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"Speak"
'Translations'
Botan and Hiei were on their way to SmartPets to pick up Hiei's things.
"Hey Shadow, do you think we should get food, or litter first?"
"Meow" 'Baka onna, she must of forgot'
"Hey, I am not a baka onna, I can understand you! Now what do you think we should get first?"
"Meow, meow. MEOW!" 'How did you... nevermind... FOOD! I'm starving.'
"Okay, you can have some fish, just for now. I highly doubt that you would want to jump to some hard cat food, from eating trash."
"Meow! Hiss." 'It was not trash, it tasted good!"
"Okay, lets go." Then they ran off to the fish market, once again Botan running and Shadow kind-of having to chatch up.
"I'll have two 5 pound tunas, please"
"Very well, good-lookin'" Said the very fine looking fish gutter. Short brown hair, bronze skin tone, blue eyes.
"Meow, meow?" 'He's up to something, to think you're a good-lookin' woman'
"Be quite, I don't like him, this will get us a discount."
"Meowww" 'Ohhh'
"Thank you. How much?"
"Oh it's free, since it seems you have a small pet to feed."
"Thank you sooo much!" Then Botan and Hiei ran off to her house, she would have to go get his stuff after they ate.
"Okay Shadow, do you want it cooked or raw?"
"Meow? Meow hiss, meow!" 'What? How could you ask stupid question, cooked!'
"Sorry, I didn't now, man for a cute cat you sure have a bad temper, I think I'll give you a nick-name, Hiei. That's a guy I hang ouy with. He's kind of cute too, in a death, goth, kind of way"
"Meow?" 'What's goth?'
"Oh, it's when people dress in all black, and mainly act on death and evil."
"Meow?!" 'Wow, wait, you think he's cute?!"
"Okay, dinners done, eat up soon, so we can get your other stuff." She said with a very chreeful smile.
"MEOW, MEOW MEOW!" 'FOOD! I'M SO FUCKIN' HUNGRY!' He ran after the fish and tore it to shreds with his little fangs.
"Okay, okay, no need to cuss. You done? Okay lets go to SmartPets!"
"Meow, meow." 'Whatever onna.'
And off they went to SmartPets for some more shopping. 'Shadow' running after Botan, who kind of forgot him, skipping down the street.
How was that chapter. Thanks for the advice, and next chapter should be up on the 17th so wait up, and review. No update untill at least one more review.