razor sharp claws.


" Oww . . . you bitch! That hurt! You better watch out where you throw those claws around! I was just wondering what you were doing." Yusuke said nursing a scratch wound on his left hand.


" Don't sneak up behind me like that or you're gonna get cut into shreds." Kitty said, her eyes glaring at Yusuke.


" My name is Yusuke. I'm dead. How are you?" Yusuke said sarcastically.


" Shut up! I have no time for you!" Kitty spit the words out. Her ears twitched. She could hear Hiei and the others returning. " Listen punk. I've got to go. Go away and find Koenma or something. I have no time for your damn games!"


" Touchy! Well I'll go then." Yusuke said turning up his nose.


" You do that!" Kitty said turning to the open portal, trying to keep it from closing.


" Kitty! Are you here?! Is the portal open?" Hiei's voice yelled from around the corner.




" Yea. It's open. Come on and hurry!" Kitty yelled as he, Kurama, and Gouki rounded the corner.


" Thanks for keeping it open Kitty. Do you think that you could be that last one through and make sure that it gets closed?" Gouki said.


" I guess I could. Ok, I will." Kitty said wary of the glint in Gouki's eye.


" Great!" Gouki said underneath his breath.


Kurama jumped into the portal first. This time they didn't hesitate. Hiei went immediately next and Gouki jumped in and just as Kitty was going to go in he slammed the portal entrance doors in her face.


" What? What happened?" Kitty said as she banged on the portal door. " Let me through. Come on you stupid thing! Let me through!"


" Well, well. I guess we'll catch one of the culprits who stole the items." An ogre guard said as he picked her up by the scruff of her neck.


" Put me down bastard! I hate damn faggots like you! Get your damn fricking hands off me!! I mean it! I'll tell my daddy!" Kitty howled as she was dragged to the front desk of Spirit World.


* Meanwhile back in the mortal world*


" Where's Kitty? She should be through by now!" Hiei said worried.


" I don't think she'll be coming through." Gouki said matter-of-factly.


" What makes you think that?" Kurama said as Alaira fussed over his wounds.


" The doors of the portal closed before she could get through. The ogre guards have probably gotten her by now." Gouki said laughing.


" What do you mean . . . that the doors closed before she could get through? She was the one holding the doors! What have you done Gouki?!" Hiei yelled picking up Gouki by his shirt.


" I didn't do anything. The doors shut on her. I didn't do nothing." Gouki said.


" Whatever. I don't believe you but, there's nothing I can do about it. Kitty's left in Spirit World. At the mercy of those damn ogres!" Hiei said turning his head away from the group so they couldn't see his tears.




" Hiei are you okay?" Alaira asked putting a hand on Hiei's shoulder.


" I'm fine." Hiei said as he pulled away from her touch.


" Right. Maybe you could come home with me and Kurama. It might help you sort your feelings out." Alaira said.


" Fine . . . I'll accept your offer." Hiei said back.


" Good . . . we're leaving now. Let's go." Kurama said as he got up wincing at the wound he received on his leg by an ogre gun.


Gouki just turned around and walked out of the shed's door. He walked down the street toward the back alleys. Hiei followed Kurama and Alaira back to Kurama's house. They reached the front door. Kurama picked the key out of the flower pot next to the door. He put it in the lock and opened the door. The smell of cherry blossoms blew out on them as they entered.


" It seems so empty without Kitty." Kurama said looking around.


" Yea. I'm so used to her bounding down the stairs every time the door opens. Hoping that Mr. Right will walk through the door." Alaira half laughed.


Hiei just walked up the stairs like he knew where he was going. He walked into Kitty's room and sat down on her bed. He noticed a small book on her pillow and picked it up. He opened it. The front page was decorated in little doodles of roses, hearts, monkeys, puppies, kittens, and little devils. He turned to the first page with writing on it. It was dated November 1, 19–. He flipped through the rest of the diary until her reached the page that was labeled today's date. He started reading. He read that she knew that he had stopped by her room last night, that she found the ring off the end of his sword hilt, and that she loved him. He read the words " I think that I love him . . . " over and over. "So she really did love me? I just thought she was saying that. I can't believe that I would have been so dense as to let her go last through the portal. She's the only person I've ever cared about besides my sister, Yukina. Dammit!"


He started crying. (Very un-Hiei-like) He just put his head on her pillow and just cried.


Kurama and Alaira heard Hiei's sobs and just left him alone.


" You know Kurama. I think that he loved Kitty. I mean listen to him. I never took him for a guy to spill out over a girl. But here he is crying his guts out over your little sister." Alaira said quietly.


" I noticed that. I could tell that something was going on between him and Kitty. But I didn't know what. It's rather pathetic if you ask me." Kurama said trying to keep from crying himself.



" Kurama would you do that for me if I was lost. I mean cry. Like Hiei?" Alaira asked scooting over nearer to Kurama.


" I probably would. I love you Alaira." Kurama said wincing as he tried to move his left arm.


" Thanks Kurama. That's really nice. I love you too." Alaira said as she leaned over and kissed Kurama. She put her hands behind his head and he put his right hand around her waist. They were kissing when Hiei came down from the stairs. He remembered the kiss he and Kitty had shared in that deserted hallway. He walked quietly back up to Kitty's room. He looked on her dresser and found the ring from his sword hilt. He picked it up, examined it, then sat it back down. He then took off his sword and leaned it against the vanity chair. He then laid down on Kitty's bed and fell asleep. He slept without waking up until about 8:00 that afternoon.


" I've overslept." Hiei said to himself. " I meant to be gone by 4:00 this afternoon."


" Hiei, you can stay the night if you want. I'm sure Kitty won't mind you staying in her room until you feel like leaving." Kurama said as he walked in the door.


" Kurama, I have something to ask you . . . " Hiei said as he sat up in Kitty's bed.


" What's bothering you Hiei?" Kurama said as he sat down on the black beanbag chair in the middle of the floor.


" Kurama do you love Alaira?" Hiei asked quietly.


" Yes . . . actually I do. Why? Do you love Kitty? I heard you crying earlier today. I about did, but stopped myself." Kurama said looking at Hiei.


" I'm not going to tell you if I love Kitty or not but, I want you to know . . . I've never felt this way about anyone the way I feel about your sister." Hiei said looking down at the floor.


" Yes . . . Kitty does send a bolt of some feeling down your back doesn't she? That's the way she's always been. She's my half-sister you know. She can take care of herself. She's the Daughter of the Damned. It's not a title that she actually wants. Anyway . . . I'll leave you alone now. Alaira is cooking dinner. You can come down and eat in about 15 minutes if you want. We're having ramen noodles with miso. And a side of brown rice. Bring your appetite Alaira's actually a good cook." Kurama said laughing.


" Yea. I'll be down after I clear my head." Hiei said as he laid back down and stared at the ceiling.


TO BE CONTINUED




Preview: Kitty has been captured by the ogre guards of Spirit World. Hiei seems a bit upset. What will happen to Kitty? And will Hiei ever get over her? To find out read the next chapter of:


YU YU HAKUSHO REVISED