This is my 1st Jak fic so enjoy!

Jak and Keira were walking on Sandover Beach near sunset Keira had acedeltly tripped going down the cliffs that led to the beach. Oh my ankel huts really badly, sorry Jak looks like we wont be going for a walk.
Jak just looked at her sympatheticly. He bent down and picked her up and started carring her down the beach. Even if you can't walk I still can said Jak. Contrary to popular belief Jak wasn't mute he just did not like to talk. He caried her all the way to the ruins (the 3 towers at the end of the beach where you chase the seagules) and they went to sit at the top to watch the sunset. As they sat there enjoying the dying warmth of the sun Jak niticed that Keira was starting to doze off. He also felt a little sleepy he decided closing his eyes for a second would not hurt. Jak jolted awake to see that the sun was almost done setting he looked down to see Keira asleep. he decided he'd let her sleep for a minut untill they would go back. Jak sat there watching the sun and realized something the sun wasn't setting...it was rising!! Jak quickly woke Keira and they started running back tward the village. Jak and Keira were sneaking back in to Samos' hut and everything was pretty quiet maby Samos wasn't awake yet...WHERE HAVE YOU TWO BEEN!!! ...or maby he was.
Oh hi Daddy how are you? asked Keira. DON'T HI DADDY ME YOU TWO HAVE BEEN GONE ALL NIGHT I HAVE BEEN WORRIED SICK. I MEAN YOU COULD HAVE BEEN EATIN BY LURKERS OR ... Samos suddeny went quiet. You could have done something out there. DADDY!!! I can't beleve you would think that. Keira yelled at Samos while Jak gave him a shocked and discusted look. Yes well you never know with boys especially after they have been influenced by someone like say Daxter. Whats wrong with Daxter? asked Jak.You never liked him did you? I would not say I don't like him he is just very,
very, very,very (very about 100 more times) annoying. He has a point there Jak. Keira said. Anyway you two had better not stay out like that again EVER!!! Jak and Keira just looked down and said Yes Sir/Daddy.
Now you are free to go I wont punish you thid time. With that they ran out of the hut and stood on the wrap around porch. So I guess Samos is very mad hu? Obviously! Ummm... so... do you want to um... go on another um... walk sometime? asked Jak. You know what I'd love to. said Keira. She then turned to him and they shaired their first kiss.

Somewhere on the other side of Sandover Daxter's ears perked up. Wait a minuet.... Jak is kissing someone and I'm not there to stop it or see it well I have to put a stop to this. With that Daxter stomped in Jak's direction to stop his kiss ans ruin the moment like always.

so wach ya think good bad? JakxKeira pairings forever none of that JakxAshlin crao in the 3rd game!
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