The Prelude
A swirling darkness in space, enveloping everything without concern, the darkness was coming closer and in the center was a white mech, a vandread. Holding back enough power to wipe out the universe with its shield. A hole appeared in the shield, the white mech used its body as a shield. It soon began to break under the unbearable pressure, and then a sudden white light from the leading ship known as the Nirvana appeared. The light consumed the entire battlefield.
Silence
And then the uproar could be heard, the celebration caused by the explotion which left nothing but a beaten vandread that was floating in a small glowing orb. They had won the battle, and defeated the Earthlings who sought to take the lives of its own people and use them for their body parts. Peace came again as the two former enemies open communication again. And the hero of the galaxy went to a small dusty planet to help reform the way things are
3 years later.
"I swear these idiots still don't listen to a word I say", yelled one Hibiki Tokai, "You know I take the time to go and speak to these brick heads, and help them and what do I get.
The experimental study for women and men living together had more or less been a success. The Mejarians had taken up attempts at this and things began to change, but the world of Tarak, although having changing a great deal, still had things that were the same in many ways. Men still valued their pride and arrogance and refused to accept a new life. Walking down a street Hibiki wondered about things which still had to be changed as he entered the grounds to large residence on the top of a hill, it was surrounded with greenery, a rare sight on a dry barren planet, and had overlooked the Capital of Tarak
An Address had been posted there, it read
"Hibiki Tokai, First Class"
Every since the battle he was first class but he longed to go back into space. He wondered if he would ever get back into space and combat against enemies. In addition to becoming First Class he was included in all the meetings with the other 1st generation, and had more or less become a prince on both worlds, his parents are grandma and grandpa, but in the end he didn't care much for the added attention
The second he got to too the door and opened it the aroma of great tasting food quickly shut out all other thoughts. Instantly he was drooling on himself, "what smells so good" asked Hibiki. "It's your lunch, did you think I would forget Mr. Alien" Dita replied. "Another thing which still hasn't changed" replied Hibiki as he sat down and ate everything in site as usual. "I got the supply bill today, you hear me Mr. Alien" and as Dita turned around there was nobody there. "MR. ALIEN", yelled Dita at the top of here lungs. "Jeez you must think I am an idiot to stay there" he thought to himself while looking back towards the house. Soon after he stopped and went into to the city for something to do.
"Sir" replied a solider to the head officer, "Yes, what is it" he replied back. The Ikazuchi and the rest of the fleet are almost fully loaded", the solider answered. "Good tell me as soon as we are fully loaded, we don't need the help of women to win. "Yes, sir."
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