Psychicfiredemoness: Okay there's this chapter which is the Makai thing one, the next one is the dun-dun-dun battle, and then the last one when we all say goodbye.
Hiei: Good that means that you'll be saying goodbye as well and we don't have to be in anymore damn stories of yours.
Psychic: I didn't mean me you jackass! And you'll be saying goodbye to your precious little fire demon.
Yusuke: Hey Alex how are ya gonna tell him goodbye? /perverted grin/
Alex: Huh? /blinks then gets it/ Pervert! /hits him/
Psychic: Okay well yeah, lost all track of mind.
Hiei: Idiot.
Psychic: Shut up Hiei! I own nothing!
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Last time, damnit I don't even know anymore! Oh wait, they both got kidnapped. Sorry about that, but as a reviewer once asked, 'is Hiei going to be on the warpath?' We shall see now.
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Chapter 34 Venturing into the Makai
Okay here's the jest of it, the guys got chewed out first by Koenma because their case was now in HELL! Then by Genkai also because of the case. So they weren't in very good moods you could say. Particularly Hiei and Kurama's moods. Kurama was pissed cause his lil' 'girlfriend' was stolen from him. Hiei's cause Alex is, wait she wasn't his girlfriend so what do I call it, okay screw it! Cause Alex was gone! (Alex: You have a way with words Psychic. /sweat drops/ Yusuke: Oh! I know! You're his mate! Alex: What!? I'm not his mate! If I was he'd have marked me! Yusuke: You're still his mate. Alex: Are not. Yusuke: Are too. Both: /continue on that/)
Botan then came into the room with that big suitcase with a grin on her face.
"And what are you so happy about?" Yusuke asked from the couch.
"We got a location out of Sachi for where the girls might have been taken," she chirped, "and Koenma got some info on the kidnappers."
She hit the case to have it open and show Koenma's face. "What do ya got for us pacifier breath?" Yusuke asked.
"Here's the jest of it, there are four of them. First there's Temi a powerful and extremely swift fire demon we believe that he's the leader among the four, and the one after Alex," (Is there some conspiracy about fire demon after fire demon after fire demon or something?)Koenma explained pulling out a picture of a tall pale male with long black hair in a high ponytail with orange eyes. He had a black long sleeve, black vest, black pants on, and a katana sheath (Sword intact) on each of his sides. (Alex: I hate him and he wears as much black as Hiei, or more cause of the scarf and headband/sighs/ she'll get on with it, but she's gonna write the freakin' descriptions in paragraphs again, it's what she does. Psychic: Shut up!)
"Next there's Chris. He's a lightning demon with severe accuracy," (It'll make some sense later on) Koenma pulled out the picture of a teen with almost shoulder length brown hair, and lightning blue eyes (So Sapph doesn't yell at me lightning blue and ice blue are two different colors. Lightning is almost white blue; ice blue is more blue so ok?) he was in a green t-shirt with a lightning bolt (Original right?) and a pair of faded blue jeans with a ripped right knee he also held a staff with a blue-yellow stone mounted on its top, "he's the one most likely after Kayori because of their similar powers."
"Then there's Kugatsu he's half snake, half ice demon," he showed the picture of a man with greased shoulder length black hair in a low ponytail and neon green eyes with vertical pupils, a black gouty and wore a dark blue long sleeve that flared at the ends, a pair of tight black jeans, and was holding a maul, "he's probably after Sapphire-" (For those of you that don't know what a maul is, and I got this from Silent Hill 3, don't own, it's like a 6 foot pole with a mace's head on it and think medieval mace. Hope that helped)
Yusuke interrupted him before he could continue.
"You sure that he's after Sapphire? He looks kinda gay," he said pointing at the picture.
"Yes we're sure! Now if I can continue, he uses something called the Nightmare Powder," Koenma continued.
Kurama let out a slight hiccupping sound. They all looked at him.
"Would you care to explain or should I?" Koenma asked.
Kurama made a 'you' gesture with his hand.
"Ahem, Nightmare Powder is made from the crushed roots of the Sinning Tree (This story is pre-Sensui and post-Tournament.) it induces horrible images in ones mind and can cause temporary insanity and it's affects last depending on a persons mental strength, the delusions can last a few minutes or for several years. And humans aren't affected nearly as badly as demons are," Koenma explained, "and lastly there is Ryote, a shadow demon. Before you ask what that means Yusuke, it means he can blend into the shadows, it's sort of what Genbu did only he can only appear in the shadows in the same room. (Did that make sense? You know what I mean though he can travel through the shadows of the room he's in.)
Yusuke closed his mouth and they looked at the picture. Ryote had short dark blue hair and magenta eyes and was wearing a deep purple tunic (Link from Zelda games tunic) and a pair of black pants with a throwing scythe at his side. (Like Kuronue (Spelling?) used to use.)
"Gay," Yusuke coughed. (Yusuke you may not understand this but some guys were purple, or pink. Yusuke: Like I said gay. Others: /sweat drop/)
They looked at him and sweat dropped. (See!?)
"If I can continue, according to Sachi their base of operations is in the middle of a barren wasteland in the Makai," Koenma said.
A picture of an old crumbling stone fortress appeared with about thirty guards around it and it was of course in a wasteland.
"We'll be opening the portal shortly," he explained.
"Well good luck boys," Botan said as the four boys fell through a portal underneath them.
-Makai; the bad guy's fortress-
"Alex wake up!" Kayori screamed at her small friend.
"Eh," Alex mumbled in her sleep.
"Alex Hiei's here and he's gonna hump ya into submission!" Sapphire cried. (Dodge ball!)
"What!?" Alex screamed shooting up paranoid and looking around.
"Why ya want that from him?" Allyson asked grinning.
"Oh hell no!" she growled.
"Hey guys? GUYS!" Kayori yelled, "Can we get outta here now?"
They were at the end of a hallway and there was no doors around them. They looked up to see a trap door in the ceiling. They sighed anime style.
"Let's go," Allyson stated and they started down the cold stone hallway.
After ten or twenty minutes they reached a fork in the road, well sorta. It was four different colored corridors, and it was a hall, not a road.
"Okay, the pink, the black, the blue, or the green?" Alex asked.
Sapphire had already gone down the blue and Allyson the green.
"Dibs on pink!" the other two proclaimed.
They then glared at each other. And made Jenkin hands, Alex had rock and Kayori had dun, dun, dun…paper. Alex fell to the floor as Kayori walked down the pink hallway happily.
"You guys suck!" she yelled down the halls at once. "I guess I could just stay here," she stated to herself while tapping the ground. She got up, 'Oh well. FREEDOM!" she yelled and ran down the black corridor.
-Sapphire-
"Freaky hall one or bright cheery hall number two?" Sapphire asked herself.
Both halls had torch lighting but one was a stony hall while the other had a pretty pink carpet. She walked down the stone hall for a few yards until she fell through a trap door.
-Kayori-
Kayori was currently preoccupied in staring at a painting of a red haired youth carrying a large broadsword. The man blinked at her. She ran away from it screaming about demon paintings. She tripped and a bag was thrown over her head and she was knocked out.
-Allyson-
Once again Allyson was humming a Linkin Park song while walking, not that there's anything wrong with that. But she neglected to see the flight of stairs in front of her, leading down. She tripped down them and was knocked out, then taken by someone.
-Alex- (There's starting to be a pattern here)
"Okay, there are four more corridors. Any one that I take gives me a twenty-five percent chance of getting the hell outta here, but if I hit another fork I'll only have a twelve point five percent chance of getting outta here, then if I hit even more halls I'll have a six point two five percent chance of getting out of here, and if I do get out of here I still gotta get back to the temple and get the others to help me rescue the others or something along those lines, but I could get killed and never find the others-" Alex told herself in front of yet more hallways.
"Shut up and pick a hallway you little mathematical freak!" a hissing voice screamed.
"Don't yell at her!" came the semi-deep once was snooty voice.
"You shut up!" the first said.
She then heard two people fighting and sweat dropped.
"Okay…" she said going down the right most hall only to fall through a trap door.
-Somewhere in the fortress-
Temi was nursing a bleeding nose while Kugatsu had an ice bag on his head.
"It isn't my fault my stupid followers had them dumped in the middle of the compound!" Temi growled at Chris.
"Key word is 'your followers'," Ryote said.
"That's two words," Chris said.
Ryote glared.
"Well we got them back where we wanted them at least right?" Kugatsu asked.
The others smiled wickedly and nodded.
-The guys-
"Damnit Koenma ya could've dropped us off so we weren't twenty freakin' miles away!" Yusuke yelled at his boss through the communicator.
"Uh the element of surprise?" Koenma guessed.
"For who them or us!?" he yelled back at the child-like ruler.
"Fine! Just stand there for a minute and we'll send you through another portal!" Koenma growled and pushed some buttons and the boys fell through another portal.
This time they landed with a dull thud onto something.
"There they are! Get um'! Don't let um' into the fortress!" they heard different people screaming.
They looked down and found about five swirly eyed guards underneath them. They jumped up in fighting positions as the surrounding guards attacked them. (Do I know where this is going yet? Sapphire: No. Psychic: /anime cries/)
About ten minutes later they finished killing all but the swirly eyed guards. One 'woke' up, saw them and ran into the fortress screaming, "they're here! They defeated the first guard!"
Soon the four other ones woke up and started running into the fortress. Yusuke grabbed the back of ones collar.
"Hey! We're new in town and need to find some friend of ours," he stated holding the demon off the ground a bit.
"Never shall I tell ye anything!" the demon cried trying to brake free.
"Great he talks funny," Kuwabara pointed out.
"Come on now we just need to know were you've taken our friends, maybe you've seen um' they're girls," Yusuke said.
The demon still struggled more.
Hiei sighed and read the low levels mind. (Oh my god I rhymed, damnit I rhymed again!)
"They're being held somewhere in the middle of the compound, he thinks that they're in his masters' bedrooms," Hiei stated hiding a slight growl. (Ah! He's upset! /pinches his cheek and get her ass whooped/)
The others turned slightly green and entered the fortress after killing the demon.
-Room 1!-
Kugatsu was currently poking the unconscious Sapphire with the non-lethal end of his maul. She grunted. He poked her again, this time on her nose. She woke up, and jumped up.
"Who are you!? Where am I and why do I have handcuffs on!?" Sapphire asked looking down to see her hands cuffed together.
"I'm Kugatsu, you are in my room and so you don't struggle," he said.
"What!?" she yelled.
"But we'll have time for that later, you see your friends are currently inside our home and need to be exterminated, so come along," he said throwing her over his shoulder and leaving the room.
-Room 2!-
"EEK!" Kayori screamed after waking up and jumping to the front of the bed she was on.
"You didn't have to scream it's not like I was gonna hurt you or anything," Chris said rubbing his ear, "I'm Chris. Your new mate."
"What!? I don't want a new mate! I don't even have an old mate!" Kayori explained throwing a lamp at him.
He caught it set it down and grabbed his nifty little staff. A bolt of lightning shot at her and she became temporarily paralyzed. He threw her over his shoulder.
"You're quite lucky Kayori, you get to witness the demise of your own friends," he said laving the room.
-Room 3!-
Allyson was currently staring at Ryote, because never before had she seen someone with blue hair and purple eyes.
"What?!" he finally screamed.
She became dazed and he threw her over his shoulder.
"You now get to see the deaths of your beloved Spirit Detectives," he stated.
"No! Yusuke will kill you all!" she yelled as they left the room.
(Na, I'll just ignore Alex. Readers: /throw stuff at Psychic/)
-Room 4!-
Current scene: Alex is passed out face first on Temi's bed. He however sat in a chair tapping his foot on the ground because she wouldn't wake up. He gave a low growl.
"Why won't you wake the hell up!?" he asked acidly.
"I don't wanna wake up," she replied, still asleep.
He tried jumping up during the tapping of his foot and ended up falling backward, in the chair. (If ya can't tell he didn't think she'd reply.) At this point she woke up. She jumped up.
"Who are you!?" she cried taking some sort of fighting stance while crouched.
"I am Temi, and you sleep too much," he stated standing back up and brushing himself off.
"Hey wait… Where am I and where are my friends ya jackass!?" she screamed.
"You my dear are in the Makai, your friends are with their new mates, as are you, so I wouldn't be calling me a jackass if I were you," he stated dangerously.
"Oh yeah!?" she yelled twitching and shaking a fist.
He made the 'bring it' gesture and she charged at him. He opened his closest door and she hit the wall, face first, getting knocked out.
"Tisk, tisk, tisk, such a waste of a pretty face," he said shaking his head.
"It isn't pretty," she muttered in her sleep.
He twitched and picked her up.
-The guys-
After defeating about three hundred more guards the guys reached a large round stone room with ten steps leading down to the floor, which was covered in three feet of water. (God, that's up to Hiei's waist or something.) It also had stone pillars that came only about three inches out of the water.
"Okay," Yusuke said slowly jumping onto a nearby pillar. What, we don't know what's in that water.
Hiei stepped off the last step and was hairline deep into the water due to the drop off point of the steps. He growled angrily managing to get back onto the steps then hopped to a pillar followed by Kurama and Kuwabara, who almost fell into the deep assed pool.
"Well, well, well, look who's finally here," Jaishoni said on the other side of the room.
At his sides were Kirei and Kaitashi. Kaitashi threw her pendant into the water (Where does she get those?) and it began swirling as a whirlpool. In a flash the three enemies were in the water being dragged under until the water calmed and two bodies floated to the surface while Kirei clung desperately to one of the pillars before passing out and they left her while the pool drained as they continued to the next room. It was completely dark and they entered but the room was soon flooded with lights from above. And there stood the four demons in question each with their weapon drawn. All the while the girls were inside a glass box above the arena with a glass wall so they could see everything that went on.
"They're gonna lose you know," they heard.
They all turned to see Marie and Brit standing against the stone wall.
"But if they hurt my Hi-chan there are like so dead," Marie said.
"You guys take on demons?" Alex laughed.
"Hey bitch! Don't talk to me like that! We are both like full fledged whip demons!" Marie replied.
"Oh really?" Sapphire asked.
"Like yeah really!" Brit stated.
-End Chapter-
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Psychic: /crying/
Alex: ???
Psychic: /still crying/
Sapphire: ???
Psychic: /making a puddle form/
Alex: … Hug me! /hugs Hiei/
Psychic: /making a pond/
Yusuke: What the hell's your problem?!
Psychic: /stops/ I don't know.
Hiei: /still being hugged/ Idiot.
Alex: I'm done. /lets go off Hiei/
Psychic: Well people, there are only TWO chapters left. And Alex got rapped by Temi.
Alex and Hiei: WHAT!?
Alex: I didn't get rapped by the stupid bastard!
Temi: Yet, oh wait you'll be willing.
Yusuke: That's only for Hiei.
Alex: What!? Never and no one ya assholes! /runs into solitary confinement/
Psychic: Well she's gone for now. Well please review everyone.
Temi: /trying to get Alex out of the room/
Psychic: Right… well I need ideas for the dun-dun-dun final battle. And no one say for Hiei to use The Dragon of the Darkness Flame okay? And people I emplore you to please read Sapphire101's ski loudge story, cause othewise she won't update and I will be pissed. /twitches/ Please read and review her story! Later.