I'm here! What? But mama I ... Oh sorry! Quoting Mulan again. I'm finally back! Sorry for the long wait but I'm here and working again!
Here are the results:
Kisa-3
Hatori-3
Hiro-2
Yuki-1
Not very impressive amount of votes considering it was carried over from last chapter. The victor is Kisa! Since it was a tie, I always pick who I'd rather do more. Oh and another thing, remember Tohru's fic, the one about the hat. I was wrong, it wasn't Yuki, I believe it was Kyo, but still not sure. I have a very good reason for believing this. Okay, since Kisa's next, this one might not be good. I'm not so sure what to do for Kisa, or Hatori for that matter. It might just be one of those sweet kawaii fics. I'll do my best. Plus, I've added another to the reviewing cast. It might not be obvious who it is.
Chapter 8- Kisa's Story
The school bell rings and Kisa is walking behind Hiro holding his hand. They meet Tohru at the front and she takes them out on a little date. During their little fun hour, Kisa can't help but notice how Hiro and Tohru aren't getting along the way she wants.
When the day ends, Tohru drops them off and leaves them with one of her big goofy smiles of hers. "Bye Kisa! Bye Hiro! See you next time!"
"Finally! I wanted to spend the day with you but no! She had to show up and ruin everything!" Hiro tells Kisa as they walk inside the Sohma gates.
"(Why can't Hiro and Sissy get along? What is she doing so wrong that Hiro has to be like this to her? All I'm asking is to have one perfect day with both of them. Without Hiro arguing or being mean to her. Hmm, I remember Sasuke showing Hiro that thing on writing stories and having them read by people everywhere. I know! I'll write the perfect day with Hiro, Sissy, and I! I want everyone to know how much I love being with them and how much I want them to get along!)" Kisa plans out.
"Uh, Hiro? Can we go visit Shigure Ojiisan?" Kisa asks ever so nicely.
Hiro, who has a hard time saying 'no' to here, answers as positively and reluctantly as he could. "Sure, but why?" he then asks.
"I just wanted to see them again. It's been a while." Kisa replies.
"Well, I guess it couldn't hurt. Okay come on. Let's go ask Hatori to drop us off." Hiro tells her. She happily follows him in their search for Hatori.
In a short time, they find him. "Hatori, can we go and visit Shigure's house?" Hiro asks, then adds, "Kisa wants to pay them a visit."
"Sure, I was just on my way there. For some reason, Shigure wanted to see me. Come on, I'm going now." Hatori leads the two kids to his car. In no time, they drive off to Shigure's house.
After an hour or two at staying in Shigure's house, Kisa's a little bugged at how Hiro still seem to not be able to get along with Tohru. She knows that Tohru wants nothing more than to become Hiro's friend, but Kisa can't seem to see that Hiro likes Tohru too, he's just not showing it.
Then it hits her. Everyone's been reading those stories that Tohru, Shigure, Ayame, Haru, Momiji, and Kyo wrote, why can't she write one about Tohru and Hiro getting along. If Hiro reads it, he might see how much she wants the three of them to be together and get along.
She leaves the table for a bit to find Shigure. She finds him in his room doing his so called 'work'. He notices her and greets her. "Ahh, hello Kisa. What brings you here?" He asks, smiling at her. Before she answers, he says, "Wait, let me guess. You want to write one of those stories everyone else has been writing right?" She nods. "Be my guest. I'll leave while you work."
She puts up her hands to stop Shigure from leaving. "Wait Shigure Ojiisan! Can you stay here and help me?" She asks.
He smiles again, "Sure." He sits with her in front of the computer, "So what is it you want to write about?" he asks while logging on.
"Well, Hiro's always arguing with Sissy and can't seem to get along with her. I wanted to write something about the three of us being together and having fun, so Hiro can see how much I want us three to get along." Kisa explains.
"That should be pretty easy, (I'm must refrain from putting anything perverted since this is Kisa's story). Okay, let's get started!" Shigure and Kisa begin writing the story. While Kisa's telling Shigure what happening, Shigure's typing it and making sure there's no mistakes.
Less than thirty minutes later, they both finish before Hiro and Tohru notice that Kisa's been gone for quite a while, because of Shigure's fast typing. Before Kisa goes back to the two, she submits the story. After leaving, Shigure reads it over again so he could review it and tell her what he thinks.
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My Ideal Day by sissy-n-sheep
Rated: LBG (Lengthy but good)
Hello! My name is Kisa Sohma, I'm thirteen years old and I'm a seventh grader. The two most important people to me can't seem to get along, so this story is for both of them and to show how much I want all three of us to get along. This is something that happened before and I want everyone to know what happened that day, because I'll always cherish that memory forever.
One day, after school, Kisa Sohma convinces Hiro Sohma to do something fun after school. He takes her to the park to see if any of his friends are there. A couple of minutes later, two faces pop out of nowhere.
"Kisa? Hiro? What are you doing here?" Tohru asks not expecting to see them.
"Why is it any of your business? What, do I need a permit to be here or something? And what's that boy doing here with you?" Hiro going on as usual with the questions instead of giving a direct answer.
"You haven't changed a bit." Sasuke comments with a small laugh.
"Hiro, stop. I wanted to go here to play with some kids, but no one was here, then you two came." Kisa explains to the two.
"(Why does Kisa always have to say everything!) Yeah whatever!" Hiro adds while turning his head away from Tohru and Sasuke.
Sasuke gives Hiro a small glare. "So you want to come with us today? At six we're going to watch a movie." He offers.
"So what are you going to do for the next three hours?" Kisa asks, liking the idea of spending the day with her sissy.
"We have no idea." Tohru and Sasuke both say.
"I have an idea, let's go to the amusement park." Hiro suggests, while not caring what others think since there seems to be nothing else to do that's fun.
"Okay!" Tohru responds like it's nothing.
"But isn't that a lot to spend?" Sasuke asks Hiro.
"Don't worry, I'll pay for me and Kisa, and Tohru can pay for you two." Sasuke turns to Tohru with a worried look on his face.
"I never really have a lot of money Tohru." He admits.
"That's okay! I'll be glad to pay for you." Tohru smiles, hoping that that will make him feel better.
"Uh, hai." Sasuke replies, now feeling even more uncomfortable, but tries to not let it bother him.
Hiro leads them to the amusement park and there they spend the day together.
"You want to ride or play games?" Hiro asks.
"We think we'll ride first, then eat, then play some games." Sasuke plans.
Hiro then towers over Sasuke with a stress mark on his head. "And since when did you do all the planning huh? What are you, the leader? Cause I don't think so."
Kisa then stops Hiro. "Hiro, I like that way."
"You're forgiven." Hiro says to Sasuke.
"R..i..g..h..t!" Sasuke slowly says sarcastically.
"So what ride do you want to go on first?" Tohru asks.
"BUMPER CARS!!" Hiro and Sasuke both yell.
Tohru then turns to Kisa. "How about you Kisa?"
"I'll just watch for now." Kisa answers with a smile.
So, they go over to the bumper cars. Hiro and Sasuke both get cars on opposite sides. Once the ride starts, Hiro and Sasuke both start to drive directly towards each other. Before impact, Sasuke immediately turns out of the way, making Hiro crash really hard into a bigger not as playful guy.
"(Oh crap!)" Hiro yells in his head and begins driving away from the crazy idiot. The guy gets pissed off and starts chasing Hiro around the zone.
"Sasuke! Help!" Hiro screams in need of rescuing from the insane adult.
Sasuke then says to himself, "Should I? Or should I not? That is the question. (It 'was' my fault.) And the answer is...... why not?"
Sasuke then drives over and knocks Hiro backwards making the dummy crash hard into Hiro, nearly making both of them whiplash. Satisfied, the guy drives away and starts attacking other people. Shortly after the ride ends, Hiro gets up and confronts Sasuke.
"What kind of helping was that?" Hiro yells with is hands on his hips.
"Very good helping." Sasuke answers with a smile, his eyes closed, and his arms crossed.
"You crashed me into that crazy guy!" Hiro yells again pointing at the crazy idiot.
"What are you complaining about? I stopped him from killing you." Sasuke, using his smarts, replies to shut Hiro up.
The anger slips away from his face. "You've got a point. But next time, don't try to get me killed! Got it?"
"Very tightly." He answers quietly yet sarcastically.
"Good!" Hiro says with a small smile. Kisa and Tohru then run over to them.
"Hiro! Sasuke! Did you two have fun?" Tohru asks cheerfully.
"I had a blast!" Sasuke then raises an eyebrow towards Hiro.
"Really? You didn't have the look of enjoyment when that guy was trying to kill you." Sasuke says with his arms crossed looking at Hiro.
"That's beside the point."
"Uh, no it isn't." Sasuke says quietly to himself.
"Let's let Kisa decide the next ride." Tohru suggests.
"(Probably going to be some sweet ride or something slow.)" Sasuke thinks.
"I want to go on the carousal." Sasuke and Hiro both sweatdrop.
"(A carousal! I hate carousals!)" Sasuke yells and mentally slaps himself for letting Tohru ask Kisa what to ride.
"(What a childish ride! But for Kisa, okay!)" Hiro tells himself but remembers that this his chance to be closer to Kisa.
"Fine." Both say with a hint of sarcasm.
"Come on!" Tohru exclaims, leading the way.
Tohru and Kisa both skip to the merry-go-round together with Sasuke and Hiro behind them crossing their arms with their eyes slightly closed.
"Hiro! Let's ride on this carriage together!" Kisa tells Hiro, patting the seat beside her.
"(Yes! One for Hiro!) Coming." Hiro runs up and sits beside her.
"Sasuke, let's both get a horse." Tohru suggests to Sasuke pointing at the moving horses.
"If you want." Sasuke disappointedly says, since he really does not want to ride a carousal.
The ride starts and Sasuke tries his best to at least act like he was having fun, which actually doesn't work, because whenever he does try to act like he's having fun, he starts saying the dumbest and weirdest things. Hiro doesn't have a problem since he's beside Kisa trying to put his arm around her.
"(Hiro and I are going on the roller coaster next whether Tohru and Kisa like it or not!)" Sasuke yells in his mind, wishing he could telepathically tell Hiro.
"(Me and Sasuke! On the roller coaster next! It's nice being with Kisa, but this ride sucks!)" Hiro comments to himself, hoping that the ride will end any minute now.
"(I wonder if Hiro and Sasuke are having fun. They didn't look too happy when Kisa said the carousal. I know! We'll take them to something that could be really fun for boys like them. I know! Kisa and I will take them to the roller coaster next. That should cheer them up.)" Tohru tells herself, then smiles really warmly.
"(Poor Hiro, I know he's not enjoying the ride, but I wanted something slow and steady, so I could relax and be with him. After this, he can ride whatever he wants.)" Kisa sighs happily and rests her head on Hiro's shoulder, putting a big smile on his face.
Not too long after the ride ends, Sasuke instantly gets off. Hiro and Kisa take their time and Tohru is right behind them. Then both at the same time, Hiro and Sasuke yell "ROLLER COASTER! NOW!"
"Hai!" The other two answer directly without hesitation.
"Oh," surprised Sasuke becomes, "then let's go."
They both run while holding Tohru and Kisa's hand towards the roller coaster. Hiro guides them to the closest one. When they reach it, they look up and see how tall and long it is.
"Uh, Hiro. Are you sure about this?" Sasuke asks, not too sure about this particular roller coaster.
"What, are you scared?" Hiro asks his competition sarcastically, knowing that if Sasuke says yes, that he'll never let Sasuke hear the end of it.
"No way! I want to ride, but I'm not so sure about these two." He points his thumb at mesmerized Tohru and Kisa.
"Big." Tohru says dumbly.
She holds on tight to Hiro. "Hiro, I'm scared. I don't want to go on."
"We'll just sit this one out. You two go and enjoy yourselves." Tohru takes Kisa and sits down on the nearest bench.
"If you say so." Sasuke says, like it's no loss.
Unfortunately, Hiro has to be with Kisa. "Are you sure? I'll be there to hold you if you get scared." he says to Kisa.
"(Hold her! Isn't Hiro a little too young to be thinking of things like that! What's he trying to pull?)" Sasuke asks himself about their age.
"It's quite all right you know. We'd rather just relax for now." Tohru assures them.
Sasuke tugs on Hiro's arm a little, making him face Sasuke. "Come on Hiro! There's no persuading them."
"Whatever." They both get in line for the front seats. A few minutes later, they come back with disappointed and a little annoyed looks on their faces.
"What happened?" Tohru asks with concern, knowing that they didn't get what they wanted.
A sweatdrop then appears on both boys' heads. Hiro then just admits it so that Tohru and Kisa won't bug them about it. "We're too short."
"Oh, that's too bad (and kind of funny.)" Tohru says in a sad tone, holding back her laugh.
"But they said we're big enough to go on the other rides." Sasuke informs.
"Then why not? The roller coaster can't be the only fun ride, can it?" Tohru asks.
"I guess the Revolution could prove to be exciting, if they have one here." Sasuke confirms.
"The Revolution? What's that?" Hiro asks.
"Ah, so you don't know. Follow me and be enlightened." Sasuke then begins looking for a Revolution. In his luck, there is one and it is huge.
"That looks freaky." Hiro proclaims.
"Do you want to go on it?" Sasuke asks with a lifted eyebrow kind of hoping that Hiro would say 'no' so he could rub it in his face.
"You'd never let me live it down if I didn't." Hiro informs Sasuke. He then turns to Kisa. "Do you want to go on Kisa?"
"It looks scarier than the roller coaster. I might get a headache if I go on." Kisa answers, acting all fragile and delicate.
"(Oh my God! This girl would crack at the smallest punch!)" Sasuke yells in his head, snapping it back a little as if something really dumb has just occurred.
"(Isn't there any exciting she'll go on?) if you don't want to then I won't force you." Hiro assures Kisa and looks at her in the eyes.
Kisa then hugs Hiro. "Arigato Hiro."
"Ahh! That's sweet Hiro." Tohru says, clapping her hands together.
"(Loser!) How about you Tohru?" Sasuke asks getting her attention.
"Well....okay! I could use something exciting. But who will stay with Kisa?" Tohru asks Sasuke and Hiro.
Then a mysterious person from behind answers "I will."
Tohru jumps back in shock of her best friend sneaking up on her. "Hana! Don't scare me like that!"
"I'm sorry, but I heard that you need someone to watch Kisa for now." Hana reminds Tohru.
"Really? You'd do that?" Tohru asks her in a sort of surprised voice.
"What are friends for?"
"Arigato!" Tohru bows down to Hana.
Sasuke then approaches Hana. "Hi Saki! Where's Megumi?"
After he asked that, someone from behind answers him "Right here."
Sasuke, knowing Megumi, is not surprised. "Nice try, but your not going to scare me like that."
"Oh darn." Megumi pouts, acting like he's mad.
"Uh, are we going on a ride or not?" Hiro interrupts with his arms crossed over his chest.
Sasuke turns to Megumi before leaving. "Megumi, are you coming or staying?"
"I'll stay Sasuke. These things bore me."
"Really?" He raised an eyebrow "(Or I bet that he wants to spend time with Kisa) if you say so. Come on Tohru!"
"See you later Hana!" All three of them sit on the bench and watch the other three get in line for the Revolution. Kisa has a conversation with Hana and Megumi while waiting.
About ten minutes later, the trio returns with Sasuke and Hiro looking sort of satisfied, and a Tohru looking very messed up, mainly in the area where the hair belongs.
"The was such a rush! I don't think I've ever done anything that exciting!" Tohru announces.
"It's just a ride Tohru." Sasuke reminds his older cousin.
"But didn't you have fun?" Tohru asks him.
"It was all right, wasn't it Hiro?" he faces Hiro.
"NO! It was so annoying!" Hiro yells with a stress mark on his head.
"Why is that?" Tohru asks. She was sitting on the other side of Hiro in the ride so she really didn't know what happened.
"Sasuke was getting bored on the ride, so he decided to yell 'WEEE!' everytime we flipped or swinged! It was so annoying! He did not want to shut up!" Hiro screams out, holding back the powerful urge to knock Sasuke out.
"Hey! I was making the ride more fun for me. You can't complain. You were the one who kept on screaming like a little girl, not Tohru. She was too busy closing her eyes and keeping her legs up to cover her body. Everyone then begins to stare at Hiro. Hiro takes a step back and sweatdrop begin to appear.
"All right! You got me! You tell anyone else and I will hunt you down!" Sasuke rolls his eyes at him. "Hmph! I still wish that we were tall enough to go on the roller coaster."
"Life has its losses." Hana proclaims.
"Well, it's been fun chatting with Kisa, but we have to get going. Come on Hana." Megumi tells them holding Hana's hand to leave.
"Farewell Tohru, see you at school." She waves bye to Tohru.
Tohru begins to wave her entire arm and says "Bye Hana!"
"So what were you two talking about?" Sasuke asks Kisa.
"You and Hiro, but it wasn't personal things. It's just that you two seem so much alike." Kisa tells him.
"Really?" They both said then looked at each other. "No way!" they both face away and cross their arms at the same time.
"(Kisa's right, but Sasuke's more open about things.)" Tohru then puts her finger on her chin. "(Hmm, I wonder what Yuki and the others are doing back home, I hope the house is still there when I get back.)"
They take a break to eat and play some games. That's when Tohru discovers something they've been overlooking.
"It's all half price today! Hiro, did you plan this?" Tohru asks Hiro, finally discovering that he did plan all this.
"Yup! I had a feeling we'd run into you two today, so I checked on what we could do together." Hiro tells them in a way of saying 'all right you caught me!'
"You mean, you actually wanted to be with us?" Sasuke asks him, kind of confused.
"Are you really that dense? Take a hint!" Hiro yells at him while putting his hands on his hips.
"Oh, uh hai. (So Hiro does like me, as a friend, he just doesn't like showing affection or being friendly for that matter.)" Sasuke happily thinks.
"Hiro, I had a wonderful day today. Arigato!" Tohru says.
Sasuke then tugs on her shirt a little to get her attention. "Tohru, what time is it?"
Tohru glances at her watch to find out. "It's quarter to six."
"Come on!" He pulls her arm. "The movie's about to start. Hiro, Kisa, do you want to come?"
"What movie is it?" Hiro asks, waiting to hear if it's worthy enough for Hiro to watch it.
"It's called Dai Tsugeki, it's from the anime Naruto, which I really like. The movie is showing today." He tells all three of them.
"What's it about?" Tohru asks.
"I'll tell you on the way." All four of them begin walking to the theater, which is about ten minutes away."The anime is about a little boy, obviously named Naruto. When he was born a fox demon was sealed away inside him. Because of this, he is shunned by the adults and made fun of by the kids. All he wants is respect from the people, so he becomes a ninja and tries to prove himself. He is teamed up with three other ninjas, Sakura, Sasuke..."
"Hey that's your name!" Kisa announces.
"Yes I know, And Kakashi, their sensei. It's their adventures and battles versus enemies. It's very interesting. (That's weird, I just realized that in Naruto, Sakura has a crush on Sasuke, and Megumi has been giving me hints that Sakura has a crush on me. That's really weird!)" Sasuke thinks while a weird feeling comes over him, quickly he shakes off those thoughts and continues the conversation.
"Kisa, do you want to see it?" Hiro asks his girlfriend/cousin.
"It sounds good. So okay! I'll watch it." Kisa answers happily.
Since Kisa said 'yes', that leaves Hiro no other choice. "Then I'll watch it too."
"So it's another group activity. I'd never think I'd have so much fun with you two. I'm mean, like no offense, but you are like the two who avoids everyone. Hiro seems like the serious type, and Kisa is like the shy type. Is it was really fun. I really enjoy being with you two." Sasuke compliments both of them.
"Arigato Sasuke." Kisa thanks him.
"I guess I could say thanks." Hiro says while rolling his eyes.
"(I can't believe this is the Hiro I know, he's beginning to be more open and happy! Sasuke reminds me of how everyone sees me. When people are around him, they're just happy.)" Tohru happily says in her mind.
"We're here! Come on! My treat." Sasuke tells all of them.
"(It better be good, but what does that matter, I'm not paying.)" Hiro thinks in relief that he doesn't have to spend anymore money.
Sasuke buys tickets and they all go in. Sasuke find four seats and Tohru insists on buying the refreshments. He leaves and shortly returns with a small bag of popcorn, two drinks, one for Sasuke and Tohru, the other for Hiro and Kisa, and a little candy. At exactly six o'clock the previews start showing, and of course, Hiro has to comment.
"Why do they bother showing these? Do they really think we could care less? What's the point of wasting our time with these things?" Hiro raves on nearly forgetting that he's in a theater, not like that'll stop him anyway.
"Hiro, be quiet." Kisa whispers, sounding a little angry.
"Whatever." He settles down and sips on the drink.
After three minutes of previews the movie finally starts. Hiro falls completely silent in fear of getting Kisa mad. The beginning of the movie starts out very well, Sasuke, Tohru, and Kisa were really enjoying the movie, but Hiro tries to resist from saying anything. In the movie, Naruto and Sasuke we're trying to find Sakura after she gets captured.
Tohru gets a little more tense, but Kisa and Sasuke remains relaxed a silent. Hiro still is trying to resist from commenting on anything. After one and half-hours, the movie ends and everyone comes out showing that they enjoyed the movie. Tohru becomes a little more relaxed and a little invigorated. Sasuke and Kisa are completely happy with what they just saw, and Hiro finally starts burst and starts going about everything he wanted to say.
"What was with that Naruto? Why couldn't they just kill the bad guy when they had the chance? Why does Sakura never want to show her true feelings for Sasuke? And what was with the Kakashi Sensei?"
They all stare at Hiro while sweatdropping. Sasuke finally goes forward and says something. "So you didn't like it?" Sasuke asks.
"It's now one of my favorite movies." They all fall down the anime way.
"You know Hiro, if you really like something, you don't continuously question it." Sasuke informs the questioning boy.
"Whatever. It's late now so Kisa and I better get going. See you at school tomorrow Sasuke. Later Tohru." Hiro takes Kisa's hand and gets ready to leave.
"Bye Sasuke, bye sissy." They both go on their way home, back to their house.
THE ENDYup! This is, out of the entire time I knew Sissy, my favorite day. I know Hiro was really nice to Tohru, but only when we're with Sasuke. If he's not around Hiro's so mean to her. I hope Hiro could finally just stop and be friends with Tohru. Thanks for reading and tell me what you think!
Hello! This is her ojiisan. I did the typing for this story and as you've read, there are thoughts in the story. Although Kisa or I for that matter didn't know what they were thinking at those times, I just assumed that it'd be something they think, depending on the situation. Hope you liked it, oh and please don't comment on this note!
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When Kisa goes to school the next day, she quickly checks her mail for any reviews, and to her luck, there a lot of reviews.
kawaii-onigiri 01-25-05
I loved it! I remember that day. It was one of the best!
neko-over-nezumi 01-25-05
So that's what you did that day when we knocked out Shigure. I wished I could have that much fun!
princenezumi 01-25-05
How sweet. No wonder Tohru and Sasuke came back with such big smiles on their faces.
gurl-luver 01-25-05
Kisa. Great job! I'm simply amazed by your skills in writing. I wonder who that person was who typed it. He must be extremely skilled.
rabbitboy16 01-25-05
WHAT?? You did all that without me! No fair!
nezumiforever 01-25-05
My little Kisa had fun. I happy for you Kisa, but I wished I was there too. It sounded like a lot of fun.
nekoforever 01-25-05
AHH! How cute!! YOU'RE SO LUCKY!!!
solitarydragon 01-25-05
That's why you came home so late, well, as long as you had fun. Very nice.
tigersheep 01-24-05
I remember that day, doesn't mean I'll still be nice to Tohru! It's only because Sasuke and I are best buds! But, I'll never forget that day either.
yankee-doodle 01-24-05
How sweet! Have we met? Oh well, I see you know Hana also. It was a very good story to tell to the world.
shockwave 01-24-05
Ahh, memories, what will we do without them. I might be better off, or not. That was truly a wonderful story. I wonder if Megumi still remembers?
Mrs.YukiSohma 01-24-05
I don't believe we've met, but I read and was touched. I hope to spend a day like that with Yuki. My dearest Yuki.
for-my-sis 01-24-05
Those were the days. Very good describing. I wonder why you left out the conversation between both of us? Maybe it was because it was mostly about Sasuke and this stories not about him right?
chibi-onigiri 01-24-05
Applaud! Applaud! Excellent! I'll also be one who'll never ever forget that day. It was the best! I can't believe how accurately you told that story. So long and yet you told it like it was happening before your very eyes! VERY VERY GOOD!!
After reading them, she smiles very widely. Hiro notices and decides not to ask. She then sees the reply she got from Shigure's song and to everyone else.
To kawaii-onigiri
Thank you! I could write more if you want.
To princenezumi
Uh uh Yuki. I'm not JUST a perv. I'm also a published novelist.
To neko-over-nezumi
You're so mean! I'm telling!
To rabbitboy16
That's not nice Momiji. Want me to tell your daddy?
To nezumiforever
Didn't you tell me that on White Day?
To nekoforever
It's not eww! It's poetry.
To solitarydragon
Oh come on Hari! You don't mean that!
To sissy-n-sheep
Probably, because I bet you're going to be a beautiful high school.
To tigersheep
I know what to say, you're going to be with one in a few years.
To yankee-doodle
Why not?
To shock-wave
Who Aya? I'm not that sick, maybe remove about ten of those veries and that should be correct.
To Mrs.YukiSohma
Really, let me get a good look at you and I'll determine if you're better looking than my cousin.
To chibi-onigiri
Thank you Sasuke! You're so nice. I wanted to try to write something else besides stories.
Kisa laughs a little at the replies, then goes back to attending school.
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AB-Angel: So how was it? Was it good? Tell me, what the chapter good? (Quoting Azumanga Diaoh. Very funny part) Sorry for the extremely long updating but I didn't get that many reviews. Did any of you even read the song Shigure wrote? Because I only received a couple of reviews from that chapter. If you didn't then read that chapter also and tell me what you think. Remember, vote on the next character and tell me what you thought of the chapter! Oh, and if you haven't noticed, Kisa's story was from my Family Discovery chapter 4, just so you know.
I'm not really updating my fanfics because I've put them on temporary hold. Sorry! But I've started an original manga that's going very well. It's called A Rising Talent. I've created the main cast, designed them, gave them lengthy profiles, and designed the cover. If you want go check it out. Everyone who read it so far really likes it. Anyways, review!!!! I promise I'll update this fic faster if you just show some support! Oh and to everyone who read my Family Discovery, if you really want to sequel to come out by at least this week or next week, show me some support for that fic in your reviews. Thanks again for reading and I'm really back this time!
Now replying to reviewers
To Lys3
Really? You liked it. Maybe I should write more funny reviews like that.
To Lefullie
That's nice. I'm adding more.
To Goldfire
Thanks!
To chibi-yumi
I'm trying, I might consider adding the rest of the Prince Yuki fanclub, might. Also, everytime it's a really wacky fic, I'll add anonymous reviewers.
To Mirror of Chasm
Thanks, I like being funny, some say I'm very good at making people laugh.
To Nao
You got your wish!
To CrazyInsaneAnimeFanGirl
Glad you liked it.
To Runic Knight
I'm happy you like it. Do you like everyone else's name?
To JustAnotherAnimeFan
Well, I hope you find out all you want to know about Ayame.
To FruitsBasketcase
Only if people vote for him, I'll do. But I have a weird feeling that Hatori might be next. I don't know, we'll see.
To GirlWaterShaman
Did you read it? Shigure's song?
To demon m-chan
Thanks. I've been having a blast here in Hawaii! My manga collection went from 6 in Germany to 30 here. My anime collection hasn't improved much, maybe cause it's like, super expensive. Also, I might get a girlfriend. She's a really cool person who creates her own manga. She's the reason I started my manga. Since I got here, my talents have gotten better, my writing, my drawing, and now I write songs, besides that Shigure one, real songs that have a meaning and all. I'll put the website I created in school at the end. Check it out!
To Raizard333
Thank you one out of the two people who read Shigure's song. I forgot I wrote this song when I wrote like, seven other songs for my original manga. Hope you enjoy the rest.
To Riharu
I must thank that second person out of two who read my Shigure song. Thank you!
To melaniemelmelgirl
I don't believe I received a review from you coming from the seventh chapter. It's okay. Have you read my updated Cardcaptor Sakura fic?
There you have it! If you want to check almost everything I've been doing since I got here in Hawaii, check out the website I created in school entitled Creativity. It has ten of the songs I wrote and finished, all my fanfics and my manga that I've submitted, and most of my drawings. Here it is - http:www.k12.hi.us/abuna224/q2. Add that curvy symbol. You know, the one in the corner of your keyboard before the abuna224. Plus, tell me what you think of everything I've been doing. Also, I need some support for my Cardcaptor Sakura, DN Angel, and .HackDusk fics. Please read those if you have time. Thanks again and REVIEW!!!!