Hi, my name is LordAlmighty and I am the author of Megaman Battle Network: NetCity Adventures. During a quick read-through, I have discovered mistakes. I am dearly sorry about them. Here, I will point them out. Key: P Plot Hole; G Grammar mistake; S Spelling mistake; C To be revealed in further chapters:-

Chapter 1:

P Lan speaks of the NetCity trials. These were, basically, tryouts of the city. Before the entire mainframe was smashed by Glitch.

G A sentence reads "There is logical way in,". This is supposed to say "There is no logical way in."

C Someone motions for Elixir, and a guy called Harold, is to start the "unveiling".

Urm…that's it. Sorry. Anyway, here's a preview to the next chapter:

'Urm…hello?' Harold looked around. Nothing. Even his torch didn't make a dent in the darkness. Something had turned off the power. But what? He thought. He eventually found the fire escape. He ran down it, taking steps three or even four at a time. He got into the parking lot. Harold saw his car, and ran towards it. He got in, turned the key, and a voice went

'Good evening and goodbye, Harold my old chum. Ha!'. Then the car started and shot straight through the wall, and down the five storeys on the other side…

Good, eh? Well, keep watching for the next chapter of:

Megaman Battle Network: NetCity Adventures!