Plus, I'm adding more people to the review list. Take a guess at who they are and only for this chapter will I have anonymous reviewers. After planning all of my stories, I've decided that this story will be 26 chapters long. That means that 7 people will do another story again. But only your guys vote can determine who the lucky seven will be.
Chapter 7- Shigure's SongWhile everyone else has been using Shigure's computer to type up their stories, Shigure sits and thinks.
"(Hmm, so far Tohru, Kyo, Haru, Momiji, and Aya have written a story. Maybe I should too, but I wouldn't know what to write about. He, that's pretty sad considering that I'm a novelist.)" Shigure stays in position and ponders more.
After five minutes, and song that he likes singing in his head starts playing. "I GOT IT!!! (I'm going to write a song. And what no better subject than about what else, HIGH SCHOOL GIRLS!)"
Shigure instantly turns on his computer and begins typing. After a minute or two he finishes. The song didn't take him very long considering that he always sings the chorus in his head. The song of his favorite subject which is……..
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High School Girls by girl-luver
Rated: AHSG(About high school girls)
This is to all the lovely high school girls out there.
Chorus:
High school girls
High school girls
1,2,3 High school girls
High school girls
High school girls
All for me! High school girls
1.
The type of high school girl I want for me
One that's prettier than my cousin Yuki
She's gotta be smart, and a whole lot of fun
Just as long as she isn't a dumb blonde
If she sees me as more than a friend
All the more reason to be in high school again!
(Repeat Chorus)
2.
Why high school girls appeal so much to me?
It's a story shrouded in mystery,
People think of me as a high-class perv.
I guess that's a title I deserve.
I wish I was reborn again into this world
As the only boy in a school filled with,
HIGH SCHOOL GIRLS!!!!
(Repeat Chorus)
Bridge:
Of course there are other races with pretty high school girls
Black, white, Puerto Rican, Chinese girls
I don't care if they have a lot of cash
As long as they have a nice fine…face
(Repeat Chorus)
Hope all you pretty high school girls liked it.
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Next day Shigure checks his reviews for his song.
kawaii-onigiri 03-24-04
Shigure, I can't believe you wrote a song about us! How nice.
neko-over-nezumi 03-24-04
You sick BASTARD!!!!
princenezumi 03-24-04
The only thing about that song that I agree with is you being a perv.
rabbitboy16 03-24-04
Shigure's a perv! Shigure's a perv!
nezumiforever 03-24-04
I told Ayame that he deserves to be locked up more than you, but you just had to go and write this song.
nekoforever 03-24-04
EEWWW!!!!
solitarydragon 03-24-04
I'm simply amazed of how perverted and sick you are to say anything else.
sissy-n-sheep 03-23-04
Will this apply to me when I get into high school?
tigersheep 03-23-04
This goes beyond perverted. I don't even know what to say!
yankee-doodle 03-23-04
This song is so wrong I won't even say anything!
shockwave 03-23-04
I remember calling your friend a very very very very very very very very very very very very sick man, and I'm calling you a very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very disgusting man.
Mrs.YukiSohma 03-23-04
I believe that you're related to my Prince Yuki. I don't think that there's any girl or person who is better looking than the Prince! HAIL TO THE PRINCE!!!
anonymous-reader 03-23-04
Man, if you want a girl prettier than this girl cousin of yours, than this girl must be hot! I mean your cousin.
dontknowwhyimhere 03-23-04
Can you give me this Yuki girl's number?
fanfics-are-for-nerds 03-23-04
Cool song! I think that I'll use this to woo my girlfriend!
chibi-onigiri 03-23-04
The song was actually creative. If it weren't so perverted, I'd actually like it. I believe that this is the first good review you've got from everyone else who knows you.
After reading them, he becomes mildly disappointed that he didn't get many good reviews. So he starts writing his replies.
After finishing, he notices a reply from Aya's story. Curious to read what his close friend wrote, he clicks on the link. He notices that Aya only replied once.
To kawaii-onigiri
Thank you Tohru! You are truly a princess.
To Princenezumi
Oh Yuki! Don't let this story get in the way of our brotherhood! I will do everything in my power to win you over!
To neko-over-nezumi
Well that's just rude!
To girlluver
That's very kind of you.
To rabbitboy16
Really, oh that's okay. You're still not all the way mature in mind.
To nezumiforever
What? That's not nice!
To nekoforever
Well, that's pretty true.
To tigersheep
Well, you're too young to understand.
To yankee-doodle
Who are you?
To shock-wave
Who are you too, because that's rude!
To chibi-onigiri
I don't think you're old enough either. You'll find out when you get older, trust me.
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AB-Angel: There you have it! Chapter 7's finally in! But that doesn't mean I'm back for now. But don't worry! And plus I have an announcement! When I finished my Family Discovery, I was a little mad at what I could've put in but didn't, so I'm adding a special chapter to my story! You're going to have to wait and find out what it's about.