A/N: okay, here's chapter 8. I'd like to thank my fans for leaving reviews
and cheering me on and stuff..oh yeah, to "Faith Kaiba" I really liked your
review a lot.it was so friendly, even though you're not a duelist, I just
have to put you in the story now or I'll feel bad ^^'. I'm thinking about
putting you in this chapter.but I'm not sure just yet, I'll have to wait
until I plan how this is going to go. But anyways, I'll go ahead and get
right to the story. Here you have it people:
~~~~Chapter 8: Awesome offer!~~~
kylie: so your dad just signed the slip, and that was that? No arguing or anything?
Eden: yup. He said he doesn't care as long as I pay for it.
Kylie: wow. I thought your dad was stricter than that.
Eden: he's still his strict ol' self, but he says that after all, it is my body, so it's my decision.
Tara: heh. Yeah, if only all parents were like that.
Eden: haha, guess I'm lucky then. Oooo! Pizza! **stares wide-eyed and drooling as a waiter sets their pizza on the table** so hungry! **digs in**
Kylie: yay! **stuffs a bite in her mouth**
Tara: pigs. **puts a piece on her plate**
Eden: hey! I can't help it if I forgot to eat breakfast and it made me hungry **bites a piece off of her pizza**
Kylie: yummy, dis ish really ood **talking with a mouthful of food**
Tara: don't talk with your mouth full.
Kylie: shorry **gulps down her food** there, happy?
Tara: I guess **picks a pepperoni off of her pizza and eats it**
Eden: **pulls out the second volume of "Mars" and begins reading it** haha!! This book is funny..yet really sad. **giggles at a funny part**
Kylie: ooo! I wanna see!!**grabs book from eden**
Eden: hey! Fine but give it back.
Kylie: okies ^___^
Tara: **reads over Kylie's shoulder**
Kylie and Tara: **looking really serious**
Eden: **looks at them and bursts out laughing** DISCOVERY CHANNEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mwahahahahahhahhhahahaha
Kylie and Tara: **jump, look at Eden confusedly, then go back to reading**
People in restaurant: ** stare**
Eden: **gulp** heh heh, it wasn't me **blushes**
Kylie: **breaks down in tears** h-h-he, isn't dead is he? **turns book over and points to Rei lying on the floor in a picture, looking a bit beat**
Eden: **rolls her eyes** no.
Kylie: **looks better** oh good.
Eden: c'mon, lets go find another duel.I'm bored!
Tara: I'm with you.
Kylie: I guess I am **continues to read Mars while walking, just barely missing hitting other people**
~~story mode~~
they walked along, once again searching for duels, they all found them, won them (Tatsu: I'm to lazy to post them ^^' ¬_¬), and came out with a new locator card and a rare card. For Eden, she got an axe of despair card, for Kylie, she got a painful choice card, and Tara got a cyber jar. Over the next week or so the girls didn't duel much. Tara got 2 more locator cards, Kylie got one more, and Eden got sick with the flu and had to stay home and didn't gain any locator cards. When eden got better, they all set out to battle city again. They arrived and wandered around a bit. Kylie was reading mars volume 4, but while reading it she accidentally ran into a boy who appeared around the corner at a run. She fell over and the contents of her pockets, including her deck and three locator cards spilled onto the pavement. The boy kept on running without even a second glance.
~~script mode~~~
Kylie: ow. O.o
Eden: **turns around and waves a fist at the boy's back as he is still running** you damn jerk!! **turns back around to help out kylie** he didn't even say sorry.
Tara: people are just annoying idiots these days.
Kylie: **puts the stuff tara and eden handed her back into her pockets and gets up** thanks guys.
Eden: no prob.
All 3 Girls: **start to walk away, but are stopped by a voice behind them**
Voice: um, 'scuse me, I think you dropped this
A3Gs: **turn around to see who it is**
Girl: **holding money out to them**
Kylie: oh! **searches her pockets** eeee! Thank you! I didn't notice I had dropped my money too. **takes the money and stuffs it deep in her pocket** thank you again!
Girl: your welcome.
Eden: hi! What's your name? I'm Eden, but most people call me Tatsu.
Girl: my name is Faith.
Kylie: I'm Kylie. Pleased to meet you
Tara: I'm Tara. Nice to meet you.
People in background: **quarreling**
Boy#1: I'll show you! I'm a better duelist than you'll ever be! You are too afraid to even duel me! I already have 4 locator cards!
Boy#2: whatever, I just don't feel like bothering with a wimp like you! And you only got those locator cards because you fought some of the weakest people here.
Boy#1: I'll show you how strong I am! I'll beat someone right here right now! Someone tough looking! **scans the crowd**
Eden: **crosses her arms and glances sideways at the quarreling boys** heh, wonder what that's all about? **Shakes her head and her bun falls out, then she looks annoyed, anime style** grr, the elastic shot in my hair tie! Luckily I always bring a spare! Heh heh. **puts her hair up again, this time up high enough to see the crimson red kanji on her neck, then turns away from the quarreling boys to talk with her already chatting friends**
Kylie: nice of you to finally join us.
Eden: shut up. So, Faith are you in the battle city tournament?
Faith: oh no. I don't duel.
Tara: why not?
Faith: SOMEONE lost half of my deck. And besides, I'd rather watch the dueling going on rather than be in it.
Tara: oooooh. Okies ^___^
Boy #1: **spots eden standing with some girls, but better yet he notices the kanji on her neck** ((hmm she looks tough)) HEY!! YOU!
Eden: **turns around to see the boy pointing at her** who me? **acting innocent**
Boy #1: YES YOU! I CHALLENGE YOU TO A DEUL! RIGHT NOW! ALL OR NOTHING, WINNER TAKES ALL!
Eden:you know, if I beat you I get your four locator cards, sending me to the finals, and your rarest card. You willin to risk it? On the upside for you, if you win you get my 2 locator cards, sending YOU to the finals, and MY rarest card. I'll warn you once I'm not easy to beat.
Kylie: **shudders** she's right about that..
Boy #1:I DON'T CARE, I WILL BEAT YOU! NOT LET'S DUEL! UNLESS YOU'RE SCARED.
Eden: scared? Are you kidding me? Heh. You won't last long with them shaky knees y'know.**laughs**
Boy #1: SHUT UP AND LETS DUEL!
Eden: fine.
Both: IT'S TIME TO DUEL!!!!!!!!
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A/N: woo! Okies, from the looks of it.Faith is becoming a permanent character..sorry to all my reviewers, I can't put everyone permanently unless I wanna have a big group of people tagging along with me an' my gang..but, I will still try to put you in but it's not garaunteed that you will be in for very long, but you will be in for at least one chapter. ^_^ please still review! Faith, I have to tell you that I loooved your review once again I say it was so friendly! Oh yeah, to Kylie: Malik is coming in to the story, VERY SOON. ^______^ oh, btw, the discovery channel thin is an inside joke between me and my inner circle of friends. Lol.
~~~~Chapter 8: Awesome offer!~~~
kylie: so your dad just signed the slip, and that was that? No arguing or anything?
Eden: yup. He said he doesn't care as long as I pay for it.
Kylie: wow. I thought your dad was stricter than that.
Eden: he's still his strict ol' self, but he says that after all, it is my body, so it's my decision.
Tara: heh. Yeah, if only all parents were like that.
Eden: haha, guess I'm lucky then. Oooo! Pizza! **stares wide-eyed and drooling as a waiter sets their pizza on the table** so hungry! **digs in**
Kylie: yay! **stuffs a bite in her mouth**
Tara: pigs. **puts a piece on her plate**
Eden: hey! I can't help it if I forgot to eat breakfast and it made me hungry **bites a piece off of her pizza**
Kylie: yummy, dis ish really ood **talking with a mouthful of food**
Tara: don't talk with your mouth full.
Kylie: shorry **gulps down her food** there, happy?
Tara: I guess **picks a pepperoni off of her pizza and eats it**
Eden: **pulls out the second volume of "Mars" and begins reading it** haha!! This book is funny..yet really sad. **giggles at a funny part**
Kylie: ooo! I wanna see!!**grabs book from eden**
Eden: hey! Fine but give it back.
Kylie: okies ^___^
Tara: **reads over Kylie's shoulder**
Kylie and Tara: **looking really serious**
Eden: **looks at them and bursts out laughing** DISCOVERY CHANNEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mwahahahahahhahhhahahaha
Kylie and Tara: **jump, look at Eden confusedly, then go back to reading**
People in restaurant: ** stare**
Eden: **gulp** heh heh, it wasn't me **blushes**
Kylie: **breaks down in tears** h-h-he, isn't dead is he? **turns book over and points to Rei lying on the floor in a picture, looking a bit beat**
Eden: **rolls her eyes** no.
Kylie: **looks better** oh good.
Eden: c'mon, lets go find another duel.I'm bored!
Tara: I'm with you.
Kylie: I guess I am **continues to read Mars while walking, just barely missing hitting other people**
~~story mode~~
they walked along, once again searching for duels, they all found them, won them (Tatsu: I'm to lazy to post them ^^' ¬_¬), and came out with a new locator card and a rare card. For Eden, she got an axe of despair card, for Kylie, she got a painful choice card, and Tara got a cyber jar. Over the next week or so the girls didn't duel much. Tara got 2 more locator cards, Kylie got one more, and Eden got sick with the flu and had to stay home and didn't gain any locator cards. When eden got better, they all set out to battle city again. They arrived and wandered around a bit. Kylie was reading mars volume 4, but while reading it she accidentally ran into a boy who appeared around the corner at a run. She fell over and the contents of her pockets, including her deck and three locator cards spilled onto the pavement. The boy kept on running without even a second glance.
~~script mode~~~
Kylie: ow. O.o
Eden: **turns around and waves a fist at the boy's back as he is still running** you damn jerk!! **turns back around to help out kylie** he didn't even say sorry.
Tara: people are just annoying idiots these days.
Kylie: **puts the stuff tara and eden handed her back into her pockets and gets up** thanks guys.
Eden: no prob.
All 3 Girls: **start to walk away, but are stopped by a voice behind them**
Voice: um, 'scuse me, I think you dropped this
A3Gs: **turn around to see who it is**
Girl: **holding money out to them**
Kylie: oh! **searches her pockets** eeee! Thank you! I didn't notice I had dropped my money too. **takes the money and stuffs it deep in her pocket** thank you again!
Girl: your welcome.
Eden: hi! What's your name? I'm Eden, but most people call me Tatsu.
Girl: my name is Faith.
Kylie: I'm Kylie. Pleased to meet you
Tara: I'm Tara. Nice to meet you.
People in background: **quarreling**
Boy#1: I'll show you! I'm a better duelist than you'll ever be! You are too afraid to even duel me! I already have 4 locator cards!
Boy#2: whatever, I just don't feel like bothering with a wimp like you! And you only got those locator cards because you fought some of the weakest people here.
Boy#1: I'll show you how strong I am! I'll beat someone right here right now! Someone tough looking! **scans the crowd**
Eden: **crosses her arms and glances sideways at the quarreling boys** heh, wonder what that's all about? **Shakes her head and her bun falls out, then she looks annoyed, anime style** grr, the elastic shot in my hair tie! Luckily I always bring a spare! Heh heh. **puts her hair up again, this time up high enough to see the crimson red kanji on her neck, then turns away from the quarreling boys to talk with her already chatting friends**
Kylie: nice of you to finally join us.
Eden: shut up. So, Faith are you in the battle city tournament?
Faith: oh no. I don't duel.
Tara: why not?
Faith: SOMEONE lost half of my deck. And besides, I'd rather watch the dueling going on rather than be in it.
Tara: oooooh. Okies ^___^
Boy #1: **spots eden standing with some girls, but better yet he notices the kanji on her neck** ((hmm she looks tough)) HEY!! YOU!
Eden: **turns around to see the boy pointing at her** who me? **acting innocent**
Boy #1: YES YOU! I CHALLENGE YOU TO A DEUL! RIGHT NOW! ALL OR NOTHING, WINNER TAKES ALL!
Eden:you know, if I beat you I get your four locator cards, sending me to the finals, and your rarest card. You willin to risk it? On the upside for you, if you win you get my 2 locator cards, sending YOU to the finals, and MY rarest card. I'll warn you once I'm not easy to beat.
Kylie: **shudders** she's right about that..
Boy #1:I DON'T CARE, I WILL BEAT YOU! NOT LET'S DUEL! UNLESS YOU'RE SCARED.
Eden: scared? Are you kidding me? Heh. You won't last long with them shaky knees y'know.**laughs**
Boy #1: SHUT UP AND LETS DUEL!
Eden: fine.
Both: IT'S TIME TO DUEL!!!!!!!!
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A/N: woo! Okies, from the looks of it.Faith is becoming a permanent character..sorry to all my reviewers, I can't put everyone permanently unless I wanna have a big group of people tagging along with me an' my gang..but, I will still try to put you in but it's not garaunteed that you will be in for very long, but you will be in for at least one chapter. ^_^ please still review! Faith, I have to tell you that I loooved your review once again I say it was so friendly! Oh yeah, to Kylie: Malik is coming in to the story, VERY SOON. ^______^ oh, btw, the discovery channel thin is an inside joke between me and my inner circle of friends. Lol.