Ok so here is chapter 4!!! Yay!!!
AND I GOT SOMEONE TO BETA IT!
So I should be better in spelling and grammar.
Ok so here it is!
Chapter 4
The Elf Within
"Kill her" said Saruman handing him the blade. He raised the blade over the girls head and was ready to drop the blade and cut the girls throat.
His name was Olgik, he knew it wasn't his real name but he couldn't remember that. He was the newest orc to Saruman's army, and was one of the strongest there.
He began to bring his arm down when he heard a voice in the back of his mind. He hesitated for a second but then got ready to cut off her head.
NO! Screamed the voice and stopped him in mid air.
You can't kill her! You wouldn't kill her!
The voice was faint at first but got louder
This isn't like you. You wouldn't do a thing like this.
The orc was struggling within himself and didn't know what to do. He started to get frustrated and swung at the girl
NO!
Screamed the voice once again and he could hardly hear the newest elven captive scream "I'll talk"
Good thought the orc
No not good said the voice you can't let him talk
Olgik was really confused now. He didn't like this voice, not at all, but yet it seemed so familiar.
What do I do then he asked the voice, but there came no respond
"No!" said Estel to Legolas looking at him "you can't."
"But the girl!" argued Legolas
"One girl or ten million innocents!" Shouted Estel. Legolas stayed quiet he didn't know what to say. He knew he was right but he didn't want to see the girl die, After all she was an innocent too.
"Listen to him" came a faint voice, and Legolas looked to the girl. She managed a weak smile and continued, "Do not worry for me." As she suddenly went into a coughing fit spitting out blood and other things.
Legolas just looked at the girl and opened his mouth to say something when she once again spoke.
"Please let them end my life," she said with blood still running out the side of her mouth "I have been waiting for death for a long time." She once again smiled and It broke Legolas's heart. He didn't know what to say. He didn't know what to do. He couldn't take his eyes off her, and watched as she slowly went unconscious.
Saruman was completely stunned by the girl's actions. He couldn't even think. He watched the girl intensely unable to do a thing. He was finally brought out of his daze when he saw the girl slip in to darkness, and He turned to the elvin prince.
"Now tell me what you were doing here."
Sarumans voice took Legolas by surprise; he had drowned everything else out and was lost in thought when it brought him back to reality.
"I will only repeat myself one more time," shouted Saruman "what were you doing here?!"
He didn't know what to do. He looked from Saruman to the girl and back to Saruman. He looked at the girl one more time with tears in his eyes, he had made his decision he only hoped it was the right one.
Olgik watched the scene in front of him unfold. Part of him wanted the elf to talk and wanted to kill the girl too. But the voice in his head wanted to save the girl but kept saying to stop the elf from talking. It was all so confusing and he wished he could decide. He knew if the elf talked the girl would live but just to be used again to make others talk until she was finally killed.
The voice in his mind became even louder and he knew what he had to do. He also knew he would be severely punished later but right now he had to help the elf, the only way he knew how. He lifted up the blade and…
Cliffies hate them don't you! I'm so mean! No not really I just like to put cliffies, but the next chapter doesn't have one. How sad.
Ok hannen le reviewers. And hannen le to you Aranel of mirkwood!
And I'm glad gemini969 and lil cwick liked it! That makes me happy!
Ok so chapter 5 should be up soon! Heads up to you aranel of mirkwood.
Ok well namarie to all of you. (that is how me and my friends spell Namarie ok so don't say a thing)