The Star and the Wind: Book II Return of the Past Chapter 1: Prologue Tale of the past, a sailor moon fanfic

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The Star and the Wind – Book II: The Past Returns

Prologue - Tale of the past
By Pluto Knight,
Copyright © 2002/2004

A 1000 years ago; The end of the Silver Millennium:

She stood there looking at the man she loved so dearly. The attack on the Moon had come suddenly and with out warning and now everything was falling apart. Everything that she loved was being destroyed, all because of a jealous woman name Beryl who wanted to rule the universe, regardless of the cost. Her lover and other men from the inner and outer planets had left the Moon to help the prince of Earth fighting the Dark Kingdom and prevent them from winning the war that had been fought for months. She had cried, begging him not to go there since it was an evil place, filled with death and darkness. A place that none had returned from yet. The Earth had slowly fallen to the power of The Dark Kingdom and now it was the Moons turn to fall; to be swallowed by the darkness as the last place in the universe that was ruled by the light.

A shiver went down her spin as she, along with the other princesses who stood beside her as she was by her dying love, glanced at the evil Queen and her 4 general hovering above them. Holding his hand, she felt him getting more and more cold. He was going down the river of death, which was by no mean a horrible place, considering the pain her was in. Mostly quite, like sitting in a boat covered by the chilling fog and slowly being lead with the river to where it might end.

She put a hand to his chin. It wasn't as warm as it used to be.

"We shall see each other again, my love." The princess of the wind whispered as the tears hit his shirt, soaking it. She looked up at the Moon Queen who closed her eyes in sorrow, pain and anger. He was gone. The young princess let out a scream of pain and sorrow, while the horrid sound of laughter from the four Dark Generals rang in her ears.

"Should I live when this is over with, my heart will never belong to anyone but you… my only love." She swore, before everything exploded in a blinding red light, crushing whatever that might be standing untouched by the destructive forces of the Dark Kingdom.

So how was this one? And please, do review.
TBC in: Chapter 1 – A troubled heart.