Yay! I finished the first book! LOL (It's a longer chapter so be happy!)
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Siri ran towards the boy. "Obi-Wan," she yelled, the sound of her voice being eaten up by the sound of the battle behind her. The boy didn't move, there was some thing wrong. Siri stopped fast and reached out her hand there was an invisible wall. She could see the boy she could see him breathing, so close and yet so far. Adi sensed her padawans defeat she couldn't get to Obi-Wan. Siri stared at the unconscious form, what had she done to him? She sent a wave of the force, sending it through the invisible and to the boy. Then the strangest thing happened Siri heard a voice in her head ~ don't come in it's a trap ~ Siri gasped and took a step backwards it was Obi-Wan somehow she knew that. And then the dome disappeared Siri reached her hand out and it met air where the dome had been only a minute before ~I said stay there~ came a hash whisper. The next thing Siri knew Obi-Wan was up and sprinting towards the exit and she was in step beside him using her lightsaber to deflect bolts. Two more feet and they where out of the strange contraption. Obi-Wan collapsed, as the silver dome came down trapping Qui-Gon and Adi inside. Siri quickly scooped up the boy and threw him over her shoulder for there was twenty battle druids surrounding her she was severely out numbered.
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Siri didn't even have to think twice she turned and ran, but not towards the ship for she would have to come back for her Master and Qui-Gon, but towards the woods in the opposite direction. Her best chance was to loose the oncoming mob. She ran into the woods the best she could with Obi-Wan over her shoulder and deflected a stray bolt as she entered. She zigzagged through the woods a little ways before finding a tree with low branches and judging the druids far enough away started heaving the boy up it.
Hopefully druids don't have the common sense to look up! She thought feverantly as she sat on a branch on the top of the tree holding Obi-Wan's body to hers to stop it from falling out of the tree. A minute passed Siri was watching a droid a bit away when something caught her attention. An animal came by absently chewing leaves it looked up at the strange pair with dull golden eyes. The creature made a strange sound like a high-pitched scream. Siri swore silently as she saw the droid turn around and start off towards the noise. There was only one thing to do she gathered the unconscious boy into her arms yet again and jumped out of the tree into thin air. She landed on the beast, it reared up, But Siri was expecting it and clutched to the beast with her knees, as she clutched Obi-Wan with her arm. She reached out the other arm and put it on the beast's long head. The beast swayed and stood now fully under the young girls control, and then dashed off leaving the druids far behind.
***
Siri shifted the boy in front of her into what seemed to be a more comfortable position. The trip had been anything but comfortable but she had lost the druids. It was growing darker by the second and she knew she had to find shelter soon. She hated to admit it but she was actually quite tired.
***
Siri lay Obi-Wan down on the bare rock, then turned to her survival pack. She lay out his sleep mat and moved Obi-Wan onto it. She stared down at the young face searching over everything she had ever learned trying to find what might be wrong with the boy. Suddenly gazing at his face she felt a sharp pang of guilt. "Look I'm sorry for not saying sorry Ok?" she could feel the tears coming and she just couldn't fight them. Siri quickly picked herself up, got her sleeping mat out and prepared some food capsules. And tears still glistening on her eyelids she began to sing.
"Nemurenu yoru ni, Hitori utau uta, Wataru kaze to issho ni, Omoi wo nosete tobu yo"
***
Inside Obi-Wan was in an eternal struggle. Shapes danced a round in this place, characters from his past memories, somewhere clear and some quite vague. It was safe here he could stay here forever. Where he would never have to worry again, for pain was non-existent in this place. He heard the faint sound of music, it was beautiful it reminded him of someone he once knew. He took a step towards it but as he moved towards reality the pain came back. In his chest, it was as if his heart was breaking, and he was so tired. What if he just sat down to rest for a while? The music washed over him if he stopped now he would never go on he knew. Yet it would be so simple so easy. He got up again, what would Bant think? He took a step and the pain blossomed back in his chest. But he kept moving. What would Garen and Reeft think he pictured them, always willing to fight for there friend. His muscles were aching he was feeling so tired. What would Qui-Gon do? He remembered Qui-Gon, in his memories before him, he always had an extra burst of energy somewhere, and Siri she would scoff at him she never gave up. Obi-Wan looked inside him and found that extra energy he needed. He took the steps one step at a time. He stopped his memories where swirling the music was starting to fade and warp, the music. It was faintly familiar Cerasi what would she think she fought against all odds for a lost cause and even lost her life, but she succeeded. He would never give up. And suddenly it was like Obi-Wan could feel all his friends there around him in memory and spirit they cheered him on they willed him to do his hardest and they believed in him doubtlessly. His friends where why he went on they where his will and he would not let him down. Obi-Wan ran towards the appearing light and the song that was now becoming clearer.
His eyes fluttered open slightly and he thought he saw some one above him "Cera?" he started weakly but fell silent. Siri stopped singing as she stared down at the boy whose eyes were now back closed 'Cera?' she thought. She smiled he would be ok now. She gently kissed him on the forehead. "Sleep now". She whispered. "It'll be ok."
End Book1
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I case U are wondering my writing is divided into 3 books, I got this from one of my favorite authors Philip Pullman. I just finished this chapter and I was like this would be a good place to end a book so I did LOL. So the story isn't over just one piece of it. Luv_yah_so_R&R: DreamBerry(86@hotmail.com)
Siri ran towards the boy. "Obi-Wan," she yelled, the sound of her voice being eaten up by the sound of the battle behind her. The boy didn't move, there was some thing wrong. Siri stopped fast and reached out her hand there was an invisible wall. She could see the boy she could see him breathing, so close and yet so far. Adi sensed her padawans defeat she couldn't get to Obi-Wan. Siri stared at the unconscious form, what had she done to him? She sent a wave of the force, sending it through the invisible and to the boy. Then the strangest thing happened Siri heard a voice in her head ~ don't come in it's a trap ~ Siri gasped and took a step backwards it was Obi-Wan somehow she knew that. And then the dome disappeared Siri reached her hand out and it met air where the dome had been only a minute before ~I said stay there~ came a hash whisper. The next thing Siri knew Obi-Wan was up and sprinting towards the exit and she was in step beside him using her lightsaber to deflect bolts. Two more feet and they where out of the strange contraption. Obi-Wan collapsed, as the silver dome came down trapping Qui-Gon and Adi inside. Siri quickly scooped up the boy and threw him over her shoulder for there was twenty battle druids surrounding her she was severely out numbered.
***
Siri didn't even have to think twice she turned and ran, but not towards the ship for she would have to come back for her Master and Qui-Gon, but towards the woods in the opposite direction. Her best chance was to loose the oncoming mob. She ran into the woods the best she could with Obi-Wan over her shoulder and deflected a stray bolt as she entered. She zigzagged through the woods a little ways before finding a tree with low branches and judging the druids far enough away started heaving the boy up it.
Hopefully druids don't have the common sense to look up! She thought feverantly as she sat on a branch on the top of the tree holding Obi-Wan's body to hers to stop it from falling out of the tree. A minute passed Siri was watching a droid a bit away when something caught her attention. An animal came by absently chewing leaves it looked up at the strange pair with dull golden eyes. The creature made a strange sound like a high-pitched scream. Siri swore silently as she saw the droid turn around and start off towards the noise. There was only one thing to do she gathered the unconscious boy into her arms yet again and jumped out of the tree into thin air. She landed on the beast, it reared up, But Siri was expecting it and clutched to the beast with her knees, as she clutched Obi-Wan with her arm. She reached out the other arm and put it on the beast's long head. The beast swayed and stood now fully under the young girls control, and then dashed off leaving the druids far behind.
***
Siri shifted the boy in front of her into what seemed to be a more comfortable position. The trip had been anything but comfortable but she had lost the druids. It was growing darker by the second and she knew she had to find shelter soon. She hated to admit it but she was actually quite tired.
***
Siri lay Obi-Wan down on the bare rock, then turned to her survival pack. She lay out his sleep mat and moved Obi-Wan onto it. She stared down at the young face searching over everything she had ever learned trying to find what might be wrong with the boy. Suddenly gazing at his face she felt a sharp pang of guilt. "Look I'm sorry for not saying sorry Ok?" she could feel the tears coming and she just couldn't fight them. Siri quickly picked herself up, got her sleeping mat out and prepared some food capsules. And tears still glistening on her eyelids she began to sing.
"Nemurenu yoru ni, Hitori utau uta, Wataru kaze to issho ni, Omoi wo nosete tobu yo"
***
Inside Obi-Wan was in an eternal struggle. Shapes danced a round in this place, characters from his past memories, somewhere clear and some quite vague. It was safe here he could stay here forever. Where he would never have to worry again, for pain was non-existent in this place. He heard the faint sound of music, it was beautiful it reminded him of someone he once knew. He took a step towards it but as he moved towards reality the pain came back. In his chest, it was as if his heart was breaking, and he was so tired. What if he just sat down to rest for a while? The music washed over him if he stopped now he would never go on he knew. Yet it would be so simple so easy. He got up again, what would Bant think? He took a step and the pain blossomed back in his chest. But he kept moving. What would Garen and Reeft think he pictured them, always willing to fight for there friend. His muscles were aching he was feeling so tired. What would Qui-Gon do? He remembered Qui-Gon, in his memories before him, he always had an extra burst of energy somewhere, and Siri she would scoff at him she never gave up. Obi-Wan looked inside him and found that extra energy he needed. He took the steps one step at a time. He stopped his memories where swirling the music was starting to fade and warp, the music. It was faintly familiar Cerasi what would she think she fought against all odds for a lost cause and even lost her life, but she succeeded. He would never give up. And suddenly it was like Obi-Wan could feel all his friends there around him in memory and spirit they cheered him on they willed him to do his hardest and they believed in him doubtlessly. His friends where why he went on they where his will and he would not let him down. Obi-Wan ran towards the appearing light and the song that was now becoming clearer.
His eyes fluttered open slightly and he thought he saw some one above him "Cera?" he started weakly but fell silent. Siri stopped singing as she stared down at the boy whose eyes were now back closed 'Cera?' she thought. She smiled he would be ok now. She gently kissed him on the forehead. "Sleep now". She whispered. "It'll be ok."
End Book1
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I case U are wondering my writing is divided into 3 books, I got this from one of my favorite authors Philip Pullman. I just finished this chapter and I was like this would be a good place to end a book so I did LOL. So the story isn't over just one piece of it. Luv_yah_so_R&R: DreamBerry(86@hotmail.com)