I'm back! After a short count of reviews, here are the results:
Haru - 4
Yuki - 2
Momiji - 2
Kisa - 1
So it's settled, Hatsuharu's next! And I've got the perfect story for him to write. I laughed when I thought of it. Hope you enjoy and not get mad. Replies for you nice peoples' reviews are at the end of the chapter. Fanfics by the characters may be either from an event that already occurred, or something they made up. Oh, and Hana's pen name changed. You'll see what it is.
Chapter 4- Haru's FictionHaru, at the moment not long after Tohru checked her reviews in his house, is wondering what kind of story to write. Ever since Sasuke put the thought in his head, it won't get out, so he has to write one to put an end to it. He ponders at what kinds of stories he knows.
After searching around, looking at his pictures, surfing the web, he gets it. The only story that he personally likes telling, telling himself that he wants others to know. He exits the internet and enters a word document. Instantly, with flying fingers, he starts typing up his story. Just like Tohru, he's done in no time at all. Before actually writing the story, he figures out a way to change it up, so their secret wouldn't go out. He submits it with pride and wastes the rest of the day, so that tomorrow, he can find out what others think about ......
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My First True Love by nezumiforever
From the day I was born, my family ridiculed my Zodiac sign, the ox. In my family, certain members of our family take the Chinese Zodiac very seriously. Thirteen of us each generation are elected to symbolize a certain Zodiac, and I was chosen to be the ox. They made remarks about ox being gullible and stupid, because in the story of the Zodiacs, the rat tricked the ox into letting the mouse ride on his back all the way to their destination.
I couldn't help but think that they were making fun of me at the same time. Calling me a stupid and a fool. My anger from their ridiculing just kept building up in me more and more, creating another side to me, a violent one, my 'black' side. An uncontrollable side, one that could destroy things, and hurt others, all because of my Zodiac animal. My family thought that maybe taking up martial arts would be good way to get all my anger out. Vent it from my mind. I took it with a few family members, taught by a master in our family.
I got along with all of them well, except for one, my cousin who was born under the sign of the rat, the chosen rat of the family. I despised him, hated him, and just wanted him to disappear from my life forever.
Then one day, I ran into him. He was sitting by the window while I was outside. All that anger, all that rage, began building up in me once again. The sight of him did more than piss me off. Then.... I burst.
"IT'S YOUR FAULT EVERYONE MAKES FUN OF OX!!! IT'S YOUR FAULT THAT THEY CALIT'S YOUR FAULT THAT THEY CALL HIM STUPID AND A FOOL!!! IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT BECUSE YOU'RE A MEAN STINKING RAT!!!" I just got it all out on him, because he was the rat.
Then he turned to me, without a single hint of anger on his face. "Well, are you? Are you a fool?" He just looked at me, smiling at the same time. Suddenly, all that anger, all that rage, slowly began vanishing after that day. I knew from that day on, that he wasn't a mean stinking rat.
It was him, the one who helped me greatly. My first love.
THE END
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After having a whole day wasted, Haru returns to his computer and checks his reviews.
kawaii-onigiri 03-19-04
I remember that story like you told me yesterday! You switched it up a little, I understand why. It's so sweet how you want others to know how you got your first love.
neko-over-nezumi 03-19-04
That story again! Oh God Haru, you're a guy! I hope you didn't make it clear that you are a guy in that story, cause if you do, a lot of people are going to get the wrong thoughts. But, it was good. It was just that whole guy loves guy thing.
Princenezumi 03-19-04
Haru, must the whole world know how you came to love me first? Put it to rest. I love you, but as a cousin.
girlluver 03-19-04
Aww, how cute! Little Haru's first love is Yuki! I don't remember that story. How come you never told me that one?
rabbitboy16 03-19-04
Yea for Haru! Nice, and kind of weird, but still nice story!
nekoforever 03-18-04
Good going Haru! Maybe I should write a story saying how I first fell in love with Kyo.
fabulousbigbrother 03-18-04
Oh Haru Haru Haru! Going on again about how you fell in love with my little brother. If he ever turns, I'll be the first to tell you!
tigersheep 03-18-04
Is this story absolutely true? If it is, I need to talk to Hatori about this. Isn't it wrong to fall in love with another guy, if you're a guy? It's a good story, but just wondering.
yankee-doodle 03-18-04
So that's how you got that alter ego, violent, annoying, yet funny, personality of yours. So the Prince was your first love. Hey, he'd be my first love if that happened to me.
shockwave 03-18-04
Hmm. Good. Lovely. Sweet. Innocent. Pure. I like it.
chibi-onigiri 03-18-04
Great job Haru! Almost just as good as Tohru, except that I can't help but wonder if you still have that love for Yuki. Do you? Or have you moved on and began loving someone else. Isn't Rin your girlfriend?
Haru smirks at the reviews he's received. Now all he has to do is reply to them. When he replies, he sees that Tohru has replied to his review, plus everyone else's.
To Princenezumi
I do have that hat still. Yuki, were you that little boy? I really want and need to know.
To neko-over-nezumi
It was something that happened to me when I was little.
To girlluver
Shigure, I'm getting the feeling that the little boy was Yuki. Can you help me find out?
To rabbitboy16
Arigato Momiji! Yes I still remember that.
To nekoforever
He might, you never know.
To nezumiforever
Arigato Haru.
To fabulousbigbroter
You might be right Ayame. The little boy might be Yuki.
To tigersheep
Hiro, that little girl was me. Also, thank you.
To chibi-onigiri
I love you Sasuke! You're the greatest!
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AB-Angel: So was it good?! I may have gone off a little but hey! I had to change it up. Haru wouldn't want to put in all the details, or else people will find out about the curse. But enough about that, here are the replies to the reviewers. I was too lazy to reply through e-mail. So here they are!
To Really Bad Eggs
You had the deciding vote, because I accidentally deleted your review from my e-mail, so I had to check my story for your review. I really didn't want to do Haru, but it's my fault I let you people vote.
To Flamer Mizaki
I agree that he's cool, but I think Kyo's the coolest one. Well, I am a guy. Are you serious when you say funniest? Because my other Fruits Basket story is funnier, but also is serious a lot.
To bratgoddess88
You got your wish. Keep reading and reviewing!
To Maili-chan
No! Sasuke is not Kyo's little brother. I say in the beginning that Sasuke is my original character and it tells you what story to read to understand. The story is Family Discovery. You should read that one. It's my best fanfic, but I think that the summary's not catching people's attention. It's really good, please read it and you'll understand the connection between Sasuke and Kyo. And I must warn you that it's really, really long. I've submitted chapter 7 for it the same time I submitted this.
To SeaGal
Hey! I can't say that you can do this for another anime. I actually borrowed this idea from someone who did it for Shaman King. But the problem with that person is that he or she is not updating the story, which is making me mad! So use it if you like!
To Mad Meg Askevron
You want to read my other stories? I only have four in so far, none finished. Two are one chapter away from being finished. I have another that I submitted before this one but is not progressing as fast because it's longer and harder to write.
To yuki's fangirlkireina
I'm sorry, but I had to. I would've done Ayame, but I needed a certain Fruits Basket episode to do it. Don't worry, you'll still have Yuki.
To Riharu
I kind of want to do Momiji. I hope he's next after Haru.
To Onigiri Tenshi
Yup! I'm sure because I have two really good and absolute sources that tell me that it's Yuki. If you want to know something about Kyo I could tell you. But you have to e-mal me about that, because I wouldn't want to spoil anything for anyone. Just go to my profile, better yet, you can't, so it's
To Maerin
It can't be Kyo, he heard the story. If it was him, then he would've known and told Tohru. I'm very sure that it's Yuki who gave the hat. Like I said to the other reviewer, if you want to know a connection Kyo has with Tohru just e-mail and I'll tell you.
Thank you all for your reviews! I'm so happy. I'm still begging for any of you to read my Family Discovery. It's Fruits Basket also, but a lot longer and I've put sooo much work into it. I really want it to be as successful as this story is. Also, sorry people who reviewed me about Haru obsessing over Yuki, I just had to do this with Haru. If every character has been done and I'm still in the mood, I might a character again. Thanks again and remember, you vote, you decide. If your favorite's already been picked, then pick your next favorite. This story officially ends when there are no characters left to do. Bye and see you next time!