Ur reviews have made me happy. I'm updating on time and that makes you [the
reader] happy! Isn't this a nice cycle?
Also, to whoever is good at drawing...I would be eternally grateful if you would draw scenes from the story. I tried to, but as Carly would not tell you, they sucked.
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Alyssa calmly nodded. "I thought so-"
"What?! How can you be calm at a time like this?"
"You know I have my memories of my past life right? Well 5,000 years ago you and Bakura were already married and you got pregnant a week before you turned eighteen. This whole week when you've been sick in the morning, I've suspected-"
"You knew this whole times and didn't say anything?!"
"I also remember you had the worst mood swings ever... And we don't' KNOW anything until we get you checked out by a doctor. Let's go." Carly nodded in agreement. They walked straight past the boys, offering no explanation.
Bakura clutched his head. "What's going on?"
The girls walked into Dr. Nosnhoj's office, thankful it was a walk-in clinic. They signed in and waited patiently-not. Carly bit her nails, a habit she had started twenty minutes ago. Alyssa grabbed and jerked Carly's hand away from her mouth.
"Now is probably not the best time to pick up bad habits," Alyssa scolded, remembering how it had taken her nine years to break her own nail biting habit. Many antagonizing minutes later though they seemed like hours to Carly, the nurse called them in. Mrs. Nosnhoj immediately shook both Carly and Alyssa's hands, like they were old friends, and politely introduced herself.
"What seems to by the problem today?" the doctor asked Carly.
"W-well I-I think I-I'm-" Carly stuttered .
"Yes, yes. I understand." Dr. Nosnhoj handed Carly a cup. "Spit or pee in that so we can get you tested."
Carly took the easy route and hawked a lugi into the cup. The doctor took the cup and left the room.
"Geez Carly, you could have killed a squirrel with that sucker." Carly rolled her eyes, too nervous to laugh. /This could be a totally life changing event if it comes out positive.../ Carly thought, just before Dr. Nosnhoj returned.
"Ladies, the test results will be ready this afternoon." Carly and Alyssa left. Carly raged at the long wait of four hours, so Alyssa drove them to the nearest department store to get some home pregnancy test kits. They headed to the bathroom and Alyssa waited outside the stall. Twenty minutes slowly ticked by.
"Carly, has it worked yet?"
"Yes."
"So is it positive or negative?!"
"I don't know."
"How could you not know!"
"I haven't opened my eyes yet."
"Oh. Want me to look at it?"
"Yeah thanks," Carly said, stepping out of the stall. She handed Alyssa the little test, biting her nail again.
"POSITIVE! Congratulations Carly!" Both girls danced about jubilantly until Carly had an unhappy thought.
"But what will Bakura think?" Carly sullenly pondered aloud.
"I'm sure he'll be overjoyed like we are," Alyssa soothed. Let's go home so we can tell Jackie, Hannah, and the boys." Carly looked terrified. "You're going to have to tell them sooner or later. The sooner the better and in three or four months they'll know anyway."
Sigh. "You're right. I'll have to get it over with now," Carly grumbled.
"Don't be sad, this is supposed to be a happy occasion." Carly did try to smile a little after that, but she was too worried about Bakura's reaction to put her heart behind her teeth.
Contrary to Carly's belief, Bakura was overjoyed at the news of a baby. The father-to-be playfully picked Carly up by the waist and swung her around. Unfortunately, this caused Carly's foot to slam into the corner of the couch. A concerned Bakura instantly sat her down on said couch, fussing over said woman's hurt ankle. Said Carly, however, was suddenly not in a good mood."
"You *censor* just hit my *censor* foot on the *censor*in chair on purpose! You *censor*!"
"And so it begins." Alyssa and Yami laughed from down the hall. Both of them could recall past Carolyn's moodiness quite easily. After all, who could forget someone beheading a solid bronze statue of Selket with her bare hands after stubbing her toe on said statue. Of course that had lead to Carolyn's magic being permanently revoked, but that is a whole other story.
Carly and Bakura worked out that they were not going to put the baby up for adoption, as he or she would be born after they had graduated from high school.
The next day was the Mystery Concert that the O'Rock DJ had given the group of four tickets to. Carly was a bit reluctant to attend, as she didn't want any harm to come to the baby, but in the end she did go. However, Carly, with Bakura, wisely stayed out of the mosh pit and father back in the stands.
Blink 182 blasted out their music, much to the pain of the idiots who hadn't worn ear plugs. Alyssa suddenly found herself floating atop the crowd. She hadn't even felt being picked up, and now she was crowd surfing. The downside is that some male tried to strip off her shirt. Before he could get far though, he crumpled to the ground, soulless.
Yami blew on his finger. Like cowboys used to do in ole western movies. Alyssa was quickly set down on the ground after that. A little too hard, apparently, as one of her earplugs tumbled out of her ear. She clutched the said ear painfully. She tapped Yami on the shoulder, as there was no way her could possible hear her over the music with his ear plugs in, and motioned to her unplugged ear. Understanding, Yami bent down to help look for the missing article. He found the treasure. The ex-Pharaoh stood up, holding up his prize, and glanced around for Alyssa but she never popped up. Yami panicked. He whipped his head back and forth, only to catch a glimpse of pale blond hair with two sacks over his shoulders.
Meanwhile, father back in the stands, Bakura was experiencing a similar problem. Carly had seemingly vanished when he had bent down to pick up a lucky penny from the ground. /I only turned my back for a second/ he thought despairingly.
Cursing the nonexistent security at these gatherings, Yami turned backwards to find Bakura and Carly. He quickly spotted the near albino and shoved his way toward him. They ran out of the concert hall so they could hear each other talk.
"Carly/Alyssa is gone!" Yami and Bakura shouted at each other at the same time.
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Do you think that Carly should be kicked out of her house and come to live with the Alyssa and the FES? PLEASE TELL ME in a review or e-mail. Thanks.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Review Responses~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Cassandra Pegasus- You're good, you would be amazed at how many people were surprised by Carly's baby. Sadly, You're right. And it looks as if that is how it's going to be. Now I just need to figure out how to right it...
Sylvyrfyre- You're horrible! How could you WANT and LAUGH AT Carly for it! Poo on you! Haha! You obviously go to school up North right?
.Arinell- Darn. That sucks. Don't worry the next chapter will be out on time unless something comes up in real life. So should Carly be kicked out of her house or not?
kanika meskhenet- Thanks. And you must have much nicer teachers than I do. So would you rather Carly be kicked out of her house or not?
Anime-Blade- Um yeah, yet another confusingly written review. Thanks anyway!
Setosangel529- Thank you so much! And don't worry the next couple of chapters end in cliffhangers! Buhahaha. Evil me, I already have them written too. The dance lessons came from me needing some excuse to get Yami and Alyssa away from the house and me thinking about how my dancing skills are limited to Dance, Dance Revolution. And that's not really dancing.
Yamijennimoto- ha no they didn't jinx it XP. It's past Bakura's fault anyway or destiny, depending on how you look at it:) And that's a yes right? Sad as it is... Sorry I updated a day late, making you hold your breath for an extra day.
Yami's-Girl-So was that a yes or no? I couldn't tell. Yes it's been a year since I started witing, (WOW I can't believe that, nor did I imagine this taking so long when I started) but a year refers to how long the time in the story is. But do not fear, I will finish this story in a couple of months or hopefully less. Do you mean you wrote them, or you found them?
QuEeN AmAzoN- Surprised? You sounded like it:-) So do you think Carly should be kicked out of her house or not? Dude, It's so confusing to type you name!
Mya Starlight- Thank you. So should Carly be kicked out of her house or not?
Camarao- Wow, your good, I can do most 7 foot songs and some harder, like Silent Hill on challange:-) Mostly I play on Standard level.
:-D
Also, to whoever is good at drawing...I would be eternally grateful if you would draw scenes from the story. I tried to, but as Carly would not tell you, they sucked.
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Alyssa calmly nodded. "I thought so-"
"What?! How can you be calm at a time like this?"
"You know I have my memories of my past life right? Well 5,000 years ago you and Bakura were already married and you got pregnant a week before you turned eighteen. This whole week when you've been sick in the morning, I've suspected-"
"You knew this whole times and didn't say anything?!"
"I also remember you had the worst mood swings ever... And we don't' KNOW anything until we get you checked out by a doctor. Let's go." Carly nodded in agreement. They walked straight past the boys, offering no explanation.
Bakura clutched his head. "What's going on?"
The girls walked into Dr. Nosnhoj's office, thankful it was a walk-in clinic. They signed in and waited patiently-not. Carly bit her nails, a habit she had started twenty minutes ago. Alyssa grabbed and jerked Carly's hand away from her mouth.
"Now is probably not the best time to pick up bad habits," Alyssa scolded, remembering how it had taken her nine years to break her own nail biting habit. Many antagonizing minutes later though they seemed like hours to Carly, the nurse called them in. Mrs. Nosnhoj immediately shook both Carly and Alyssa's hands, like they were old friends, and politely introduced herself.
"What seems to by the problem today?" the doctor asked Carly.
"W-well I-I think I-I'm-" Carly stuttered .
"Yes, yes. I understand." Dr. Nosnhoj handed Carly a cup. "Spit or pee in that so we can get you tested."
Carly took the easy route and hawked a lugi into the cup. The doctor took the cup and left the room.
"Geez Carly, you could have killed a squirrel with that sucker." Carly rolled her eyes, too nervous to laugh. /This could be a totally life changing event if it comes out positive.../ Carly thought, just before Dr. Nosnhoj returned.
"Ladies, the test results will be ready this afternoon." Carly and Alyssa left. Carly raged at the long wait of four hours, so Alyssa drove them to the nearest department store to get some home pregnancy test kits. They headed to the bathroom and Alyssa waited outside the stall. Twenty minutes slowly ticked by.
"Carly, has it worked yet?"
"Yes."
"So is it positive or negative?!"
"I don't know."
"How could you not know!"
"I haven't opened my eyes yet."
"Oh. Want me to look at it?"
"Yeah thanks," Carly said, stepping out of the stall. She handed Alyssa the little test, biting her nail again.
"POSITIVE! Congratulations Carly!" Both girls danced about jubilantly until Carly had an unhappy thought.
"But what will Bakura think?" Carly sullenly pondered aloud.
"I'm sure he'll be overjoyed like we are," Alyssa soothed. Let's go home so we can tell Jackie, Hannah, and the boys." Carly looked terrified. "You're going to have to tell them sooner or later. The sooner the better and in three or four months they'll know anyway."
Sigh. "You're right. I'll have to get it over with now," Carly grumbled.
"Don't be sad, this is supposed to be a happy occasion." Carly did try to smile a little after that, but she was too worried about Bakura's reaction to put her heart behind her teeth.
Contrary to Carly's belief, Bakura was overjoyed at the news of a baby. The father-to-be playfully picked Carly up by the waist and swung her around. Unfortunately, this caused Carly's foot to slam into the corner of the couch. A concerned Bakura instantly sat her down on said couch, fussing over said woman's hurt ankle. Said Carly, however, was suddenly not in a good mood."
"You *censor* just hit my *censor* foot on the *censor*in chair on purpose! You *censor*!"
"And so it begins." Alyssa and Yami laughed from down the hall. Both of them could recall past Carolyn's moodiness quite easily. After all, who could forget someone beheading a solid bronze statue of Selket with her bare hands after stubbing her toe on said statue. Of course that had lead to Carolyn's magic being permanently revoked, but that is a whole other story.
Carly and Bakura worked out that they were not going to put the baby up for adoption, as he or she would be born after they had graduated from high school.
The next day was the Mystery Concert that the O'Rock DJ had given the group of four tickets to. Carly was a bit reluctant to attend, as she didn't want any harm to come to the baby, but in the end she did go. However, Carly, with Bakura, wisely stayed out of the mosh pit and father back in the stands.
Blink 182 blasted out their music, much to the pain of the idiots who hadn't worn ear plugs. Alyssa suddenly found herself floating atop the crowd. She hadn't even felt being picked up, and now she was crowd surfing. The downside is that some male tried to strip off her shirt. Before he could get far though, he crumpled to the ground, soulless.
Yami blew on his finger. Like cowboys used to do in ole western movies. Alyssa was quickly set down on the ground after that. A little too hard, apparently, as one of her earplugs tumbled out of her ear. She clutched the said ear painfully. She tapped Yami on the shoulder, as there was no way her could possible hear her over the music with his ear plugs in, and motioned to her unplugged ear. Understanding, Yami bent down to help look for the missing article. He found the treasure. The ex-Pharaoh stood up, holding up his prize, and glanced around for Alyssa but she never popped up. Yami panicked. He whipped his head back and forth, only to catch a glimpse of pale blond hair with two sacks over his shoulders.
Meanwhile, father back in the stands, Bakura was experiencing a similar problem. Carly had seemingly vanished when he had bent down to pick up a lucky penny from the ground. /I only turned my back for a second/ he thought despairingly.
Cursing the nonexistent security at these gatherings, Yami turned backwards to find Bakura and Carly. He quickly spotted the near albino and shoved his way toward him. They ran out of the concert hall so they could hear each other talk.
"Carly/Alyssa is gone!" Yami and Bakura shouted at each other at the same time.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~IMPORTANT~~~~~~~~~
Do you think that Carly should be kicked out of her house and come to live with the Alyssa and the FES? PLEASE TELL ME in a review or e-mail. Thanks.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~Review Responses~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Cassandra Pegasus- You're good, you would be amazed at how many people were surprised by Carly's baby. Sadly, You're right. And it looks as if that is how it's going to be. Now I just need to figure out how to right it...
Sylvyrfyre- You're horrible! How could you WANT and LAUGH AT Carly for it! Poo on you! Haha! You obviously go to school up North right?
.Arinell- Darn. That sucks. Don't worry the next chapter will be out on time unless something comes up in real life. So should Carly be kicked out of her house or not?
kanika meskhenet- Thanks. And you must have much nicer teachers than I do. So would you rather Carly be kicked out of her house or not?
Anime-Blade- Um yeah, yet another confusingly written review. Thanks anyway!
Setosangel529- Thank you so much! And don't worry the next couple of chapters end in cliffhangers! Buhahaha. Evil me, I already have them written too. The dance lessons came from me needing some excuse to get Yami and Alyssa away from the house and me thinking about how my dancing skills are limited to Dance, Dance Revolution. And that's not really dancing.
Yamijennimoto- ha no they didn't jinx it XP. It's past Bakura's fault anyway or destiny, depending on how you look at it:) And that's a yes right? Sad as it is... Sorry I updated a day late, making you hold your breath for an extra day.
Yami's-Girl-So was that a yes or no? I couldn't tell. Yes it's been a year since I started witing, (WOW I can't believe that, nor did I imagine this taking so long when I started) but a year refers to how long the time in the story is. But do not fear, I will finish this story in a couple of months or hopefully less. Do you mean you wrote them, or you found them?
QuEeN AmAzoN- Surprised? You sounded like it:-) So do you think Carly should be kicked out of her house or not? Dude, It's so confusing to type you name!
Mya Starlight- Thank you. So should Carly be kicked out of her house or not?
Camarao- Wow, your good, I can do most 7 foot songs and some harder, like Silent Hill on challange:-) Mostly I play on Standard level.
:-D