I'm back! Oh yeah! Here I am now, to prove that I'm a great writer! Here are the votes!
Momiji - 5
Ayame - 4
Yuki - 3
Hiro - 1
Shigure - 1
So it's settled, Momiji's next! I was so hoping that it would be Ayame. Please help me out so it would be. I have the perfect story for him. Also, I got a vote for Akito, please don't bother with him. He's like, the only character I absolutely would not do! I hate him!!! So all votes for Akito WILL be ignored, remember that. Sorry it took so long but I was in Paris and London for the week and Independence Day kept me from going to the library to submit, because I can't go on the internet at home. Paris was same old same old, but London was GREAT!!!
Oops! I just realized that I forgot to put in Tohru's replies to Uo and Hana. Here they are!
To yankee-doodle
Thanks Uo. I'm getting clues of who it is, but I'm not sure yet. I'll tell you when I find out.
To debt-in-sins
Oh Hana. If it's the one I think, you don't need to meet him, because you already know him! I'm going to make sure first before letting you and Uo know.
Chapter 5- Momiji's Fiction
Next day, Momiji's skipping through the house and wondering what he can do for a story. He's never written a story before, even though he made up a song, so he won't know what to write about. The way Sasuke explained it made it seem so interesting so he wants to do it. He looks around his room and picks up a picture of his mom.
"(Everyone, but Tohru and my family, always thinks I'm always happy and cheerful, like there's nothing bad in my life. But that's not how it's always been. I got to let others know that I have a serious side, and that my life wasn't always so happy and normal.)" Momiji tells himself while looking at the picture of his mom.
"(I have to write it, but I can't tell that it's me. So how will others know about my early life? I know! I'll tell them like it's someone else. In that story, they can see that I can be sad and miserable at times, because what kind of happy person would write something so sad? That's how I'll do it!)" He runs to Haru's house and politely requests to use his computer. Being as considerate as Haru is, he lets him. Momiji gives a happy cheer and logs on to the computer so he can start typing.
After an hour, mainly because he's not very good at typing, he finishes and submits it. The story goes under his story, called.....
----------------------------------------------
The Cursed Boy by rabbitboy16
Once upon a time, there was a very happy couple. A successful Japanese man and a beautiful German lady. After getting married, the two decided to have children. When they had their first child, it was a boy, but what they didn't know is that he was cursed. Whenever he was held by a member of the opposite gender, he would transform into an animal, in his case, a rabbit.
The mom was very happy to see her baby, but when she put her arms around him, he transformed. People who suffer from this curse are ether overprotected by their parents or rejected completely. For this boy, the mom rejected him completely. She was terrified to see him. Ever since that day, she's been having mental breakdowns. She'd sometimes just collapse on the ground, screaming and crying at the same time.
Luckily for the boy, his father still loved him dearly. However, his mom became worse everyday. She was sent to a doctor and they discovered that if something wasn't done soon about this, she would die. The boy became very sad about this. All he wanted to do was help out, but there was only one solution to the problem.
Someone in his father's side of the family has the ability to erase people's memory. The father discussed this with his son, asking him if it's all right with him.
"Son, if we don't do something about your mommy soon, something terrible is going to happen to her. The only way to save her is to erase you from her memory. Don't worry, daddy will love you twice as much to make up for her love." The father gave him a hug and let him think about it.
There was nothing the boy could do. He wanted to have a mommy, but would be selfish of him if he let what he wants get in the way of what someone else needs. So he decided that he would let them erase him from his mom's memory. They took her to the doctor in the father's side of the family who could erase memories.
Before he did it, he asked her one last time, "Are you sure about this? Are you sure that you're not going to regret anything?"
She answered, "The only thing I regret is having that thing come out of my body." With that answer, he erased her only child from her memory forever. From outside the room, the little boy heard everything his mom said. The boy understood completely that his mom didn't want him. She rejected him from her body and rejected him afterwards. But the boy told himself that he wants to keep all his memories, no matter how painful they are, because in the end, he won't regret losing any part of him by losing any of his memories.
Still, it hurts him everytime he runs by his mom and little sister, knowing them well, but them barely even knowing him. Up to this day he holds all of his memories, every single one of them and still doesn't regret anything.
THE END
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The next day he quickly returns to Haru's house. Haru lets him use the computer, knowing that he wants to check his reviews, since he was the one who did it earlier. He finds a lot of reviews and begins reading.
kawaii-onigiri 03-21-04
Sniff, Momiji, I completely remember that story. I cried so much, it was so sad. I can't say I love that story because it makes me so sad. I love you!
neko-over-nezumi 03-21-04
I never knew this Momiji. I just thought that you were an annoying cheerful brat. I'm sorry I called you a brat. That's really sad. My mom was overprotective of me.
Princenezumi 03-21-04
That's terrible Momiji, what your mom said. I can't believe how cheerful you could be after going through something like that. It was really good.
girlluver 03-21-04
Nothing can describe how many tears I've shed from reading this. IT'S SO SAD!!! I feel so bad for you. You can come over whenever you want. I'll even treat you out.
nezumiforever 03-21-04
Now I feel like I had it good when I was little after reading your story. No one should ever have to hear their mom say that about them. No matter what they are.
nekoforever 03-20-04
Wah! I felt so depressed from reading that! I never knew! Is that why you're always so cheerful? So you can hide your sad past?
fabulousbigbrother 03-20-04
There is nothing to joke about your story. It was deep and it touched me greatly. If Yuki didn't know me at all I'd feel the same way too. It was a truly touching story.
tigersheep 03-20-04
Are you saying that your mom rejected you completely? That's gotta be tough! I feel bad for ever making fun of you now. I would have never been cheerful again if that happened to me.
yankee-doodle 03-20-04
Over all the stories I've read so far, I would have never thought that you would be the one who writes a story that made me cry. Is this like a perspective of your life? Or is it a fantasy version of your past? I'm going to show all my friends your story.
shockwave 03-20-04
A truly shocking story. There's nothing more sad than having a mother reject her child completely, without giving him or her a chance. I was truly understand what you've been through.
chibi-onigiri 03-20-04
Momiji, this is by far the best story I've read so far. You know by now that I'm almost just like you. You know how cheerful I am and how seldom I get depressed. If a story of any kind, makes me sad, it has got to be very good, and that's what your story did. I would've been traumatized for life if I had to go through that. I truly respect you for letting others what you had to go through.
Momiji instantly starts writing replies to everyone, thanking them for understanding his past. After finishing the replies, he discovers that his review to Haru's story has been responded to.
To kawaii-onigiri
Arigato Tohru. You're sweet.
To Princenezumi
I'm sorry Yuki, but I had to. I have nothing better to tell people.
To neko-over-nezumi
So what Kyo. At least I can love someone. The person who loves you can stop beating you up.
To girlluver
Well, the reason I never told you is because you're a pervert who needs to be locked away.
To rabbitboy16
Arigato Momiji. I read your story and loved it.
To nekoforever
Maybe you should. Even if Kyo objects, it's how you fell in love with him. Do you think he knows how you first fell in love with him?
To fabulousbigbroter
Uh Ayame, I don't feel that way about Yuki anymore. I still care about him but I don't love him like that. I have a girlfriend remember?
To tigersheep
It's wrong for a guy to love another guy, unless they love each other like family or friends, then that's okay. So yeah, I loved Yuki more than a family member, but not anymore so don't think about it.
To yankee-doodle
Do you like my black personality?
To shock-wave
Arigato Hana. I'll make sure to read your story when you post one.
To chibi-onigiri
No, I don't have that love for Yuki anymore, and yes, Rin's my girlfriend. Thanks for your review.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
AB-Angel: How was it? Sorry if Momiji's story was a little off, but I didn't want to wait to watch it again. Please review!!!! Any late votes will be counted for the chapter afterwards. The reason being that I got votes for chapter four after I submitted chapter four, so review! To everyone that reviewed for this chapter, I'll reply next time, because if I reply now, it would take longer for this chapter to be submitted. To all those who are reading my Family Discovery, I'm probably going to submit the final chapter with the next chapter of this story. Sorry, but it's hard and I'm not completely inspired to continue that story, if everyone who's reading this story reads and reviews it well, even the first chapter of the sequel will come out quick. See ya and remember, all votes count. AB-Angel out!