My ear feels so wierd. It's all....bumpy....that's the ear I'm half deaf
out of. Why am I telling you this? I have no idea......
These few chapters are mostly on Magnet, then they get back to Zig Zag and how he's doing. k?
I'm thinking maybe I should raise the rating. Tell me if you think I should.
Chapter 21: Broken
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"What's so special about his aunt?" Armpit asked.
"Man, you don't know anything about Magnet do you?" Squid yelled at him. Armpit backed up.
"Whoah, calm down Squiddy." X-Ray commanded, stepping between Armpit and Squid. "Now, explain to us about his aunt."
"His mom died of AID's, his dad killed himself, he and his like, 10 brothers lived by themselves in a famine area until they finally got moved to Mexico to live with his aunt. There's more to it then that, but if you really want to find out, ask Magnet. Just not right now." Squid said to them, and then went into the tent after Magnet.
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After several minutes of Magnet rambling on in Spanish, Squid finally got him to speak English.
"Man, it's not fair!" Magnet yelled, sniffing and crying. He had destroyed everything in his way, the tent was a mess now. Clothes, broken crates, and other things were lying astrewn.
"It'll be okay." Squid said, putting his arm around the sobbing Magnet.
"No it won't! Don't you get it? Everybody that I care about and love dies!" Magnet shouted, throwing a ceramic figurine of a dog across the room, where it hit the wall and broke. Squid knew that that figurine had ment a lot to Magnet.
Magnet reached for something else to throw, but Squid grabbed his arm.
"It'll get better, man." Squid said, lowering Magnet's arm back down. He erupted into tears again, sobbing uncontrollably.
Squid just sat there, not knowing what to do. Finally, he patted Magnet's back. It just seemed like something a friend would do. "Like I said man, It'll get better."
As Squid said this, he looked over to the little ceramic dog that Magnet had thrown. It was broken. Magnet was too.
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1:30 in the morning. Who would be up at this hour?
Squid sighed heavily and tried to roll back over in his scratchy cot. He pulled the pillow up to his face, and then instantly pulled it back away after getting a whiff of it. Sour Milk and dirt. He groaned, and then sat up trying to figure out what had woke him up.
He heard a rustling noise a few cots away. He slowley crept over to the source of the noise. He stopped at Magnet's cot. He could just barely see Magnet's face a few inches away. It was obvious, even in the dim light, that he was crying again. He was doing something else thought, too. Alan could tell.
"What are you doing Magnet?" Squid asked, then his eyes got big as Magnet held up the bottle of pills that he had swiped from Zig's bag.
"I just want it to end." Magnet said, his face completly blank, but the tears still rolled down.
These few chapters are mostly on Magnet, then they get back to Zig Zag and how he's doing. k?
I'm thinking maybe I should raise the rating. Tell me if you think I should.
Chapter 21: Broken
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"What's so special about his aunt?" Armpit asked.
"Man, you don't know anything about Magnet do you?" Squid yelled at him. Armpit backed up.
"Whoah, calm down Squiddy." X-Ray commanded, stepping between Armpit and Squid. "Now, explain to us about his aunt."
"His mom died of AID's, his dad killed himself, he and his like, 10 brothers lived by themselves in a famine area until they finally got moved to Mexico to live with his aunt. There's more to it then that, but if you really want to find out, ask Magnet. Just not right now." Squid said to them, and then went into the tent after Magnet.
~~~~~~~~~~~
After several minutes of Magnet rambling on in Spanish, Squid finally got him to speak English.
"Man, it's not fair!" Magnet yelled, sniffing and crying. He had destroyed everything in his way, the tent was a mess now. Clothes, broken crates, and other things were lying astrewn.
"It'll be okay." Squid said, putting his arm around the sobbing Magnet.
"No it won't! Don't you get it? Everybody that I care about and love dies!" Magnet shouted, throwing a ceramic figurine of a dog across the room, where it hit the wall and broke. Squid knew that that figurine had ment a lot to Magnet.
Magnet reached for something else to throw, but Squid grabbed his arm.
"It'll get better, man." Squid said, lowering Magnet's arm back down. He erupted into tears again, sobbing uncontrollably.
Squid just sat there, not knowing what to do. Finally, he patted Magnet's back. It just seemed like something a friend would do. "Like I said man, It'll get better."
As Squid said this, he looked over to the little ceramic dog that Magnet had thrown. It was broken. Magnet was too.
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1:30 in the morning. Who would be up at this hour?
Squid sighed heavily and tried to roll back over in his scratchy cot. He pulled the pillow up to his face, and then instantly pulled it back away after getting a whiff of it. Sour Milk and dirt. He groaned, and then sat up trying to figure out what had woke him up.
He heard a rustling noise a few cots away. He slowley crept over to the source of the noise. He stopped at Magnet's cot. He could just barely see Magnet's face a few inches away. It was obvious, even in the dim light, that he was crying again. He was doing something else thought, too. Alan could tell.
"What are you doing Magnet?" Squid asked, then his eyes got big as Magnet held up the bottle of pills that he had swiped from Zig's bag.
"I just want it to end." Magnet said, his face completly blank, but the tears still rolled down.