--Hello everyone! Please try not to be so harsh with me and this fic, it's
my first one so please please review and tell me if I need to correct
anything! I'll try to update every day or every few days. Oh, one more
thing, sorry if my English isn't that good, I'm Canadian yes but I've lived
almost all my life in south America... it's really not that bad but with
slight imperfections at some points--
By the way: '........' for thinking
"......." for talking
-Chapter 11-
-"Well, let me tell yeh..." -he said standing up -"yeh 'ave two options, or ye sleep with the crew... or... ye sleep on me bed" he said smirking.
Sharlene looked thoughtful for a few seconds and answered
-"I suppose the crew sleeps on hammocks?"-
-"Aye, so I may guess yeh would prefer sleepin' on a comfy bed such as mine righ'?"- he asked with that evil grin of his still plastered on his face.
-"You ARE right, I would obviously prefer the bed as I told you before"- she said now standing up as well. -" it's all set then, you will kindly lend me the bed... but where would you be sleeping?"- she asked not really getting the most probable answer for her question.
-"On me bed 'course"-
-"But you said that I would be the one sleeping on your bed... how-?"- she stopped abruptly in realisation, she looked at the devilish twinkle in his eyes and almost paled.
-"No way"-
-"Yes way luv"- he chuckled - "there's no other way, me bed 'tis the only sack on the ship, so if yeh were plannin' to be sleepin' on one..."- he said moving his head towards his spectacular bed -"that one would be the one ye'll be using" he turned his head facing Sharlene again who stood with her eyes narrowed.
-"Hmm... you said you were going to arrange something for me to sleep as I preferred" she said surprisingly calm -"...and THIS is what you call arrangement?"- lifting one of her eyebrows in the process.
-"Aye"- he simply said.
She sighed quite exasperated by his non-understanding tone of voice, but kept her fake smile on place.
-"Fine, but if you DARE to EVEN touch me in your sleep, you WILL regret it"- .
He did a lopside smile. "Like I promised before, luv, no one on this ship will ever touch you without you willing"- he said annoyingly -to herself of course- smiling, she just wanted to murder him by now, of course she wouldn't show it, people said that if you are angry at someone because of something, then inwardly you are supposed to be wanting that something to happen, and that in fact was quite true because she wasn't actually fuming because she had to sleep with him... ,in the innocent way obviously, and she wasn't going to give him the idea that she might be wanting to share the bed with him... she would just pretend she didn't mind.
-"And I presume you included yourself in that promise?"- -"Dependin' on the mood I'm in the moment yeh flop on me bed savvy?"- he finished with a devilish grin.
-"Well let me tell you that you will be safe on that bed depending on the mood I am when I flop on it, SAVVY?"- empathising "his" word.
After a few seconds of tense silence, Jack spoke. -"Luv"- he said coming closer towards her until they were merely inches apart -" if ye use me word again to tease me, I won't be actin' the gentleman like me crew as a consequence of your action, SAVVY?"- he said in a chilling seductive voice
She couldn't lose control, they were so close she could feel his breath on her, tickling her skin. She had to stand firm and look him in the eye to prove she wasn't being overpowered by him... in fact he did however have the right and force to overpower her... but she hoped that wouldn't be the case...-gulp-.
-"Alright captain, you don't have to get all pissy about it, I won't use THE word without your royal pain in the ass permission"- she spat.
Big - mistake.
He produced a low growl from the depths of his throat and in one swift movement he had swung her on his back and was carrying her towards the bed. When she had the time to react she was already being pushed down on the bed by his OVERPOWERING force.
She kicked and moved and squeaked but he held firm, his arms on either side of her neck, his legs trapping her own... it was all in vain. She gave up and glared up at him.
-"What now Captain Jack Sparrow?"-
He gave her a wicked smile and replied
-"Well what do yeh say ye get yer punishment for yer lack of respect towards yer capt'n?"-
-'Ohhh shiiiiiit, oh shit, oh SHIT! Me and my fucking big mouth! Why o why did I have to spat at him like that! Now only god knows what kind of obviously sexual punishment he's formulating for me...'- she breathed, closed her eyes and awaited for the unknown thundering to come her way.
After a couple minutes of waiting without any kind of action coming from the captain, she slowly, cautiously opened one eye, then the other, to stare right into Jack's deep chocolate orbs.
-"Weren't you supposed to give me some sort of punishment for my lack of respect towards you or was I just having a day-nightmare?"- she asked not really knowing what to expect.
-"Why did yeh close yer eyes?, I don't think I'm that bad lookin' for yeh ta vanish me form from yer view"- he said in mock hurt
-"Actually I don't know why I closed my god damned eyes, Jack, but what I want to know is what are we bloody -'hmm... English word again!'- supposed to be doing right now?! Jack I am drained and I don't have the nerve to have this little chit-chat conversation with you at this very moment"- she tried to move away but failed.
-"And could you please get off me!"-
-"'tis captain Jack to yeh, Ms'. Irvine, how many times will I 'ave ta remind yeh?!"- he said with slight anger lingering in his voice and complied, moving to the side of the bed. Sharlene not really correcting herself went to fetch her bag to grab her night-gown. When she headed for the bed again, she saw Jack again staring intently at her.
-"What?" she questioned
-"Nothin', just enjoying the view luv"-
She rolled her eyes; she was not in the mood for this!
-"Fine, but would you care to stop enjoying it so that I can change?"- she asked quite exasperated by now.
-"Why? I'm fine like this"- he grinned
-"But I'm not! Jack! Would you please do as I say for once in your life! It is not comfortable to undress in front of someone you've known for nearly two days!... Jeez!!"-
-"I have already did as you said by removing myself from on top of yer body, now this is asking too much... and 'tis CAPTAIN JACK!"-
She nearly yelled in frustration.
-"Fine!"
She turned around, took off her shirt and threw in her night-gown, then she took off her boots and trousers and laid them neatly on a chair. Jack had to consciously stop himself from gaping at her naked back and at the fact that she had had the guts to almost fully undress in front of him, risking her body to be completely ravished by himself if he didn't control his natural male instincts...
She turned around to look at him with a smile.
-"There, that wasn't so difficult after all"- she headed for the bed -"oh and please call me Lene, I really do hate formalities"-
-"Luv, don' do that again"- said Jack breathless -"You gave me no choice captain, it was that or going on deck, but that would have turned out chatastrophycly wouldn't it?"- she said as she removed the covers from the bed and laid down giving her back to Jack.
-"Aye, remind me t' turn 'round next time ye do that aye? Don' know if I'd be able ta restrain meself"- he said laying down as well, then remembering all the candles were on so he grumpily got up to blow them out and returned to his original position on the bed. He didn't know but she had blushed red crimson when she had heard his words...-'damn those words! Damn those eyes! Damn that charming bastard of a pirate!!'- By the time he was back, Sharlene had already drifted to dreamland. He let out a heavy "whoosh" and rested his head on the pillow facing Sharlene's head without closing his eyes.
He moved his body closer to hers, he could hear her faint, rhydmic breathing; he took in all scent that had her name on and closed his eyes. He then opened them abruptly when he sensed her moving, to find her face inches from his. He studied her peaceful features, her thin eyebrows, small nose, light red lips... those lips... when they were moving he felt his chest tighten with excitement, as if all depended on the words that came out from her mouth... though he didn't know why... she was such a calm and steady person.. when she wanted to of course, she had her outbursts every now and then but who hadn't? she was even calmer than himself! That's how he liked women, quiet, efficient, understanding, loyal and kind. Most of the women he had met in Tortuga where mostly efficient yes, but the rest? Quiet?, kind? Understanding?! They were nowhere near those characteristics. The lass here sleeping beside him... -SLEEPING BESIDE HIM AND HE COULND'T EVEN BLOODY TOUCH HER!!!- she was different, she just wasn't from here, maybe not even from this era...
He took a strand of hair blocking her eyes and placed it around her ear.
He knew every soul on earth was unique but still similar to the people surrounding them, but she just wasn't the same as other young women, she had this mysterious aura surrounding her, protecting her from the outer world, protecting her from curious lil' bastards such as himself. She wouldn't tell him where she was from until he actually started taking her seriously, not that he didn't, but a little tease here and there doesn't harm anyone right?
But maybe that harmed his goal of reaching into her emotions, her inner core... her past.
He would do something about it, he would have her kneeling (if that was even possible) in front of him in no time. Yeah, that was him, Captain Jack Sparrow, whatever he wanted, he got it no matter what and this would be no exeption.
With all this thoughts in his head he closed his eyes and in the blink of an eye he was snoring.
Morning came in a fast pace.. too fast for Sharlene to bare.
The incredibly hot sun rays where pouring on her face like red-hot steal. She was about to turn around when something... someone was blocking her ministrations.
She looked at her sides but there was no one there... she looked down and stared.... stared blankly and incredibly astounded by what she saw.
-"Uhh..... Jack?"-
--Ok! That was it! said I would take time to update... I just had so much stuff to do!
Anyway, hope you're enjoying this fic, and whoever said I needed a therapist to stop tormenting people with what I wrote, I just have to say that whoever doesn't like this fic (and I honestly expect most of them not to like it because I don't consider myself a remarkable writer as my mother language is not exactly English) doesn't have to read it, if you don't like it, just stop reading. I would really appreciate a bit of critical assessment on my fics.. but not such turndown as that. Please tell me if it's boring or even too stupid, I need those reviews so that I can improve my writing. PLEASE!!!!!
To my few but truly appreciated reviewers:
DaydreamBeliever14: I can see you're somewhat enjoying this fic, and I am HAPPY! =0)
You don't know how much it means to me that at least one or two people are actually following the ongoing chapters! Thankies so munchies!
Natalie33: I know you reviewed in chapter 8 but as you can see I've just started to answer. Hope you liked what happened after that chapter, again this means a lot to me! =0)
dagzer: Wow! You really thinks it's amazing? Thank you so much! I just love when someone asks for me to update, such an encouraging feeling!
You know, I don't mind if I get too many reviews per chapter, I will keep on writing no matter what cause I just love it! But those produce a very nice feeling inside and that's what makes me go on. If you could just tell me the things I need to correct, cause I know they're many!--
By the way: '........' for thinking
"......." for talking
-Chapter 11-
-"Well, let me tell yeh..." -he said standing up -"yeh 'ave two options, or ye sleep with the crew... or... ye sleep on me bed" he said smirking.
Sharlene looked thoughtful for a few seconds and answered
-"I suppose the crew sleeps on hammocks?"-
-"Aye, so I may guess yeh would prefer sleepin' on a comfy bed such as mine righ'?"- he asked with that evil grin of his still plastered on his face.
-"You ARE right, I would obviously prefer the bed as I told you before"- she said now standing up as well. -" it's all set then, you will kindly lend me the bed... but where would you be sleeping?"- she asked not really getting the most probable answer for her question.
-"On me bed 'course"-
-"But you said that I would be the one sleeping on your bed... how-?"- she stopped abruptly in realisation, she looked at the devilish twinkle in his eyes and almost paled.
-"No way"-
-"Yes way luv"- he chuckled - "there's no other way, me bed 'tis the only sack on the ship, so if yeh were plannin' to be sleepin' on one..."- he said moving his head towards his spectacular bed -"that one would be the one ye'll be using" he turned his head facing Sharlene again who stood with her eyes narrowed.
-"Hmm... you said you were going to arrange something for me to sleep as I preferred" she said surprisingly calm -"...and THIS is what you call arrangement?"- lifting one of her eyebrows in the process.
-"Aye"- he simply said.
She sighed quite exasperated by his non-understanding tone of voice, but kept her fake smile on place.
-"Fine, but if you DARE to EVEN touch me in your sleep, you WILL regret it"- .
He did a lopside smile. "Like I promised before, luv, no one on this ship will ever touch you without you willing"- he said annoyingly -to herself of course- smiling, she just wanted to murder him by now, of course she wouldn't show it, people said that if you are angry at someone because of something, then inwardly you are supposed to be wanting that something to happen, and that in fact was quite true because she wasn't actually fuming because she had to sleep with him... ,in the innocent way obviously, and she wasn't going to give him the idea that she might be wanting to share the bed with him... she would just pretend she didn't mind.
-"And I presume you included yourself in that promise?"- -"Dependin' on the mood I'm in the moment yeh flop on me bed savvy?"- he finished with a devilish grin.
-"Well let me tell you that you will be safe on that bed depending on the mood I am when I flop on it, SAVVY?"- empathising "his" word.
After a few seconds of tense silence, Jack spoke. -"Luv"- he said coming closer towards her until they were merely inches apart -" if ye use me word again to tease me, I won't be actin' the gentleman like me crew as a consequence of your action, SAVVY?"- he said in a chilling seductive voice
She couldn't lose control, they were so close she could feel his breath on her, tickling her skin. She had to stand firm and look him in the eye to prove she wasn't being overpowered by him... in fact he did however have the right and force to overpower her... but she hoped that wouldn't be the case...-gulp-.
-"Alright captain, you don't have to get all pissy about it, I won't use THE word without your royal pain in the ass permission"- she spat.
Big - mistake.
He produced a low growl from the depths of his throat and in one swift movement he had swung her on his back and was carrying her towards the bed. When she had the time to react she was already being pushed down on the bed by his OVERPOWERING force.
She kicked and moved and squeaked but he held firm, his arms on either side of her neck, his legs trapping her own... it was all in vain. She gave up and glared up at him.
-"What now Captain Jack Sparrow?"-
He gave her a wicked smile and replied
-"Well what do yeh say ye get yer punishment for yer lack of respect towards yer capt'n?"-
-'Ohhh shiiiiiit, oh shit, oh SHIT! Me and my fucking big mouth! Why o why did I have to spat at him like that! Now only god knows what kind of obviously sexual punishment he's formulating for me...'- she breathed, closed her eyes and awaited for the unknown thundering to come her way.
After a couple minutes of waiting without any kind of action coming from the captain, she slowly, cautiously opened one eye, then the other, to stare right into Jack's deep chocolate orbs.
-"Weren't you supposed to give me some sort of punishment for my lack of respect towards you or was I just having a day-nightmare?"- she asked not really knowing what to expect.
-"Why did yeh close yer eyes?, I don't think I'm that bad lookin' for yeh ta vanish me form from yer view"- he said in mock hurt
-"Actually I don't know why I closed my god damned eyes, Jack, but what I want to know is what are we bloody -'hmm... English word again!'- supposed to be doing right now?! Jack I am drained and I don't have the nerve to have this little chit-chat conversation with you at this very moment"- she tried to move away but failed.
-"And could you please get off me!"-
-"'tis captain Jack to yeh, Ms'. Irvine, how many times will I 'ave ta remind yeh?!"- he said with slight anger lingering in his voice and complied, moving to the side of the bed. Sharlene not really correcting herself went to fetch her bag to grab her night-gown. When she headed for the bed again, she saw Jack again staring intently at her.
-"What?" she questioned
-"Nothin', just enjoying the view luv"-
She rolled her eyes; she was not in the mood for this!
-"Fine, but would you care to stop enjoying it so that I can change?"- she asked quite exasperated by now.
-"Why? I'm fine like this"- he grinned
-"But I'm not! Jack! Would you please do as I say for once in your life! It is not comfortable to undress in front of someone you've known for nearly two days!... Jeez!!"-
-"I have already did as you said by removing myself from on top of yer body, now this is asking too much... and 'tis CAPTAIN JACK!"-
She nearly yelled in frustration.
-"Fine!"
She turned around, took off her shirt and threw in her night-gown, then she took off her boots and trousers and laid them neatly on a chair. Jack had to consciously stop himself from gaping at her naked back and at the fact that she had had the guts to almost fully undress in front of him, risking her body to be completely ravished by himself if he didn't control his natural male instincts...
She turned around to look at him with a smile.
-"There, that wasn't so difficult after all"- she headed for the bed -"oh and please call me Lene, I really do hate formalities"-
-"Luv, don' do that again"- said Jack breathless -"You gave me no choice captain, it was that or going on deck, but that would have turned out chatastrophycly wouldn't it?"- she said as she removed the covers from the bed and laid down giving her back to Jack.
-"Aye, remind me t' turn 'round next time ye do that aye? Don' know if I'd be able ta restrain meself"- he said laying down as well, then remembering all the candles were on so he grumpily got up to blow them out and returned to his original position on the bed. He didn't know but she had blushed red crimson when she had heard his words...-'damn those words! Damn those eyes! Damn that charming bastard of a pirate!!'- By the time he was back, Sharlene had already drifted to dreamland. He let out a heavy "whoosh" and rested his head on the pillow facing Sharlene's head without closing his eyes.
He moved his body closer to hers, he could hear her faint, rhydmic breathing; he took in all scent that had her name on and closed his eyes. He then opened them abruptly when he sensed her moving, to find her face inches from his. He studied her peaceful features, her thin eyebrows, small nose, light red lips... those lips... when they were moving he felt his chest tighten with excitement, as if all depended on the words that came out from her mouth... though he didn't know why... she was such a calm and steady person.. when she wanted to of course, she had her outbursts every now and then but who hadn't? she was even calmer than himself! That's how he liked women, quiet, efficient, understanding, loyal and kind. Most of the women he had met in Tortuga where mostly efficient yes, but the rest? Quiet?, kind? Understanding?! They were nowhere near those characteristics. The lass here sleeping beside him... -SLEEPING BESIDE HIM AND HE COULND'T EVEN BLOODY TOUCH HER!!!- she was different, she just wasn't from here, maybe not even from this era...
He took a strand of hair blocking her eyes and placed it around her ear.
He knew every soul on earth was unique but still similar to the people surrounding them, but she just wasn't the same as other young women, she had this mysterious aura surrounding her, protecting her from the outer world, protecting her from curious lil' bastards such as himself. She wouldn't tell him where she was from until he actually started taking her seriously, not that he didn't, but a little tease here and there doesn't harm anyone right?
But maybe that harmed his goal of reaching into her emotions, her inner core... her past.
He would do something about it, he would have her kneeling (if that was even possible) in front of him in no time. Yeah, that was him, Captain Jack Sparrow, whatever he wanted, he got it no matter what and this would be no exeption.
With all this thoughts in his head he closed his eyes and in the blink of an eye he was snoring.
Morning came in a fast pace.. too fast for Sharlene to bare.
The incredibly hot sun rays where pouring on her face like red-hot steal. She was about to turn around when something... someone was blocking her ministrations.
She looked at her sides but there was no one there... she looked down and stared.... stared blankly and incredibly astounded by what she saw.
-"Uhh..... Jack?"-
--Ok! That was it! said I would take time to update... I just had so much stuff to do!
Anyway, hope you're enjoying this fic, and whoever said I needed a therapist to stop tormenting people with what I wrote, I just have to say that whoever doesn't like this fic (and I honestly expect most of them not to like it because I don't consider myself a remarkable writer as my mother language is not exactly English) doesn't have to read it, if you don't like it, just stop reading. I would really appreciate a bit of critical assessment on my fics.. but not such turndown as that. Please tell me if it's boring or even too stupid, I need those reviews so that I can improve my writing. PLEASE!!!!!
To my few but truly appreciated reviewers:
DaydreamBeliever14: I can see you're somewhat enjoying this fic, and I am HAPPY! =0)
You don't know how much it means to me that at least one or two people are actually following the ongoing chapters! Thankies so munchies!
Natalie33: I know you reviewed in chapter 8 but as you can see I've just started to answer. Hope you liked what happened after that chapter, again this means a lot to me! =0)
dagzer: Wow! You really thinks it's amazing? Thank you so much! I just love when someone asks for me to update, such an encouraging feeling!
You know, I don't mind if I get too many reviews per chapter, I will keep on writing no matter what cause I just love it! But those produce a very nice feeling inside and that's what makes me go on. If you could just tell me the things I need to correct, cause I know they're many!--