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Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely Love Hina; but if I did, I would rub this in your face right now!

WARNING: A rape scene is occurred and erm… too bad Motoko's first (losing her virginity to her first person) is a total dork.

Kanako: Are you calling me a dork?

Tenshi: …

Motoko: Shut up! You're going to make it obvious!

Keitaro: But—you mean I will make love to an unpure woman?

Tenshi: Quit telling everyone the future chapters!

Naru: It also says here that Keitaro will have two wives… since the feudal era was popular to let men have more than one wife…

Kanako: It better not be my bitch…

Motoko: I am not your bitch!

Keitaro: … you know, I'm starting to like this story. With two pretty girls going to like each other and all… not to mention that I will have two wives…

Naru-punches Keitaro- YOU DISGUSTING DELUSIONAL PERVERT!


The Dark Days…

Motoko could remember it like yesterday. Being pin down as if the weight of the world was on you. Your screams could be unheard. Only the shifting movements and small gasp of pleasure and pain throbbing in your body. Losing faith. Losing your confidence. Losing your virginity. Most important of all… losing yourself. The breath and sweat increasing. The hard nibbles you will get on your lips. The throbbing in your most secret area. That huge figure giving you pleasure yet pain at the same time. That dark figure smirking upon you as if he was God. That other flesh violating into yours.

She lost it at such a young age.

''That's the man… who raped me,'' Motoko whispered in intense fear.

4 years ago…

It all happened so fast…

The winter sun sheds its remaining rays of light over the lavender skies as the starry night embraced the moon which was almost appearing out of the Sun's reach. Sitting impatiently; I went to check on sister.

''Sister!'' I shouted.

I stopped. I heard her chuckles and laughs while I heard another. I peaked carefully, in order to avoid suspicion.

''Kenshin, stop!'' chuckle a nervous voice.

''can I not tease my beautiful future wife?'' said a seductive voice.

I shook my head; I thought sister was better than that. Fooling around with a man and losing responsibilities for carrying on the dojo. Surely she knows that having children now, will ruin the ceremony of their wedding in 2 months by now? I sighed, than took off in the woods in order to enjoy the thoughts that were repeating it-self.

''they should be dead by now,'' whispered a weird voice.

As I heard this; the curiosity had gotten the best of me. My foot silently jumped across trees which were getting closer to the voices.

''Kentaro-sama, what are we to do now?'' sighed the soldier next to the one called Kentaro.

''We wait until we get to the headmaster of course,'' growled Kentaro.

Headmaster? Dead people? What the hell was going on here? I stared intensely until I was caught. I didn't know that he could sense my presence, so easily!

''Well, well, well, look what we have here,'' smirked Kentaro.

''A spy?'' gasped the short one in a mocking way.

''A very cute spy,'' licked the other's lips.

I gulped. Men in the village would always stare at me in a very awkward way. They say I looked 15, because of my height and curves. I didn't want the maturity of a woman now. These are the reasons why I am disgusted by men; and I have a bad feeling that I will be disgusted more…

''Men… leave to our Headquarters… I will deal with this woman,'' glared Kentaro.

''Yes sir!'' All the Soldiers said.

And in just that moment… they disappeared in just a flash.

I had a feeling… a very sickening feeling… so I decided to run.

The rush of fear ran through me when I saw the man called Kentaro right in front of me.

''Come now… this isn't going to hurt,'' Kentaro said licking his lips. ''This pain… will actually be your pleasure.''

My jaw dropped, I wanted to scream… but it all happened so fast. With the tip of the blade; Kentaro raised his blade and slashed through Motoko's white Gi, all the way down to her Hakama. When the clothing was torn enough to separate in half, he took his chance and pinned her arms with his hands and his knees on her legs.

''Don't worry… I'm sure you won't be upset of becoming a woman…''


Keitaro kept his face hard and steady. He wasn't surprised that the disgusting Kentaro Sakata he'd be working with, would rape a 12 year old girl. He was too cheerful and quite to become a man of good heart. Motoko's face turned away, avoiding any emotional contact with Keitaro.

''To be betrayed and to be violated has its differences, Urashima.''

Keitaro's eyes soften, ''and to be violated is to be betrayed.''

Motoko turned to Keitaro with the coldness still steady in her eyes, ''you don't know what it's like.''

''And you don't know what it's like to be betrayed and lose other people that were close to you.''

''Are you saying your life is much worst than mines?''

''No, I am saying that we are even with the scars that still remain in our hearts.''

''You have no heart.''

''Ouch, that hurts.''

Motoko turned around swiftly and took a short walk to the hot springs, ''you're annoying.''

Keitaro smirked with his eyes closed with confidence, ''and your irritating as hell but cute.''

With that said, Motoko stomped to the Hot Spring, pretending she didn't hear him… god was he so annoying. Keitaro chuckled; he still had his ways with women after 19 years of his life. He didn't care about those types of things, before, but his hormones were driving him nuts and he couldn't help being a flirt… besides, Narusagawa was getting easily jealous and it would be fun to poke at her once more…

Keitaro sighed; his eye searched his surroundings and turned his head. Night quickly took the blue skies into its sheets of darkness and it was surprising that after only several days of his journey here in the Hinata Region; he gets surrounded by woman.

''Damn… I need sake….'' Keitaro scratched his head slightly and turned to the sheets and blankets under the trees for their camp.

Hotsprings…

Naru and Kitsune quietly soaked in the Hotsprings while the two monkeys such as, Sarah and Su, roared with laughter with the cause of picking on defenseless Shinobu. Kitsune gave the most famous face of, ''sly smile,'' and stared down at Naru's cheast.

''Yours is almost getting as big as mines, Naru.''

Naru turned with blush of embarrassment, ''whaa…, I mean, why should I care about my size?''

Kitsune stroked her chin with her index finger while giving a concentrated face, ''to impress the cute Keitaro?''

'' NEVER!'' He can flirt with that… person…''

''Do I sense jealously?'' purred Kitsune.

''No!'' Naru's anger caused her to stand with her arms down and fist tight, a blush soon smeared into her skin and it only amused Kitsune more to see that a dear friend was admiring the handsome Keitaro.

''What's there to hate about the guy, Naru?'' said Kitsune waving her hand slightly towards her like a small fan, ''I mean, he's built, protective, sensitive, caring, he has long silky brown here all the ways to his shoulders that's tied, he use to work for the Government, and he's rich as hell!''

Naru only glared as her response, ''never!'' I bet he's a pervert, too, and no matter how hot he looks, he still isn't my type!''

Kitsune and laughed, knowing that Naru was in denaiyal, of course.

''Excuse me... may I join with you?''

The familiar voice caught everyone's attention.

''So Motoko; are you going to travel with us?'' said Su hanging on the low branch above the Hotsprings.

''I'm afraid so… Urashima and I… seem to seek the same motivation…,'' Motoko had regrets lingering in the pit of her stomach of saying it so soon.

Naru's face soon came to a serious gesture enough to confuse everyone, was it possible that Motoko knew that Keitaro and Naru were secret Government Soldiers? She than narrowed her eyes and sighed, that idiot wasn't that stupid enough to blurt out that truth anyways…

Although to make sure, her hair soaked heavily with water, soon whipped around Kitsune, nearly slapping her face with the heavy layers of brown hair; and turned to Motoko.

''What exactly do you have in common with Keitaro, anyways?''

The green eyes closed and the raven goddess spoke in a soft yet stern voice of confidence, ''we both seek revenge on Kentaro Sakata…''

The group remained silent until the shock of everyone's voice coated the awkward silence.

''KENTARO SAKATA!''

''He's the one I saw when that bandit robbed me; he robbed my village, two days ago!'' cried Shinobu. ''He's well-known for thefts and massacres throughout my village!''

''He was the one who ordered his Government Soldiers to rob our mommies, 4 years ago!'' cried Sarah.

''He was the one who forced me to give him my bestest weapons and it was a Family Arlum too, he gave it to the one called Shinichi, 5 years ago!'' blurted Kitsune.

'' He use to join forces with Keitaro but suddenly betrayed him and his sister; so is most wanted in Government Posters and most dangerous…,'' said Naru whom was last to comment. Kentaro was also the one who betrayed Naru, believing that he fell in love with her; she almost fell in love with him… until she found out that he betrayed her by betraying the Government officials, especially Keitaro.

Everyone stared at each other awkwardly and murmured about the Most Dangerous, Kentaro Sakata.

''So… all of you seek revenge on Kentaro Sakata?'' said Motoko dipping in the Hotsprings.

''It's actually no surprise that he is most hated and well-known through out the whole Hinata region… even near Kyoto,'' pointed out Naru. ''Some say that he's part of the Shemnrai Ryu…''

''Impossible,'' muttered Kitsune. Kitsune was one of highest ranked Generals of the Shemnrai Ryu, secretly with Motoko; but if Kentaro was part of the group, he would have been slaughtered because his reputation is brutal.

''I think we need to talk to Keitaro about this,'' said Shinobu as if she matured greatly.

30 minutes later…

''Kitsune… are you saying that your blade made this scar on my back?'' said Keitaro's eyes growing cold.

''I know that your upset…,'' explained Kitsune. For an ex-Government official… he sure acts like he is in the group. ''But I had no choice… the sake of my family history land was in sake, there was no way I can avoid his request.''

Keitaro nodded, surely he understand the value of lives, and Kentaro made sure he let his victims now the wrath of his blade, ''I know… it wasn't your fault… relax.''

''So…,'' finally said the light browned hair Naru, ''have all of you been seeking revenge on this Kentaro Sakata?''

Everyone nodded.

''Than let us make sure he rots in hell in his doing… I too, have a personal reason for revenge.''

''But where do we start?'' asked Shinobu. ''I don't even know how to battle, I would get in the way…''

''Relax Shinobu, I know one person that would help us.'' Suspiciously said Keitaro, ''we have to travel across the sea to Okinawa and… we will go on a island that is protected by strong animals, they know me so we will be safe; we must go to the Otohime Mountains and plan our revenge there.''

''Are you crazy?'' That place is protected by deadly turtles!'' Shouted Motoko almost having a heart-attack.

''True, but like he said, Keitaro knows the Otohime Residents and that will give us a huge advantage,'' said Sarah polishing her weapons.

''But-''

''What are ya?'' Scared of turtles? We'll leave tomorrow morning, in the mean time, let's get some sleep,'' yawned Kitsune.

''But-''

''Good night!'' Everyone except the stun Motoko said.

Her eye was twitching, ''deadly… demons…. Deadly… turtles…''


Okay! So I finally updated, and the Hinata crew is going to meet Mutsumi! So it'll take a week or two to update… hnnn… any suggestions?

Kanako: When I'm I coming in?

Tenshi: In the later chapters… in the meantime, go grope Motoko all ya want… I have Karate in 20 minutes!

Keitaro-sweat drop- what happen to her interest in me?

Naru and Motoko: YOU SICK PERVERTED BASTARD!