Blaze: 'Inspired by someone else's bravery, I've decided to attempt a HP Fanfic... The timing and
ages are a bit... How you say, strange... The Dark Lord sounds like a Pimp. Haha...'
Note: I have edited the beginning of my story, just to tell you DO NOT USE THE TERM MARY SUE. I like constructive criticism, and I'll work on the darn story and fix it up when I'm done with my English class. And No, I don't read romance novels, I prefer graphic novels from Japan.
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Groups of witches and wizards waved, and hugged their children goodbye. A muggle woman scowled as she pushed two young women through the brickwall with their belongings. Both girls looked equally unhappy about the action as the old woman. One girl dragged along her green and black suitcase, muttering about the happenings. The other grabbed her maroon and gold case, and cheered up as she reached the train.
The first girl shook her long black hair from her face, and shoved a couple first years out of her way. She boarded the train, searching for her fellow Slytherins. She made a face at Pansy Parkinson as she passed her little group. Draco and his cronies were in the next compartment. She poked her head in the door, "Full, Draco?"
Draco looked up, "We have room for one more."
Crabbe and Goyle snickered.
Ariella put her suitcase in the luggage compartment and entered, slamming the door as the blonde girl scampered past. She smirked sitting next to Draco, "Long time, no see, ay?"
Draco nodded, "Where've you been Bloodheart?"
"Places." She answered, shrugging.
"Places? What kind of places?"
"Nowhere special..."
Draco sniffed, "You and your secrets..."
She grinned nudging his shoulder, "What have you been doing? Did daddy dearest get you a job?"
"Don't be ridiculous, Arie." Draco said snickering, "Mother has been trying to fix me up with some of her reading groups' girls..."
"Again?"
"Yes... Oh look, if it isn't Potter." Draco said nastily, motioning to the compartment across from then, "Who's she?" Draco frowned as he looked at the blonde girl with Potter's gang.
"Her?" Arie's eyes widened at the girl in the compartment, "She's nothing special..."
"Of course not, how can you be if you hang around with that lot..." Draco said sneering. As he leaned back he looked out the window, "Good, we're finally getting a move on..."
