Yo yo yo wat up bras! The keine is back and updating my fic for all you lovely female readers. Well, I suppose all of you are girls. Here are the results
Hatori - 4
Hiro - 3
Megumi - 1
Ritsu - 1
Yuki - 1
When I saw the votes I was like "NOT EVEN" cause I really wanted to do a Hiro fic man, but then I was like "Not too bad" cause I thought of a story for our bra Hatori. The votes aren't very impressive. After this little chap, my reviews have to break 100 or this fic goes under the rubbish section. You know wat that means ya? You betta review or it won't be pretty for all yas. Oh, and sorry for the pidgin accent, surrounded by it too much and picking it up. I'll keep on trying to add more and more people to the reviewing cast. So here it is, Hatori's story!
Oops! I also forgot about Ayame's review for Kisa's story and Shigure's song. Here it is.
fabulousbigbrother 03-24-04
Oh Shigure! You should've wrote that in high school. I bet all the girls would've loved it!
fabulousbigbrother 01-25-05
Kisa! You had fun! That's so wonderful! I wish I was there too!
I don't know, I seemed to have forgotten him ever since I did his fic.
Chapter 9- Hatori's Story
What Shigure had shown Hatori got him thinking about how he could send out a message to all young people who are in love. For one thing, he didn't want anyone to ever experience what he went through, so he went to his computer (if he has one, let's just keep it at that) and begins creating a story based on his past.
In about an hour of so, making sure it's free of mistakes and that it's interesting, Hatori finishes his story, hoping the message would help others in their relationship and no one ends up hurt the way he did.
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Through the Scarred Eye by solitary-dragon
Rated: EB (Emotional Breakdown)
It was quite sometime ago when a certain man, a doctor to be exact, met a woman who was to be his assistant in his work. A very distant cousin, close enough to say they were family, but far enough to go into a relationship.
He never saw it coming, falling for this woman, through her eyes of kindness and cheerfulness. Plus, the one question she asked that he'll never forget.
It went "Say, when the snow melts, what does it become"
He answered in a way that made it seem obvious"That's simple, it becomes water."
However, the expression on her face said otherwise"Bvvbvv, you're wrong, it becomes spring." She corrects him. That's when it sparked between both of them. Soon, they began bonding, she left presents for him inside his notebook when he wasn't looking.
As the days passed by, the two confessed their love and everything was going wonderfully. However, the man held a dark secret, one that forced him to keep his distance from anyone, even this woman that he loved so much. Because of this secret, they had never kissed or hugged, for there was a great risk of his secret being exposed.
Nevertheless, fate got in the way and one day, they began getting very intimate with each other and his secret had slipped his mind. When they hugged, his secret was exposed. The woman had tried to her best to deal with it as it was revealed, and when the man had explained it to her later on, all she did was laugh.
This meant a great deal to him. They were in love, no secrets, nothing wrong with their relationship, and they believed it was time. They decided to get married. What the man forgot to mention to his fiancée was that he was under the service of someone else in their family, someone he respects but does not always agree with.
When he had told his leader of their engagement, the man was infuriated. He picked up a vase and smashed it against his left eye, almost permanently blinding him in that eye. As his love came to his aid, his leader actually had the nerve to ask if he was all right. With no reply, the leader started blaming the man's love, scolding her, telling her that everything that happened was her fault.
She believed him, she honestly thought that it was all her fault. This lead to a mental breakdown with her. All she did was blame herself for what happened. No matter what the man said to her, all she would do is cry and yell at herself. She was slowing killing herself, until his leader gave him the order to do what only this man could do, erase her memory.
This was a skill he learned and very well perfected. Even though his leader had ordered it, even though he didn't want her to forget all the memories they shared being together, he knew that it was the only way to save her. When they were together for the last time, as he put his hand on her head to perform the process of making her forget, he sees one last tear trickle down her face.
"I'm sorry." She says"Sorry I couldn't protect you." She tells him. With that one last sentence, he erases her memory.
Tears then begin streaming down his cheeks"No, I'm sorry. I couldn't protect you." He tells his unconscious love as she forgets everything they've been through.
The next day, she packs all her belonging in his office. "Well, I'm sorry it didn't work out, but I'll still be studying." She tells him while bowing, completely oblivious of the events that occurred over the past weeks.
She leaves the office, the man's office, the man's life, all I could do was cry, and watch her leave through my scarred left eye.
THE END
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As Hatori checks his computer a couple of days afterwards, he notices his email filled with all this review alerts.
kawaii-onigiri 02-13-05
I remember that story, it was so sad! I couldn't help but cry!
neko-over-nezumi 02-13-05
So you're really not the bastard I took you for. Real harsh man.
princenezumi 02-13-05
Life works this way. All you have to do is try your best to take it as well as you can.
gurl-luver 02-13-05
Oh Hari! You poor thing, don't worry about Kana. You'll find someone else!
rabbitboy16 02-13-05
It's okay Hatori, I understand how you feel.
nezumiforever 02-13-05
Don't feel too bad about it. You still have your family behind you.
nekoforever 02-13-05
I hope that doesn't happen with me and Kyo!
fabulousbigbrother 02-12-05
Hari! I feel your pain! But you should've tried again! Now it's too late.
sissy-n-sheep 02-12-05
That's sad Grandpa Hatori. I felt like crying.
tiger+sheep 02-12-05
You still love her right? Love should always come through for you and you should never give up on it.
yankee-doodle 02-12-05
I remember you, I don't know when, but yeah. If that stories true then woah! You Sohmas must have it really hard!
shockwave 02-12-05
Love can be a happy thing or a sad thing, either way, someone will always get hurt. Remember that.
Mrs.YukiSohma 02-12-05
What a tragic love story! I hope nothing like that happens with me. I don't know if I'd be able to bear it!
for-my-sis 02-12-05
That's true love right there, between both of you. You gave up everything you had with her, just to give her another chance at life. You truly are a kind person.
Future Yuki Pres. 02-12-05
The romance story of the year! Girls will be tearing over this!
chibi-onigiri 02-12-05
Wow Hatori, that's really deep. I don't think I'd ever be able to share something like that with the world like you and Momiji did. It must've been for a good reason. I remember Tohru telling me that you tried pushing her away from the family just so you could save her the pain you went through. I've never seen this side of you. It was truly a touching story.
Hatori smiles at the results his story produced. He then notices an email under all those review alerts. It's Kisa's reply to all her reviews.
To kawaii-onigiri
Thanks a lot Sissy!
To princenezumi
It was mostly Hiro and Sasuke.
To neko-over-nezumi
Why don't you spend more time with Sasuke then?
To gurl-luver
You're so silly Grandpa Shigure. You're the one who typed it!
To rabbitboy16
I didn't mean to. It was all Hiro's idea.
To nezumiforever
Maybe next time it could be the whole family.
To nekoforever
Thanks!
To solitarydragon
Of course! Thanks Grandpa!
To tiger+sheep
I know you won't. It'll always be a day to remember.
To yankee-doodle
No we haven't met. Thanks anyway.
To shock-wave
He does, he told me.
To Mrs.YukiSohma
Oh really? You must be a friend of my cousin then.
To for-my-sis
You're correct. It was Grandpa Shigure's idea to leave it out.
To chibi-onigiri
Wasn't it one of the best days ever? I just told the story to Grandpa Shigure and he wrote it all out.
Hatori smiles, then logs off.
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AB-Angel: Do you like? You like my fanfic? I got a request to make the characters' stories longer but I have to tell that person that it's really hard, depending on who it is. Remember, 100 reviews is the only way I'll continue onto chapter 10. Sorry it was so short but yeah, just review and tell me what you thought. Don't forget to vote too. Here are the replies to all you lovely reviewers.
To Crystal of dark
Thanks! Please read my other fics, they need more support than this fic.
To Sami the archangel
Well, so am I. I training myself. I told myself that I won't continue drawing out my manga until I learned contour drawing (clothes). I'm putting my manga on hold for now so I could concentrate on my fanfictions.
To Suriana Amaya
Can you vote next time?
To Sango Twin
I'll take your word for it, the Sango thing.
To GirlWaterShaman
Yes I am! Have you read Broken Bond yet? Weren't you one of my readers for Family Discovery? Broken Bond's out, the sequel.
To FruitsBasketcase
I was hoping Hiro but it was Hatori, but now that he's out of the way, Hiro has a better chance. Thanks for being the first reader of my Broken Bond, as a treat, I'll email you the theme song to that fic, if you want. It's a really nice song. I actually have a melody to it and I sing it like everyday. Maybe if you live somewhere in the US with a cell phone that has free calls anywhere in the US during the weekends, I could call you and sing it. Just kidding, but you never know. You could have a chance to talk to me, a future American Idol. Okay now I'm being dumb, but I could actually sing.
To senbi
You got Hatori's, now if you and others vote for Ritsu then his can come out.
To dragonpurity
Just vote, it helps me. If only a few people vote, it doesn't push me as much to continue.
To Hermoniezclone
I thought I made it clear in the beginning that Sasuke is the character I created for my Family Discovery fic (please read it then Broken Bond, the sequel) and I put him in here as the ultimate reviewer and the one who introduces them to Oh, and I would email you when I update, but the problem is, you didn't leave a email address for me to email! I even checked your profile and it didn't have it. If you want to know immediately when someone's fic is updated, put me on your author alert list. When you review this chapter, click on the add to author alert box. Now everytime I update me fics, you'll get an email telling you which on got updated.
To Rinagurl13
I'm glad I made you laugh. My other Fruits Basket fic is also funny. It's called Family Discovery and it's completed. The first chapter of the sequel's out but I suggest you read Family Discovery first. You'll learn of the origin of Sasuke Toko.
To lovemanga19967
I'm glad you do.
To Riharu
Uh, I thought I made it clear that Shigure was the one writing it for Kisa.
To silverfoxayame
You got you're wish!
To wenna
Really? Can you tell me how you know that, about Yuki giving the hat?I thought Mrs.YukiSohma was obviously Matoko Minagawa, oh well. I just added Minami to the list. I'll try to make their stories longer, but it's hard considering there's not much to write about. Don't worry, in the sequel to this fic, the chapters will be much longer.
There you have it and to all of my Family Discovery readers, Broken Bond is out! To all who've been waiting for the sequel, it's out and read! To all who haven't read Family Discovery, don't even think of reading Broken Bond, nothing will make sense to you readers. It picks off immediately where Family Discovery left off. I consider that trilogy to be my best fanfic so far, Binded Captor for Cardcaptor Sakura next, Dark Downfall for DN Angel third, this one fourth, Hikaru's Fan for Hikaru No Go, American Shaman for Shaman King (might kill it), and lastly Humans Vs. Saiyans for DBZ (needs serious revising). Thanks for reading and remember, no updating for this fic until reviews break 100. I mean come on! The author who I borrowed this idea from has like only 5 or 6 chapters and it already broke 100 and I'm on my 9th and it's only like 86. Please review, and vote! It bugs me when someone reviews my latest chapter and doesn't vote.
Oh, and I have one announcement to make, this fic will be only 26 chapters long so after the 26th chapter, that's it, this fic's finished, but do not fret! I have another fic that will replace the humor and originality of this one. It's called Fruits Basket Daily Lives, Zodiac's Version. Couldn't think of a better title, but it's a fic that also needs voting to continue and I assure you, it'll be even funnier than this one. REVIEW so I could get this fic finished and we could go on with my newer one! AB-Angel out!