Red Red Sky
I had written the last six chapters when I was in high school, there has been around a year long pause since I wrote those, maybe longer I don't even remember. What I am going to try to do is reformat all the chapters, such to the points of grammar and not screw too much with the story. Red Red Sky will stay in the same story line, I was writing is at a Shinji-Rei Fic, though now I don't know what type of twists or problems we will see. I know for sure the next angel attack will be a lot of fun to write. Though because of the huge pause, my writing style has changed… so just hang in there, and I hope to have a new Chapter out by February.
Preview from Chapter 7 – Cry
Shinji sat inside Unit 1 thinking how to make his synch ratio go up. Though at the same time he couldn't understand his feelings for what happened to him and Rei. It's been three weeks since he found out that he would be staying with Rei without any problem from his father. The feeling was tearing at his heart, he felt trapped inside himself as if he wanted to rip out, burst out of his shell that he was living in.
Ritsuko asked Shinji to move his right arm to see test ratio with Eva's body. Shinji tried to move Unit 1 but some force in the back of his mind he rejected his command, his mind felt a sharp pain and then there was nothing. Ritsuko looked at the brainwave patters in the plug, but everything seemed fine; until she slowed the waveforms down to see it in more precise fashion. Yes there was interference in his brain patterns, as if he had two brains running at different speeds and even different synch.
A worker that was watching the test screamed and started running. The eyes had turned red on Unit 1. Ritsuko thought that Shinji had snapped, but when she turned on the plug systems camera she couldn't believe her eyes. Shinji was sitting there with his eyes open, looking forward towards the view screen inside the plug. A second later the sound kicked into the loud speakers inside the command room, a terrified scream had blown past everyones ears, it sound as if someone was torturing someone by pealing their fingernails off. It was Shinji's cry, his roar, his pain; it flew through Nerv as if it was the end of the world.
The eyes of Unit 1 started to glow even brighter, it started to tear away from the war harnases and a roar of fury vibrated inside the containment room. The right shoulder broke first, and Unit 1 used this advantage to throw a huge punch into the wall. It broke through the wall and smashed into some piping behind the stainless white painted steel encasing of the Unit. Pulling its arm out of the hole unit one made it grabbed its knife and started to cut off the rests of the restraints.
Shinji Screamed "YOU WILL ALL DIE!!!"
Haha that was fun, now what's striking about this, it might not be chapter 7 at all, it might just be me making more bla bla crap up. Don't worry I'll work on it. But if I don't, don't worry, probably middle or late February. And chapters 1-6 are gonna get a whole new verson. ITS GONNA GO BETA, SINCE IT WAS ALPHA WHEN I TYPED THIS it. I never proofread it or anything, cause I was in a hurry to pump out chapters for you guys. But don't worry… It will all work out, I will reread through them, have them proof ridden hehe, and it will all be good. By my fellow readers, writers, and those who don't have lives. Love you all