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Ume stared at Hiei for what seemed like days. Then out of nowhere, a blow came, it was from Akio. Ume was knocked a good 3 meters away from Hiei and she was temporarily knocked out. Everyone there thought that Akio had run away or was killed or something but apparently they were wrong. Akio had a new strangely shaped dagger-like weapon with him now. It was completely black and had immense amounts of Spirit Energy surging within it. The power surged through Akio as he stood there attempting to challenge Ume to another fight, except this time Ume was a demon and Akio got a new weapon.

"Meet the Kuro Hishu (Dark Dagger). The most expensive blade you can possibly buy, or in my case, steal, from the Black-Market. I have had my eye on it for some time. According to the old woman who was selling it, the Kuro Hishu is especially made to kill wolf demons.

Ume was on her feet once again, and standing in front of Akio. She was pissed off. Akio was about to cut Ume but Hiei blocked him with his katana in fear that the Kuro Hishu might kill Ume.

"What do you think you are doing?"

Hiei stood there silently, not saying anything.

"If you are planning to stop her and still keep her alive, then there's no hope for it. At least if I kill it, I'll be able to sell the corpse on the Black Marketand make a bundle."

He circled around Hiei and his friends and stabbed Ume through her back. The deadly weapon was about to hit its mark and it was very effective…or it would have been, if it weren't for Hiei who, once again stopped Akio, by pushing Ume out of the way and catching the dagger with his own hands (ouch, that's gotta hurt). Luckily for Hiei he wasn't a wolf demon and was not affected in any way, except for getting hurt by the weapon's sharpness. He stood there holding the dagger by the point, his hand bleeding, and incredibly angered. Hiei pulled on the Kuro Hishu and took it from Akio.

Akio stepped back. He had lost his weapon, he had no reinforcements; he was as good as dead. The four had expected him to run like a coward as he had done before, and he did, or should I say, tried.

Kurama's Rose Whip wrapped itself around Akio's left leg and he was pulled to the ground. Akio was petrified; afraid of his guaranteed doom. He saw Ume getting up from when Hiei pushed her away and he suddenly had an idea.

He cut himself with his regular blade he had in the sheath around his waist. He cut himself. His blood had attracted Ume to the scene. Just as she had jumped in the way of the four, Akio took hold of his sword and cut Hiei's hand deeply. Unable to hold on to the dagger thanks to the pain, it dropped and Akio dived for it before Kurama, Yusuke, and Kuwabara even had a chance to even realize it fell out of Hiei's hand. Akio was able to grab it and get out of the way before he was hit by a swipe of Kuwabara's Spirit Sword.

Akio stabbed Ume with his dagger and jumped out of the way as Ume tried to smack him with her claws, crying in an awful howl of pain. The sound seemed to echo into the ears of every demon within an earshot. As Hiei, Kurama and every other demon that was hiding in the human world covered their ears to shut off the sound, Ume fell to the ground and had a giant puddle of blood around her, supposedly dead, body.

Hiei stood there, recovered from the loud blast of sound, staring at Ume's demon body. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. He dropped down to his knees. Akio was on the floor, he had put a lot of his energy into his last blow.

Yusuke was the first to break the heavy, awkward silence, "…Why is Hiei so devastated? I thought he didn't care for anything… He's not the only one who's depressed… but even I'M taking it better than he is…"

"Yusuke, don't start with that; not now..." Kurama told Yusuke.

Hiei, feeling ripped away from the world; suddenly saw movement around Ume's body. He started inching forward and Akio got in the way (boy, is he annoying or what?). Akio grabbed his sword and slashed Hiei across his cheat. Akio had a thing where he'd hold a grudge against anyone for a very long time, and he'd always kill them for revenge, Ume was the victim this time and he wasn't going to let Hiei get in the way of his payback.

Akio turned around to finish Ume off once and for all but she was standing… She saw Hiei knocked down to the floor… Her pupil shrunk, her body changed, her fangs dulled. She was changing again, but not into her human form; she was changing in to something completely different. She had fur again but it was white, Ume's eyes were a light crimson, they were normal, she still stood on her hind legs but she had no claws. The new form was complete and everyone, except Hiei, since he was unconscious, stared in amazement.

Akio tried to stab her with the Kuro Hishu once again. Ume, off guard, didn't have enough time to dodge the blow and the dagger sliced her across her arm. Ume fell. She got up quickly for the dagger's cut felt like a slice from just a normal cut, from a normal dagger, a dull one at that.

"What the heck? I stole a weapon that doesn't even work? That old hag at the Black- Market who was selling it must have been a con…" Akio complained to himself in a panicking voice.

"Nice trick. Now it's my turn."

Ume stomped her foot down and a giant ray of spirit energy was going straight to Akio. Akio fell backwards; half dead. On the floor, he knew he was going to die this time. He had no ideas to trick Ume and kill her.

Kurama took one step toward the battle field between the two and said, "Ume, try and not to do anything you'll regret. You are not allowed to kill humans no matter what. You'll be sent to Makai Jail."

"Yeah, I won't kill him; not yet anyways."

Akio looked relieved, until Ume continue to talk from where she left off.

"I'm going to slowly make you suffer first. You will slowly die a painful and slow death."

The others twitched as she was talking. They knew they had to snap her out of it before she killed Akio.

Akio tried to crawl away but Ume just rushed up to him, grabbed him by the neck and let out Spirit Energy all around. Akio was getting hurt, cut, and bruised all over because of the slow release of energy. Anyone within 2 miles felt the sting of the Spirit Energy. Ume too, was getting hurt, but she took in very little damage. She was making Akio suffer slowly.

Kurama, Yusuke, and Kuwabara wanted to stop her but covered themselves from Ume energy.

Hiei was on the floor, he was having a strange nightmare.

He and Ume, in her human form, were standing face-to-face.

"Hiei, help me. I don't want to hurt anyone else. I want you to kill me, get up and fight at your full power."

"I…I…I can't…"

"I never knew to stand down from a challenge. Please, I can't go on killing everyone. Do everything you can to stop me. I'm leaving it up to you."

"…"

"I have two last requests. Can you do them for me? Actually, the second one is for you."

"…Sure…"

"Once I die, there is a heart-shaped locket that I have had for as long as I can remember. I believe it once belonged to my real parents. I left it in the same hands of my human parents. Please get it and keep it. Just tell my "mother" that it was my last request."

"Alright…What's the other thing?"

"In my room there is-"

Ume was unable to finish saying her last request when she slowly began to disappear.

Soon after that, Hiei woke up.
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