Got a lot more reviews than I expected which was such a pleasant surprise.
Pleasant, damn it I sound likes an old woman. Onto the thank you messages
anyway ^_^.
The true Englishman: Thanks bruv! I'll beta soon, hope your having fun and the Paris Hilton thing was shit hot. Third leg? What third leg?
Ammmmmmmy: Now, now calm down. We all know what happens when stories are a bit too risqué. *Cough* Draco and Hermione in the prefect's bathroom. *Cough*. Heehaw (FEEL FREE TO CALL ME DONKEY AT ANY TIME. I'm in that good mood again muahahaha). I'll think about it though, and it's given me an idea to work into an upcoming "debate".
EgyptsStar: Thanks. I'm getting nervous now if I produce a really crap story everyone's going to be miffed :-( Eeek. It's only based loosely around the movie though. Very loosely.
Miarae: Useful advice. On my holiday (hence late updating) I read a few book and worked out what you were saying. Tell me what else I need to do, as that useful little arrangement of pixels at the bottom of the review box says a well-rounded critique is useful blah, it's right. Oh, and I was trying to show Hermione liked to be in control. I take all of your reviews into account whilst I write a story, whether if it's for ff.net or something else, you've helped me loads and hopefully you will continue to help?
Natyslacks: Thanks sometimes it's nice to just get a pat on the back.
Wytil: Yeah, it is a kind of torture. I was stuck in a car for 6 and half hours today. Ten... God damn it that would be hard!
CuTe-BaYbE-GuRl: Cheers, I'm glad you like my story.
Orlando's-Gurl: Sorry, as mentioned earlier many times I was on holiday for a while so couldn't update. Thanks so much.
Please keep reviewing; it's nice to know what I need to improve on or if I have improved which hopefully will happen whilst I progress with my writing. I hope you like the chapter, and if you don't as always tell me why in a review.
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"That is all!" Exclaimed Ron. The bunch of students sighed heavily. Harry, Blaise and Draco started to make their way out but Hermione stood by Ron and Dean,
"Hermione?" Draco called, "OI!"
"What?" Hermione said moodily,
"Are you coming?" Draco asked, "I was planning on talking to these two or could you not work out that was why I hadn't moved?" Draco looked shocked,
"I didn't think you'd want to" Hermione laughed,
"I do and I will so go away or do I need to spell it out?"
"Fine be like that" Draco turned on his heel,
"Snotty bastard" Hermione muttered, Draco turned back and glared at the three resentfully. He stalked out, leaving Hermione in the potions room growling softly like a cat.
Ron asked Hermione if she actually liked Malfoy and how she put up with them but quickly changed the subject. Soon Seamus walked in; he'd obviously waited for them.
Hermione got up and soon they were engrossed in conversation about who was the worst teacher in Hogwarts after Snape. Hermione found this topic interesting yet as they were sat eating she couldn't stop herself taking sneaky glances over at Harry, Blaise and Draco but each time they were engrossed in conversation. After every glance she mentally punched herself for succumbing to her temptations. She still added into their conversation regularly but her mind was in a conflict. Ron and Seamus were sat opposite leaving her next to Dean.
"I'm just going to the little girls room," She said with a grin. She poked Dean on the thigh with her index finger so he got what she was doing. She taken a guess that he'd be slow and after all better to be safe than sorry right?
"I'll come with you, just in case some people try and ambush you" Dean said with a meaningful look at Ron and Seamus.
"Doyoantusstocometo" Hermione frowned disapprovingly, Ron took a deep gulp, he still had the table manners of a pig, an un-refined one at that, "Do you want us to come to?" It was indeed what Hermione thought but she shook her head,
"I think I'd be quite alright on my own but better be safe than sorry eh?" Ron nodded as Hermione walked out of the great hall her hips swaying with Dean following eagerly though he was doing a good job of covering it up. He was walking naturally, at a natural pace too. As soon as they were out of the hall Hermione grabbed his hand and broke into a run. Dean was healthy he had muscles that not many people knew about. Hermione had asked him once and he explained he loved water sports swimming, diving and even surfing a sport that not many wizards knew about.
*~*~*~*~* Harry, Blaise and Draco's end of the table*~*~*~*~* (A/N Hehe!)
"Where's she going?" Ginny demanded sat beside Blaise,
"I have no idea but if she does something with Thomas I'll poison him" Draco spat out venomously,
"Are you sure there's nothing going on between you two?" Luna asked from the depths of Harry's lap. This was followed by murmurs of assent,
"I'm positive" Draco grabbed Dennis Creevey's arm who was just going to sit down for something to eat, "Did you see what Hermione Granger just did?" He gave the boy's arm a shake, "Did you?"
"Yeah," He pulled his arm out of Draco grip, "She took Dean Thomas' arm and ran down the corridor" He chuckled, and walked off to his seat,
"I'll kill him," said Draco standing up,
"Don't" Luna grabbed his arm and he just sat down.
~*~*~*~*Draco's POV*~*~*~*~
{Why did I sit down? Why?}
[Because you're scared]
{I may not be in gryffindor but I am still brave and of the valiant hearted!}
[That doesn't mean anything. You're scared now]
{What of?}
[Hermione, Thomas and yourself]
{Why?}
[Hermione you don't want her to reject you. You want her for yourself, to be faithful. You want her love. You're scared of Dean Thomas because he might be better than you, not in most eyes but in Hermione's eyes and you're scared of yourself.]
{That's a load of rubbish I can't be scared of myself, you're making it sound like I should be carted off to St. Mungo's any minute.}
[You're scared that you're not good enough Draco, you're scared that you picked someone who is so incompatible with you.]
{I'm not scared}
[You're not scared you're in denial and worried]
I am not talking to myself anymore. I'm not in denial; I know Hermione prefers Thomas to me. I'm angry with her. She'd had it; I'm not going to hurt her, not with wands or fist. I'm not arguing with her here, I'll argue with her later on tonight where we can go through this properly straighten the cards out. Sort this shit into files. I just... Don't get her. I like to be in control, I like to know what I'm doing.
~*~*~*~*End of POV*~*~*~*~
The rest of the day passed by slowly, Harry trying to make forced conversation between Draco and Hermione. Hermione sat with Ron, Dean or Seamus as often as possible, which was not that much surprisingly. In ancient runes Hermione was so distracted she managed to say that kano could also be called keneaz and kuanaz instead of kenaz and kaunaz. She managed to misspell the old English meaning of kano as cenn instead of cen and said it mean rejection instead of acceptance. Then to top it all of she managed to say it was associated with the Norse god Tiw when it was actually associated with the goddess Nerthus. She was so frustrated she just lost concentration. Draco kept glancing over at her from the other side of the room.
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After dinner Hermione walked into the common room after Draco and slouched into the sofa,
"Well...." Draco said. He was stood up pacing the floor whilst staring at his hands. He'd placed the fingertips of his hands together to make a tent, "Well...."
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I want to get this up, you will get your next chapter either tomorrow or the day after depending on reviews. For the bit on ancient runes as my own knowledge would unfortunately suffice, but with more hard work it will, I referred to my useful runes book written by Ralph H. Blum and Susan Loughan.
Next chapter: Argument... And some more stuff if I have time.
Thanks to the silent readers and especially for the reviews and if I did not mention you, please tell me in a review and I apologize profusely. I hope everyone enjoyed it whether you did or not I thank my reviewers in advance. As you can tell reviews mean an awful lot to me!
Love Pin.
The true Englishman: Thanks bruv! I'll beta soon, hope your having fun and the Paris Hilton thing was shit hot. Third leg? What third leg?
Ammmmmmmy: Now, now calm down. We all know what happens when stories are a bit too risqué. *Cough* Draco and Hermione in the prefect's bathroom. *Cough*. Heehaw (FEEL FREE TO CALL ME DONKEY AT ANY TIME. I'm in that good mood again muahahaha). I'll think about it though, and it's given me an idea to work into an upcoming "debate".
EgyptsStar: Thanks. I'm getting nervous now if I produce a really crap story everyone's going to be miffed :-( Eeek. It's only based loosely around the movie though. Very loosely.
Miarae: Useful advice. On my holiday (hence late updating) I read a few book and worked out what you were saying. Tell me what else I need to do, as that useful little arrangement of pixels at the bottom of the review box says a well-rounded critique is useful blah, it's right. Oh, and I was trying to show Hermione liked to be in control. I take all of your reviews into account whilst I write a story, whether if it's for ff.net or something else, you've helped me loads and hopefully you will continue to help?
Natyslacks: Thanks sometimes it's nice to just get a pat on the back.
Wytil: Yeah, it is a kind of torture. I was stuck in a car for 6 and half hours today. Ten... God damn it that would be hard!
CuTe-BaYbE-GuRl: Cheers, I'm glad you like my story.
Orlando's-Gurl: Sorry, as mentioned earlier many times I was on holiday for a while so couldn't update. Thanks so much.
Please keep reviewing; it's nice to know what I need to improve on or if I have improved which hopefully will happen whilst I progress with my writing. I hope you like the chapter, and if you don't as always tell me why in a review.
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"That is all!" Exclaimed Ron. The bunch of students sighed heavily. Harry, Blaise and Draco started to make their way out but Hermione stood by Ron and Dean,
"Hermione?" Draco called, "OI!"
"What?" Hermione said moodily,
"Are you coming?" Draco asked, "I was planning on talking to these two or could you not work out that was why I hadn't moved?" Draco looked shocked,
"I didn't think you'd want to" Hermione laughed,
"I do and I will so go away or do I need to spell it out?"
"Fine be like that" Draco turned on his heel,
"Snotty bastard" Hermione muttered, Draco turned back and glared at the three resentfully. He stalked out, leaving Hermione in the potions room growling softly like a cat.
Ron asked Hermione if she actually liked Malfoy and how she put up with them but quickly changed the subject. Soon Seamus walked in; he'd obviously waited for them.
Hermione got up and soon they were engrossed in conversation about who was the worst teacher in Hogwarts after Snape. Hermione found this topic interesting yet as they were sat eating she couldn't stop herself taking sneaky glances over at Harry, Blaise and Draco but each time they were engrossed in conversation. After every glance she mentally punched herself for succumbing to her temptations. She still added into their conversation regularly but her mind was in a conflict. Ron and Seamus were sat opposite leaving her next to Dean.
"I'm just going to the little girls room," She said with a grin. She poked Dean on the thigh with her index finger so he got what she was doing. She taken a guess that he'd be slow and after all better to be safe than sorry right?
"I'll come with you, just in case some people try and ambush you" Dean said with a meaningful look at Ron and Seamus.
"Doyoantusstocometo" Hermione frowned disapprovingly, Ron took a deep gulp, he still had the table manners of a pig, an un-refined one at that, "Do you want us to come to?" It was indeed what Hermione thought but she shook her head,
"I think I'd be quite alright on my own but better be safe than sorry eh?" Ron nodded as Hermione walked out of the great hall her hips swaying with Dean following eagerly though he was doing a good job of covering it up. He was walking naturally, at a natural pace too. As soon as they were out of the hall Hermione grabbed his hand and broke into a run. Dean was healthy he had muscles that not many people knew about. Hermione had asked him once and he explained he loved water sports swimming, diving and even surfing a sport that not many wizards knew about.
*~*~*~*~* Harry, Blaise and Draco's end of the table*~*~*~*~* (A/N Hehe!)
"Where's she going?" Ginny demanded sat beside Blaise,
"I have no idea but if she does something with Thomas I'll poison him" Draco spat out venomously,
"Are you sure there's nothing going on between you two?" Luna asked from the depths of Harry's lap. This was followed by murmurs of assent,
"I'm positive" Draco grabbed Dennis Creevey's arm who was just going to sit down for something to eat, "Did you see what Hermione Granger just did?" He gave the boy's arm a shake, "Did you?"
"Yeah," He pulled his arm out of Draco grip, "She took Dean Thomas' arm and ran down the corridor" He chuckled, and walked off to his seat,
"I'll kill him," said Draco standing up,
"Don't" Luna grabbed his arm and he just sat down.
~*~*~*~*Draco's POV*~*~*~*~
{Why did I sit down? Why?}
[Because you're scared]
{I may not be in gryffindor but I am still brave and of the valiant hearted!}
[That doesn't mean anything. You're scared now]
{What of?}
[Hermione, Thomas and yourself]
{Why?}
[Hermione you don't want her to reject you. You want her for yourself, to be faithful. You want her love. You're scared of Dean Thomas because he might be better than you, not in most eyes but in Hermione's eyes and you're scared of yourself.]
{That's a load of rubbish I can't be scared of myself, you're making it sound like I should be carted off to St. Mungo's any minute.}
[You're scared that you're not good enough Draco, you're scared that you picked someone who is so incompatible with you.]
{I'm not scared}
[You're not scared you're in denial and worried]
I am not talking to myself anymore. I'm not in denial; I know Hermione prefers Thomas to me. I'm angry with her. She'd had it; I'm not going to hurt her, not with wands or fist. I'm not arguing with her here, I'll argue with her later on tonight where we can go through this properly straighten the cards out. Sort this shit into files. I just... Don't get her. I like to be in control, I like to know what I'm doing.
~*~*~*~*End of POV*~*~*~*~
The rest of the day passed by slowly, Harry trying to make forced conversation between Draco and Hermione. Hermione sat with Ron, Dean or Seamus as often as possible, which was not that much surprisingly. In ancient runes Hermione was so distracted she managed to say that kano could also be called keneaz and kuanaz instead of kenaz and kaunaz. She managed to misspell the old English meaning of kano as cenn instead of cen and said it mean rejection instead of acceptance. Then to top it all of she managed to say it was associated with the Norse god Tiw when it was actually associated with the goddess Nerthus. She was so frustrated she just lost concentration. Draco kept glancing over at her from the other side of the room.
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After dinner Hermione walked into the common room after Draco and slouched into the sofa,
"Well...." Draco said. He was stood up pacing the floor whilst staring at his hands. He'd placed the fingertips of his hands together to make a tent, "Well...."
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I want to get this up, you will get your next chapter either tomorrow or the day after depending on reviews. For the bit on ancient runes as my own knowledge would unfortunately suffice, but with more hard work it will, I referred to my useful runes book written by Ralph H. Blum and Susan Loughan.
Next chapter: Argument... And some more stuff if I have time.
Thanks to the silent readers and especially for the reviews and if I did not mention you, please tell me in a review and I apologize profusely. I hope everyone enjoyed it whether you did or not I thank my reviewers in advance. As you can tell reviews mean an awful lot to me!
Love Pin.