Votes in and all counted up. Here they are:
Ayame- 5
Shigure- 3
Kisa- 2
Uo- 1
Hatori- 1
Hooray! Thank you for voting for Ayame! And it's just in time because me cousins let my brother borrow the episodes I wanted to see to make this chapter possible. Thanks, I'll stop bugging you readers about who to vote for next. I just really wanted to do Ayame, since it's mostly been sad and serious stories. I couldn't choose between the two stories I wanted Ayame to do so I'll do them both. That's right, Ayame writing two fanfics and they'll be reviewing both of them! Now time for fun! Oh, and to everyone who reviewed the last chapter, I'm replying to them in this chapter.
Chapter 6- Ayame's Fiction
Back in the Sohma Main House, Ayame's been having his idea, but just didn't know which one to use. He's asked Hatori, but all Hatori did was ignore him. He's asked Ritsu, Kisa, even Hiro for which one but all he got was being ignored. He finally got the sense the ask the only person he could truly depend on.
He picks up the phone and dials a numbers he memorized extremely well. Once the head of the house picks up, "Shigure! How have you been?!"
"Oh, hi Aya. What a pleasant surprise. I was just thinking about you." Shigure replies.
"I'm glad you haven't forgotten about me."
"Of course, how could I ever forget you."
"But anyways, I've been pondering and asking but still the answer I wanted hasn't come up. I have two ideas for a story but I can't decide on which on to do." Ayame explains to him.
"Simple solution. Do both." Shigure answers instantly.
"Oh, what a fabulous idea! Thanks! I knew I could always count on you! Bye, bye!" Ayame hangs up and swiftly reaches the closest computer he could get his hands on, his own. After loading Microsoft Word, he quickly begins typing up both of his stories.
Several minutes later, he finishes his first one and quickly submits it, then proceeds to work on his second. Other's online discover this new story and click on to read it.
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How I Got to Wear My Hair Long in High School by fabulousbigbrother
Note: This story will be written like I'm telling the story.
It was the very start of my first year in high school. The principal had confronted me that day about my hair.
"I allowed the color, but I didn't allow you to wear your hair long. Have it cut by tomorrow." The principal ordered me.
I then looked up at him. "I'm sorry sir... but... I come from a royal family. I've kept it secret until now, but soon I must return to my own country. And it is an old age custom that members of the royal family should always wear their hair long, and to honor the high King Rurabara. Who, is said, during the fourth year of his reign, was visited by a divine image- it was Kandra, shimmering with heavenly light of red and gold! Kandra began to chant MA-RU-DA-MU-NI!! And a blue light burst forth from his forehead. At this moment, Rurubara's true spirit was set free! And just as the vast springs of strength and wisdom were swelling within him, so too did his hair begin to sprout forth from his head!" The principal gaped at me with fear and discomfort with his irises turned white. "At the same moment, the prince Kasipaloo, who had been sleeping securely in his bed, let out a mighty cry. "Kanpanil!" he shouted," The principal then attempted to excuse himself.
"Uh, excuse me, I just remembered, I'm very late for an important meeting. I have to go." Just as he turned to leave, my hand reached out and grabbed his shoulder.
"But I still have more to tell you about Kandra." I stared at him while my eyes glowed a misty gold.
A stream of tears from fear suddenly starts flowing down the principals face and he gives in.
"No! It's fine! Your hair is fine!" The principal yelled out.
And that's how I convinced him to wear my hair long.
THE END
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After reading the people quickly review, but Ayame still has to wait one day before he could read them. Ten minutes later he finishes the next story and submits it. The same readers then see this ten-minute newer story and click to read.
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How I Prevented a Group of Students from being Expelled by fabulousbigbrother
Note: This story also is written in my narrative.
One time, in high school, we had a field trip. And well, you see, there was a group of students during this trip who, we'll say, wandered into a 'red light district'...
Although it would have been hard for any healthy young man to resist that place. As it happened, one of the teachers found out where they'd gone. And then... It was decided that all the boys were to be expelled from school. Naturally, as student council president, I objected.
A meeting was called between the students, their parents, the principal, and the teachers involved. I then begin trying to convince them not to expel the boys.
"For a group of minors to set foot in a red-light district, this is by no means an act to be praised. Laws are put in place to be obeyed...otherwise... we lose order. And with that being said, I must also express my concern over what I see as a condemnation of our human instincts! I submit that the desires which led these boys astray were fueled by perhaps the most noble of human instincts, the instinct to procreate the species! Should we damn them for feeling these natural urges?"
Suddenly, one of the boys interrupted my wonderful speech by saying, "President..."
The principal then continued, "Ayame, you're being unusually serious today."
Then another teacher, "Yes. Quite a departure from your normal antics."
I then finally get to continue persuading them. "At this time, I would like to offer you a proposal! Let us offer a hand of rescue to these way worth youths. Let us help them to understand their sometimes confusing natural desires. From now on...!" I put my fingers on my chest. "They may direct their desire to me!" Everyone freezed and gaped at me. "As a chosen representative of the student body, it is only fitting that this heavy burden should fall on my shoulders. And further more... since we will all be boys, parents and teachers will have nothing to fear." I then snap around and hold my hand open. "So send me your desire! In the service of fellow students, I am prepared to receive!" I closed my hand and a strike of lightning appeared behind it.
The teachers, principal, and parents suddenly all freak out. "He's gone mad!" "Insane!" "Get him out of here!"
Two of the teachers then carried me out as commanded, but before that, "Don't worry. Despite how it looks, I know what I'm doing!"
This concludes my wonderful story! And if you must know, my best friend stepped in and said a few words and that's how the boys avoided being expelled.
THE END
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Shortly after submission, Ayame jumps up and starts going to everyone else who's registered. He shows his impatience by asking them if they read and reviewed it, and if they did what they thought of it. All of them just told him to wait and see. Groaning in defeat, he waits until the next day and instantly checks them once he got the chance.
For his first story:
kawaii-onigiri 03-22-04
I remember that story. I really didn't think of it as funny then but after reading it now, I started laughing so much!
neko-over-nezumi 03-22-04
You're such a baka! The only reason why the principal let you cause you were freaking him out!
princenezumi 03-22-04
it's such a wonder that we're brothers. You're such a baka.
girlluver 03-22-04
Weren't those the good days?! I bet your other story is about the time when you, I mean Ha'ri, prevented those boys from being expelled.
rabbitboy16 03-22-04
That's funny Ayame! I wish I could think of a story that original to tell someone.
nezumiforever 03-22-04
I thought that it was a wonder why Shigure wasn't locked away yet, now I think you too should go with him.
nekoforever 03-21-04
That's a funny way to tell someone why you have to wear your hair long. I was laughing a lot.
tigersheep 03-21-04
When did 'you' become part of a royal family? And why you have to wear your hair long just because some king's hair sprouted out? And why did the prince give a mighty cry? You never explained that also. Plus, who the heck is Kandra? Funny.
yankee-doodle 03-21-04
You must be Yuki's older brother. I'd say your nuts, but if I heard that as an excuse with my two own ears, I'd burst out in laughter.
shockwave 03-21-04
You're a very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very strange man.
chibi-onigiri 03-21-04
Uh, I don't know what to say really. It's pretty weird and funny, especially with your voice it'd probably multiply the humor by a lot. That's all for now.
Ayame smiles happily at his reviews and quickly checks his other story's reviews.
kawaii-onigiri 03-22-04
This one made me laugh also!
neko-over-nezumi 03-22-04
If I had a choice either to live with you or Yuki, I'd choose Yuki in a second. You're the biggest sicko I've met!
princenezumi 03-22-04
I feel as though I should stay away from you even more now. I can't believe you actually put that story in there.
girlluver 03-22-04
I was right! At least you made it clear that Ha'ri did something.
rabbitboy16 03-22-04
This one's just as funny, but I'd feel uncomfortable if the student council president said that at a meeting I was in.
nezumiforever 03-22-04
On second thought, we should just lock you up and throw away the key. Shigure looks pretty good compared to you.
nekoforever 03-22-04
You're pretty weird Ayame, but that's what makes you who you are.
tigersheep 03-22-04
What did you mean by sending their desire to you? That really doesn't sound right. I'd kick you out in a second if you said something like that to me.
yankee-doodle 03-21-04
I can tell why Yuki never speaks of you, because I wouldn't either.
shockwave 03-21-04
You're now a very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very sick man.
chibi-onigiri 03-21-04
Okay, I have some things to say about this one. For one, I am grossed beyond all belief. Seriously, what did you mean by sending desires? Like Hiro said, that doesn't sound right. Luckily Hatori was there to save the day, you just made it freakier.
Ayame wasn't as happy with this set, but still took it. He then starts replying to the reviewers. When he's about to reply, he notices his review for Momiji's story has been responded to he opens it and begins reading.
To kawaii-onigiri
I love you too Tohru!
To Princenezumi
It's because I don't let it get to me. I am the way I am and I try not to let anything change that.
To neko-over-nezumi
Well, at least I remember her. Thanks Kyo.
To girlluver
That's very nice of you, but it's okay. You don't have to.
To nezumiforever
It's hard, but I still have my father so I could move on.
To nekoforever
I guess.
To fabulousbigbrother
I glad to know that others know I hard it could be for others.
To tigersheep
Yes, my mom rejected me, but it's okay.
To yankee-doodle
It's a perspective of my early life. I just wanted others to know that behind my smile, there's a sad past to it.
To shock-wave
Arigato Hana.
To chibi-onigiri
I've always respected you, we're great friends and that's all that matters.
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How was it? Review! But first, here are replies to everyone with questions or a review to reply to.
To FruitsBasketcase
Please don't worry about trivial things like that, and I think I made it pretty clear that Hana's pen name has changed.
To Runic Knight
What? You don't like my name for Uo?
To Nydia Seagate
Well, if I write one for Hatori and I don't have any good ideas, I'll probably do that. A pen name you say, maybe solitary-dragon.