Disclaimer: I do not own Yu-gi-oh. If I did, I would have a much faster
computer and a house closer to Carly's.
I would also have a Jacuzzi.
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"Today's the church picnic!" shouted Alyssa as soon as she woke up. The shout woke the other five teens, well three teens and two 5,000 Egyptians, up. "How could I have forgotten?" Alyssa muttered so only Carly could hear her.
The girls quickly dressed in sleeveless turtlenecks and shorts. However, Alyssa's were so short that her butt sort of showed. When the girls were finally stepped out of Alyssa's room the boys looked relieved not to see scowls on their faces. The boys looked disappointed when they noticed the turtleneck shirts. There was a mad rush for the boys to get ready. Then all was set.
"I refuse to let Yami drive again," declared Alyssa. Everyone nodded in agreement.
"Hey I'm not that bad," Yami defended himself.
"Anyone who get distracted by someone not knowing how to play Duel Monsters is a dangerous driver," countered Carly.
"That is big," muttered Yami, but only Yugi heard him.
"I will drive," Alyssa informed everyone.
"Well now that you've 'become one' with Yami how is that any different than him driving?" Yugi innocently questioned her.
Alyssa and Yami growled but made no farther response as the group walked to the car.
Upon arriving, the group discovered Hannah waiting for them.
"Hey Hannah, how you doing? Why are you here? You don't go to my church," interrogated Alyssa.
"When I was at youth group with you a few weeks ago you asked my to come," answered Hannah.
"Oh yeah, I forgot. Sorry. I've been preoccupied lately," Alyssa apologized, embarrassed.
"Yeah with 'your boy'," muttered Carly as Alyssa blushed and Yami looked at them wide-eyed.
"Oh! A volleyball tournament," exclaimed Hannah, "let's sign up!"
The group walked over and read the flyer.
"We need a group name," Ryou pointed out.
"Thank you captain obvious," said Alyssa.
"The Millennium Items," suggested Yami.
"Instead how 'bout the 'Millennium Items Minus Two', as Yugi and Ryou have two of them."
"OK," it was unanimous.
The tournament went on until it was The Millennium Items Minus Two vs. The STUDS (Steven, Tony [Alyssa's brother], Davis, Sterling, and the studet, Nicole.) Both teams were undefeated.
"First one to eleven points wins," Jim, the youth director, told the teams. (Since you people refuse to give me the duel monster's rules I am going to write a volleyball scene here.)
Alyssa served. Tony tried to spike it, but Yami was right at the net to block it.
"Take that brother!" Alyssa shouted as she watched Carly set up with Hannah. Hannah hit the ball, Nicole dived, but the ball hit the sand earning The Millennium Items Minus Two, MIM2, a point.
Nicole served, but the ball went out of bounds, earning the MIM2 a second point.
"Two serving zero," announced Ryou serving. Steven whacked the ball over the net in the middle Yugi hit the ball but it did not make it over the net. Just as it was about to hit the sand Bakura saved it and Carly spiked the ball. Score was now three to zero.
The game went on until the score was ten to ten.
"Game point!" shouted Alyssa, serving.
Sterling hit the ball to Nicole who hit it over the net. Bakura passed the volleyball to Ryou, who bumped it over the net. Davis spiked the ball but Yami saved it, yet again, and passed the ball to Alyssa. She slammed it up and over the net. Tony dived to reach the ball, but missed. The ball hit the sand winning the game for the MIM2.
"WE WIN!" they all shouted at once. MIM2 ran around hugging each other.
The buffet picnic was next. When the foreign exchange students eyed the table, the practically started drooling.
"Keep your arms and legs away from the buffet table," whispered Alyssa to her cronies.
Hannah, Carly, and Alyssa laughed at the boys shoveling food into their mouth like there was no tomorrow. When the guys had piled a ridiculous amount of food on their plates the girls approached the table taking a piece of chicken, a roll, two brownies, a chocolate bar, and various other deserts each. (Can you tell I was hungry when I wrote this?)
"Where do you put all that food?" asked Alyssa when the group sat down. "I weigh 106 pounds and you're even skinnier than me," she pondered as she poked Yami's stomach.
"Don't do that," he groaned.
"You shouldn't be talking," said Yugi eyeing the girls numerous deserts. "Where do you put all that," eyeing the Alyssa's, Carly's, and Hannah's flat stomachs.
"Hehehe," laughed the girls nervously.
After two more hours of fun the group headed to their homes.
"I'm off to the shower," announced Alyssa.
"Why so early, it's only 4:30," asked Yami.
"Oh I forgot to tell you, I have a date with Nick tonight."
"Who's Nick?!" asked Yami practically panicking.
"My boyfriend silly," said Alyssa disappearing into the bathroom. (HAHA bet you were not expecting that! Boo ya Carly!)
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(I was going to leave you there but I thought of a better cliffhanger to end this chapter in()
Yami just gapped at the door for a few minutes, until Yugi came along and asked what was the matter.
"Lots," choked Yami.
Yugi pulled Yami into Alyssa's room and signaled to Ryou to get Bakura out before he could make any comments to Yami, for Yami's eyes were filling with unshed tears. The white haired males disappeared with a flash into the Millennium Ring.
Yami, what's the matter?" pried Yugi.
"She's got a boyfriend," Yami half sobbed. (The first time I wrote that I accidentally typed girlfriend it was hilarious.)
By now, silent tears were running down Yami's cheeks and he was having difficulty breathing normally. Yugi's eyes widened in realization of who 'she' was. He patted Yami on the back, (brotherly love not more than that!) not really knowing what else to do. After ten minutes Yami disappeared into the puzzle and put a do-not-disturb sign on the door of his Soul Room. / Stupid Nick. Why does he have to take my Alyssa? Wait she was never mine to begin with sigh/ thought Yami moping.
Not too much later Alyssa came in already dressed, put on makeup, swished various hair products that Yugi could not identify into her hair, then realized Yugi was in the room.
"Oh, hi, Yugi," she said checking her appearance in the mirror. "I thought Yami was in here."
"He's um... resting," Yugi lied.
"OK. I didn't think the picnic was that tiring but whatever," then Alyssa was interrupted by the doorbell. "That's Nick, tell the others I said bye."
Alyssa walked out of the room and opened the door.
"Hey babe," greeted Nick, wrapping Alyssa in a hug.
"What no kiss?" 'she pouted' pecking him on the cheek. Instead he turned and met her lips with his own. No sparks though.
/I wonder what's wrong with him. He does not seem very alert tonight/ thought Alyssa getting into Nick's convertible.
They arrived at the mall talking about random nothings that popped into their heads.
"Alyssa, I have something I need to tell you," started Nick after the duo had gotten their food. Alyssa looked up at him, shifting her concentration from her sub to his face. He sighed and continued, "I've met someone else. We've been dating for two weeks. Sorry, but our relationship is over."
Alyssa was sobbing and hiccuping now.
"Do you want me to take you home now?" questioned a thickheaded Nick. (Thick/nick-it rhymes!)
"NO!" Alyssa screamed so loud that everyone in the food court looked at the pair. She threw her sprite at Nick's face (so cliché) and stormed out of the mall, walking home.
She walked home sobbing and thinking of various ways to torture and kill nick. About seven minutes from her front door a pair of hands grabbed her around the mouth and waist.
"Mmfpt," Alyssa shouted, at least that is what it sounded like.
"Just come quietly, sweet-cheeks and you won't get hurt," her capture whispered in her ear.
Alyssa shuddered at the male voice.
/Yami help!/ Alyssa screamed in her mind before she blacked out.
**Back at Alyssa's house**
/Yami help!/ Yami heard in his mind, snapping him out of his trance like moping.
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I would like to post more but school (or jail depends on your view) has started and spring break is over so now I cannot update as much as I would like to. I will probably be able to write a chapter a week. More reviews=faster updates and better ideas remember that.
Do you like? I thought that this chapter has a great cliffhanger and I would like to know what you think so REVIEW please!! Even if it is criticism.
If you have any questions that need to be answered quickly or the rules for playing duel monster cards (show or real life I don't care) e-mail me then at
Oneyearoffun@hotmail.com
Response to reviewers:
Witchcraft: although Carly denies it she really is that pale. My mom calls her scary-skinned(
Bunny: Jackie's shirt flew off because this is a story and what fun would it be to say her shirt went up a couple of inches? I think that 'glomp' means a tackle/hug I read it in another fiction so I am not sure.
Blank: sorry about the short chapters I try to keep them over a thousand words but sometimes it doesn't work sorry!
Anonymous: Happy? He did not die.
Ylrack: You are a brain sucker y didn't you tell me? And y did u write that in a review? Do you really think that Nick likes me?! EVIDENCE now!! More than PG-13, did I hear you right?
Shegra: the joy of cliffhangers I hope you like this one:
DarkFire aka ILoveJoeyWheeler: sorry but only my friends in real life get to join us so I ask all of you to stop asking me because it is not going to happen! Nice e-mail tho
Lady Yami: thanks!
Aithril the Elf-Maiden: thanks I read two of your stories and they were both awesome please update urs!
DogsruleW: NO! No girl for Malik and only people I know from school/church will be included in my story.. Grr too many people asking that going insane...
Pruningshears (too lazy to log in): y pruningshears as a screen name whatever. Anyways thanks for reviewing so much 2 bad ur graduating cause I go there next year! Go bears! Do you know a Dante C.?
Blahblahblah: here's the next chapter!
I would also have a Jacuzzi.
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"Today's the church picnic!" shouted Alyssa as soon as she woke up. The shout woke the other five teens, well three teens and two 5,000 Egyptians, up. "How could I have forgotten?" Alyssa muttered so only Carly could hear her.
The girls quickly dressed in sleeveless turtlenecks and shorts. However, Alyssa's were so short that her butt sort of showed. When the girls were finally stepped out of Alyssa's room the boys looked relieved not to see scowls on their faces. The boys looked disappointed when they noticed the turtleneck shirts. There was a mad rush for the boys to get ready. Then all was set.
"I refuse to let Yami drive again," declared Alyssa. Everyone nodded in agreement.
"Hey I'm not that bad," Yami defended himself.
"Anyone who get distracted by someone not knowing how to play Duel Monsters is a dangerous driver," countered Carly.
"That is big," muttered Yami, but only Yugi heard him.
"I will drive," Alyssa informed everyone.
"Well now that you've 'become one' with Yami how is that any different than him driving?" Yugi innocently questioned her.
Alyssa and Yami growled but made no farther response as the group walked to the car.
Upon arriving, the group discovered Hannah waiting for them.
"Hey Hannah, how you doing? Why are you here? You don't go to my church," interrogated Alyssa.
"When I was at youth group with you a few weeks ago you asked my to come," answered Hannah.
"Oh yeah, I forgot. Sorry. I've been preoccupied lately," Alyssa apologized, embarrassed.
"Yeah with 'your boy'," muttered Carly as Alyssa blushed and Yami looked at them wide-eyed.
"Oh! A volleyball tournament," exclaimed Hannah, "let's sign up!"
The group walked over and read the flyer.
"We need a group name," Ryou pointed out.
"Thank you captain obvious," said Alyssa.
"The Millennium Items," suggested Yami.
"Instead how 'bout the 'Millennium Items Minus Two', as Yugi and Ryou have two of them."
"OK," it was unanimous.
The tournament went on until it was The Millennium Items Minus Two vs. The STUDS (Steven, Tony [Alyssa's brother], Davis, Sterling, and the studet, Nicole.) Both teams were undefeated.
"First one to eleven points wins," Jim, the youth director, told the teams. (Since you people refuse to give me the duel monster's rules I am going to write a volleyball scene here.)
Alyssa served. Tony tried to spike it, but Yami was right at the net to block it.
"Take that brother!" Alyssa shouted as she watched Carly set up with Hannah. Hannah hit the ball, Nicole dived, but the ball hit the sand earning The Millennium Items Minus Two, MIM2, a point.
Nicole served, but the ball went out of bounds, earning the MIM2 a second point.
"Two serving zero," announced Ryou serving. Steven whacked the ball over the net in the middle Yugi hit the ball but it did not make it over the net. Just as it was about to hit the sand Bakura saved it and Carly spiked the ball. Score was now three to zero.
The game went on until the score was ten to ten.
"Game point!" shouted Alyssa, serving.
Sterling hit the ball to Nicole who hit it over the net. Bakura passed the volleyball to Ryou, who bumped it over the net. Davis spiked the ball but Yami saved it, yet again, and passed the ball to Alyssa. She slammed it up and over the net. Tony dived to reach the ball, but missed. The ball hit the sand winning the game for the MIM2.
"WE WIN!" they all shouted at once. MIM2 ran around hugging each other.
The buffet picnic was next. When the foreign exchange students eyed the table, the practically started drooling.
"Keep your arms and legs away from the buffet table," whispered Alyssa to her cronies.
Hannah, Carly, and Alyssa laughed at the boys shoveling food into their mouth like there was no tomorrow. When the guys had piled a ridiculous amount of food on their plates the girls approached the table taking a piece of chicken, a roll, two brownies, a chocolate bar, and various other deserts each. (Can you tell I was hungry when I wrote this?)
"Where do you put all that food?" asked Alyssa when the group sat down. "I weigh 106 pounds and you're even skinnier than me," she pondered as she poked Yami's stomach.
"Don't do that," he groaned.
"You shouldn't be talking," said Yugi eyeing the girls numerous deserts. "Where do you put all that," eyeing the Alyssa's, Carly's, and Hannah's flat stomachs.
"Hehehe," laughed the girls nervously.
After two more hours of fun the group headed to their homes.
"I'm off to the shower," announced Alyssa.
"Why so early, it's only 4:30," asked Yami.
"Oh I forgot to tell you, I have a date with Nick tonight."
"Who's Nick?!" asked Yami practically panicking.
"My boyfriend silly," said Alyssa disappearing into the bathroom. (HAHA bet you were not expecting that! Boo ya Carly!)
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(I was going to leave you there but I thought of a better cliffhanger to end this chapter in()
Yami just gapped at the door for a few minutes, until Yugi came along and asked what was the matter.
"Lots," choked Yami.
Yugi pulled Yami into Alyssa's room and signaled to Ryou to get Bakura out before he could make any comments to Yami, for Yami's eyes were filling with unshed tears. The white haired males disappeared with a flash into the Millennium Ring.
Yami, what's the matter?" pried Yugi.
"She's got a boyfriend," Yami half sobbed. (The first time I wrote that I accidentally typed girlfriend it was hilarious.)
By now, silent tears were running down Yami's cheeks and he was having difficulty breathing normally. Yugi's eyes widened in realization of who 'she' was. He patted Yami on the back, (brotherly love not more than that!) not really knowing what else to do. After ten minutes Yami disappeared into the puzzle and put a do-not-disturb sign on the door of his Soul Room. / Stupid Nick. Why does he have to take my Alyssa? Wait she was never mine to begin with sigh/ thought Yami moping.
Not too much later Alyssa came in already dressed, put on makeup, swished various hair products that Yugi could not identify into her hair, then realized Yugi was in the room.
"Oh, hi, Yugi," she said checking her appearance in the mirror. "I thought Yami was in here."
"He's um... resting," Yugi lied.
"OK. I didn't think the picnic was that tiring but whatever," then Alyssa was interrupted by the doorbell. "That's Nick, tell the others I said bye."
Alyssa walked out of the room and opened the door.
"Hey babe," greeted Nick, wrapping Alyssa in a hug.
"What no kiss?" 'she pouted' pecking him on the cheek. Instead he turned and met her lips with his own. No sparks though.
/I wonder what's wrong with him. He does not seem very alert tonight/ thought Alyssa getting into Nick's convertible.
They arrived at the mall talking about random nothings that popped into their heads.
"Alyssa, I have something I need to tell you," started Nick after the duo had gotten their food. Alyssa looked up at him, shifting her concentration from her sub to his face. He sighed and continued, "I've met someone else. We've been dating for two weeks. Sorry, but our relationship is over."
Alyssa was sobbing and hiccuping now.
"Do you want me to take you home now?" questioned a thickheaded Nick. (Thick/nick-it rhymes!)
"NO!" Alyssa screamed so loud that everyone in the food court looked at the pair. She threw her sprite at Nick's face (so cliché) and stormed out of the mall, walking home.
She walked home sobbing and thinking of various ways to torture and kill nick. About seven minutes from her front door a pair of hands grabbed her around the mouth and waist.
"Mmfpt," Alyssa shouted, at least that is what it sounded like.
"Just come quietly, sweet-cheeks and you won't get hurt," her capture whispered in her ear.
Alyssa shuddered at the male voice.
/Yami help!/ Alyssa screamed in her mind before she blacked out.
**Back at Alyssa's house**
/Yami help!/ Yami heard in his mind, snapping him out of his trance like moping.
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I would like to post more but school (or jail depends on your view) has started and spring break is over so now I cannot update as much as I would like to. I will probably be able to write a chapter a week. More reviews=faster updates and better ideas remember that.
Do you like? I thought that this chapter has a great cliffhanger and I would like to know what you think so REVIEW please!! Even if it is criticism.
If you have any questions that need to be answered quickly or the rules for playing duel monster cards (show or real life I don't care) e-mail me then at
Oneyearoffun@hotmail.com
Response to reviewers:
Witchcraft: although Carly denies it she really is that pale. My mom calls her scary-skinned(
Bunny: Jackie's shirt flew off because this is a story and what fun would it be to say her shirt went up a couple of inches? I think that 'glomp' means a tackle/hug I read it in another fiction so I am not sure.
Blank: sorry about the short chapters I try to keep them over a thousand words but sometimes it doesn't work sorry!
Anonymous: Happy? He did not die.
Ylrack: You are a brain sucker y didn't you tell me? And y did u write that in a review? Do you really think that Nick likes me?! EVIDENCE now!! More than PG-13, did I hear you right?
Shegra: the joy of cliffhangers I hope you like this one:
DarkFire aka ILoveJoeyWheeler: sorry but only my friends in real life get to join us so I ask all of you to stop asking me because it is not going to happen! Nice e-mail tho
Lady Yami: thanks!
Aithril the Elf-Maiden: thanks I read two of your stories and they were both awesome please update urs!
DogsruleW: NO! No girl for Malik and only people I know from school/church will be included in my story.. Grr too many people asking that going insane...
Pruningshears (too lazy to log in): y pruningshears as a screen name whatever. Anyways thanks for reviewing so much 2 bad ur graduating cause I go there next year! Go bears! Do you know a Dante C.?
Blahblahblah: here's the next chapter!