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isn't too rough. Any ways thanks and I always make note of your comments,
which I think might help.
Hmmm…. I still don't own anyone… LOL anyways I'm at
Chap. 7 *yey* *^-^*
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Chapter 7:
Obi-Wan was once again crammed into the back of the small transport, being thrown around by his captors horrible driving.
He sighed and pressed his head into his knees as he once again took in the scene that had played only minuets earlier. And once again he came to the same conclusion, there was no way he could have escaped. Both men carried vibro shiv's and it was obvious to Obi-wan that they where skilled in using them.
He'd stomach churned, was there any way to get away? He missed Qui- Gon so much he missed his master's guidance and assurance. Help me master he thought quietly to himself, I am so confused.
***
Qui-Gon pushed on the ship controls willing it to go faster. He could feel his young Padawan's unrest.
***
Siri smiled as they slowed to a stop in front of a small café with peeling letter on the walls. Now maybe the tortured soul of the man standing beside him would be soothed a little to learn the news of his Padawan.
***
Qui-Gon strode into the small café and expertly between the tables. He didn't even stop to knock on the back door for them to acknowledge his presets. Didi looked up as his large friend strode into the room.
"Can see by the look in your eyes that there is no time to loose my friend" he answered Qui-Gon's intense gaze. "Astri was the one who met him, she is in the back room."
***
Obi-Wan could hear the motors of the vehicle slowing and finally coming to a halt. He really didn't have to think about it the only element he had on his side, was surprise. He sat up on his feet and got ready to spring forward and run.
***
Astri looked up as Qui-Gon walked into the small back room and smiled.
"Yoda thought that you might have some information may be a help to me."
"Oh I have more than information!" Astri said enthusiastically, as she handed a small hand healed device to Qui-Gon. I thought this might come in handy.
Goi-Gon looked at the small object in his palm, "It's a tracking device he stated plainly. "This will be of much assistance. But how did you get it on him with out his captor seeing it?"
Astri smiled widely, "Let's just say he may have a mild stomach acke."
Qui-Gon couldn't help but smile a little, despite; it was just like Astri to use her cooking in any way possible. He thanked her and turned to leave, and get on his way.
***
Obi-Wan sprang forward as soon as he heard the door unlock and pushed to escape. The light came to his eyes it was blinding where was he. He took a quick look around the get his surroundings. The weapon hit Obi-Wan like a pile of bricks to the stomach. He instantly doubled over in pain. They had bee waiting for him too run.
One more thought went thought his mind before his vision blurred and he blacked out, he was on a landing platform, he was being shipped off planet! No one would ever be able to find him now…
***
"I must find him…"
LOL I hope you didn't mind the switching back and forth to much, please tell me if it was to confusing or something and I'll try not to do it in the future. Remember you are the reason I'm writing this and your input counts!
-DreamBerry
Hmmm…. I still don't own anyone… LOL anyways I'm at
Chap. 7 *yey* *^-^*
________________________________________________________________________
Chapter 7:
Obi-Wan was once again crammed into the back of the small transport, being thrown around by his captors horrible driving.
He sighed and pressed his head into his knees as he once again took in the scene that had played only minuets earlier. And once again he came to the same conclusion, there was no way he could have escaped. Both men carried vibro shiv's and it was obvious to Obi-wan that they where skilled in using them.
He'd stomach churned, was there any way to get away? He missed Qui- Gon so much he missed his master's guidance and assurance. Help me master he thought quietly to himself, I am so confused.
***
Qui-Gon pushed on the ship controls willing it to go faster. He could feel his young Padawan's unrest.
***
Siri smiled as they slowed to a stop in front of a small café with peeling letter on the walls. Now maybe the tortured soul of the man standing beside him would be soothed a little to learn the news of his Padawan.
***
Qui-Gon strode into the small café and expertly between the tables. He didn't even stop to knock on the back door for them to acknowledge his presets. Didi looked up as his large friend strode into the room.
"Can see by the look in your eyes that there is no time to loose my friend" he answered Qui-Gon's intense gaze. "Astri was the one who met him, she is in the back room."
***
Obi-Wan could hear the motors of the vehicle slowing and finally coming to a halt. He really didn't have to think about it the only element he had on his side, was surprise. He sat up on his feet and got ready to spring forward and run.
***
Astri looked up as Qui-Gon walked into the small back room and smiled.
"Yoda thought that you might have some information may be a help to me."
"Oh I have more than information!" Astri said enthusiastically, as she handed a small hand healed device to Qui-Gon. I thought this might come in handy.
Goi-Gon looked at the small object in his palm, "It's a tracking device he stated plainly. "This will be of much assistance. But how did you get it on him with out his captor seeing it?"
Astri smiled widely, "Let's just say he may have a mild stomach acke."
Qui-Gon couldn't help but smile a little, despite; it was just like Astri to use her cooking in any way possible. He thanked her and turned to leave, and get on his way.
***
Obi-Wan sprang forward as soon as he heard the door unlock and pushed to escape. The light came to his eyes it was blinding where was he. He took a quick look around the get his surroundings. The weapon hit Obi-Wan like a pile of bricks to the stomach. He instantly doubled over in pain. They had bee waiting for him too run.
One more thought went thought his mind before his vision blurred and he blacked out, he was on a landing platform, he was being shipped off planet! No one would ever be able to find him now…
***
"I must find him…"
LOL I hope you didn't mind the switching back and forth to much, please tell me if it was to confusing or something and I'll try not to do it in the future. Remember you are the reason I'm writing this and your input counts!
-DreamBerry