I gots reviews! Yay!
Son Oliver: sounds like we have something in common but sadly if I told you about my plans for Goku then it would be giving away the plot for the others…meh, it won't take too long to get to that part.
Rejhan: glad you liked the change. Can't have Hercule taking credit for something else now can we :p
Now for the story
Chapter 2: brotherly spatGoten flew swiftly towards Capsule Corp's home base and soon the large domed buildings belonging to it came into view. He landed right in front of the main building and walked inside, slamming the doors open with such force that the glass shattered and their frames were bent and nearly torn off of their hinges.
Everyone in the lobby stopped what they were doing and stared at him as he calmly walked through the room. He pushed past anyone in his way and sent them skidding across the floor. Soon he had everybody avoiding him. He continued through the next set of doors that led through offices and to the stairs, breaking those as well. Everybody snapped out of their shock and the man behind a front desk called after him.
"Sir! You forgot to sign in!"
Zara walked towards the stairs in a huff. She was already going over everything that went wrong in her hour-long session with Vegeta and getting herself ready for the next one.
Next time he'll be the one to be thrown through a wall. See how he likes it… she thought then stopped as she reached the stares and saw Goten's spiky head coming up it almost like a shark's dorsal fin. She stood her ground ready for him.
"You're back early, didn't it go well?" she asked when he reached the top step but instead of answering he pushed her into the wall and continued on his way. She watched him continue on his way and pulled herself out of the now badly dented wall.
"Hey! What was that for?" she yelled at him. He stopped and glared over his shoulder at her.
"Mind your own business and get lost." he growled at her then continued round the corner. Zara watched in surprise then growled.
"Jerk." She muttered and left, being in too much of a bad mood to care about Goten's odd behaviour.
Chichi was having a nice cup of tea in the living room with the ever-busy Bulma who was now half concentrating on a laptop.
"I just wish I knew how Pan and the boys were doing out there. I'm worrying myself sick over this whole mess." Chichi said with a sigh.
"You shouldn't worry too much about it. Pan is with her grandfather and Trunks who are both two of the strongest fighters around. They'll easily be able to handle a Dragonball hunt." Bulma comforted her.
"Yea, I guess so…" Chichi said, trying to reassure herself when suddenly the door burst off of its hinges. Both women gasped and stared at Goten who walked in without a second thought of the door.
"Where's Vegeta?" he barked. Bulma just stared in shock at the door but Chichi recovered fast.
"Goten, what is the meaning of this? How dare you come in here and break the door and address us like that! You apologise to Bulma right now!" she yelled, falling into her usual role. Goten ignored her.
"Where is Vegeta?" He asked again but this time more firmly.
"You just missed him. He took Bra out somewhere." Bulma told him. Goten cursed loudly and attempted to sense the prince's power signature but couldn't. Vegeta was suppressing it.
Goten cursed again and as soon as the word was out of his mouth something hard and metallic crashed into his skull that made a 'clunk' sound resonate through the room.
Chichi held her frying pan loosely at her side as she glared at her son.
"You know better then to curse like that and you still haven't apologised!" she yelled at him and raised the pan threateningly. Goten normally would have winced at this gesture and would do as asked just like any other man in his family but instead he barely even moved. In fact he moved so fast that Chichi didn't notice the bottom of the pan burn away from a quick blast.
He stared at her in a mocking way then turned round to leave. Chichi growled and tried to hit him with the pan to make him stop but his head went through the hole. He raise his brow at her then threw the pan away and walked out, leaving the women to stare shocked after him.
"I don't believe it…my baby won't listen to me any more…" Chichi muttered and nearly sank to her knees. Bulma pulled her up.
"There's something wrong here. We better follow." She said and they both followed Goten down the hall and back to the lobby. He ignored them the whole way there but stopped suddenly just as he stepped into the lobby.
Gohan and Videl were at the front desk signing in while the man kept muttering about destructive people that didn't care about procedure.
Goten gave Gohan a calculating stare and watched his brother before Chichi pushed past him and ran to her eldest son.
"Gohan! I thought you'd be busy grading papers all day." she said.
"Me too but Videl talked me into a break." Gohan replied then noticed his brother.
"Hey Goten, how was your-" Gohan began but was cut off as Goten's fist collided with his face and sent him flying into a coffee table that was in the waiting area. The women gasped and all employees froze on the spot to watch.
"Goten! Why did you do that?" Videl yelled at the 27 year old as she ran to check on her husband.
"What? I thought Gohan could take that." Goten answered her in a mocking tone. Gohan gently pushed his wife aside and got to his feet.
"I can. A weak punch like that isn't enough to hurt me but you caught me by surprise." Gohan told his brother and crossed his arms over his chest. Goten glared.
"Good to know settling down didn't make you a complete wuss then." Goten shot back. Gohan glared at him and Goten continued.
"But I'd still like to see just how pathetic you've gotten." He said and lunged forward. Gohan had to duck under the punch and grab a second.
"Not in here! Lets go somewhere else." Gohan told his brother who nodded. They broke apart and started walking to the exit.
"Gohan! Be careful!" Videl called to him. Gohan gave her a 'don't worry' look and left the building.
"Don't worry, Gohan will sort this out…" Chichi told her daughter in-law, hoping to comfort the both of them.
"I hope so…" Videl muttered as she watched the boys take off.
The boys flew out of the city and kept flying until they were far away from all signs of civilized life. They came to a halt over a desert and floated a good distance away from each other, entering a stare down. Gohan broke the silence.
"I know you're not my brother. I worked it out when you attacked me so who are you and what do you want?" he asked. Goten scoffed.
"You really are too smart for your own good, you know?" Goten said in a deep voice that didn't belong to him.
"Just answer the question." Gohan barked.
"Calm down, you're too stressed for your own good. As for your questions I am Bebi and what I want…you'll find out soon." Bebi Goten replied.
"Bebi huh? Well I guess I'm going to have to get you to start talking." Gohan told him.
"I doubt you're that strong. Lets see." Bebi Goten shot back the dematerialised.
Gohan frowned and had to quickly dodge left as a foot appeared sailing towards him. He didn't have much time to keep dodging after that as Bebi Goten got more accurate with every attempt. Soon Gohan found himself on the receiving end of a multitude of fast paced punches.
Gohan's job was more time consuming then his brother's so he had less time to train so his skills were rustier but he was still stronger then his brother as he proved by grabbing an incoming fist and making Goten's chest meet his foot.
Bebi Goten was nearly thrown backwards but Gohan's grip on his arm stopped him. Gohan began to swing it round and let go when it reached critical velocity, allowing the impostor to sail through the air. Bebi had just managed to make himself stop when Gohan appeared above and came down on his opponent's gut, pushing him down and into the ground.
Goten pulled himself up and got ready to attack. Gohan watched him from above and Goten smirked before powering up. Soon a golden aura burst round him and his hair was a matching gold colour while his eyes went teal. Gohan watched him carefully then powered up, staying even without going super. Goten went transformed to level two and Gohan still stayed even. Bebi Goten frowned.
Of course, mystic. Bebi thought as he went through Goten's memories of Gohan's mystic transformation that given to him by a god. The one that would supposedly produce so much power that the planet would be torn apart if super saiyan was ever used with it. That is supposedly as strong as a sublevel three super saiyan. I won't be able to make him reach his fullest as easily as I hoped…Bebi pondered a strategy then gained an evil glint in his eyes before disappearing.
He appeared in front of Gohan and threw some punches that the older halfling dodged before flying away backwards. Bebi Goten spun round and brought his hands to his side, signalling the familiar signature move of Goku.
"Ka…me…ha…me…HA!" he yelled and Gohan quickly matched his father's move. When the two beams collided, Bebi Goten's was already dangerously close to Gohan's and the scholar struggled to push it back. Goten smirked at the situation and flared his aura out more, accessing his reserves and pushing his beam further forward. Gohan glared at the beams and raised his power level higher. The beams slowly were pushed towards the middle of the boys and with a final scream and burst of power, Gohan reached his full power and sent the beams hurtling towards his brother.
Bebi grinned evilly as the beams got closer and leaked out of Goten's pores in liquid form and travelled down the beams. Whilst Gohan was still preoccupied with putting all his energy into the beam he didn't notice Bebi enter his body the same way he had exited Goten.
Goten fell off of the blasts as he lost consciousness and the beams fired off into the distance and off of the planet, harmlessly dispersing in space. Gohan floated there watching it and panted. Slowly an evil grin spread across his face and when he spoke it was in Bebi's deep voice.
"This is better then I thought. Gohan is much stronger then Goten but Gohan seems to think that there is one other person on this planet at the moment that is stronger then he is. Vegeta…"he said then glanced down at Goten's unconscious form.
"I better pay him a visit and soon." He added and laughed before sweeping up Goten and flying back to Capsule Corp's home base.
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A/N: ok, not many changes to this one. Just more on Bebi Goten's attitude problem…I'll still like to know what you think so you know what to do! Ja'ne!
