OVER 100 REVIEWS! YEAH! GO BRAH! GO BRAH! I must thank AnimeFreakKagome (even though she didn't vote) for being the one hundredth reviewer! I guess we all know who's next in line but just for the heck of it, here are the results:
Hiro- 14
Megumi- 1
Yuki- 1
Mayuko- 1 (Who's that?)
Akito- NEVER!
So it's obviously settled. HIRO'S THE WINNER! YEAH! My favorite character gets to do his own fiction! Or story. His is probably going to be as long as Kisa's, that should tell some of my reviewers something. Oh and another thing, I'm not sure but I think it's Rory-Lighten or Suriana Amaya. Please if you're going to anonymously review all my chapters just so you could get whoever you want next, please be a little more original with the reviews, and wait until someone else who's signed on review so it's not so suspicious. Thank you.
NOW ON WITH THE FIC! This chapter will be written in Hiro's POV. One more character's being added to the cast of reviews.
Chapter 10- Hiro's Story
Everyone thinks that I'm a annoying, sarcastic, selfish little brat with a smart mouth who could think of no one but myself, and Kisa and Rin. I don't know anyone besides those two who finds my company entertaining. Being the youngest zodiac, I'm just a little kid who no one would take seriously. I could be fun, I can be like any other kids, I could also be mature when I want.
Here's my proof.
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A Very Unique Valentine's by tiger+sheep
Rated: TMF (Too much fun)
As the dawn rises, starting the day, I awaken in my bed, knowing exactly what today is. Today's the day I once again get raided by girls with Valentine's chocolates. But it's also the day Kisa buys me a gift along with the traditional chocolates.
It's really the only part of Valentine's I really look forward to. As I leave my house after getting ready, I head over to Kisa's house to pick her up. I arrive only to find that she's already ready and waiting for me to get her.
"Morning Hiro!" She greets me with her same warm smile. I notice the chocolates in a bag that she's holding. She reaches in and takes out one box. "Happy Valentine's Day Hiro." She tells me as she hands me the box of chocolates.
"Thanks Kisa. This will probably be the only one I eat today." I tell her, not thinking at all about the gift she always gives me but hasn't yet. Maybe she's waiting until later.
"Come on. Let's go, I want to see the others." Kisa grabs my arm and we head off. I bet she meant Sasuke, Megumi, and Sakura. Ever since we met them, we've been sticking with them everytime we ran into each other. I really don't want to see them. I want to spend my Valentine's with Kisa.
Not too long after leaving, we reach the school. This is going to be my first Valentine's in a middle school. I wonder how it'll differ from Elementary school. I bet it'll be worse.
As the first bell sounds, we head to our class. Strange, unlike the tales of Yuki and the others, I'm not being surrounded by girls and being given countless amounts of chocolates. Oh well, I guess that's good to some extent, but I was kind of preparing myself for it, while looking forward to it at the same time. It feels a little disappointing, maybe I'll wait until lunch or after school. Maybe it'll happen then.
Hours later, after lunch, still the only chocolate I received was the one that Kisa gave me. I have until after school to be showered with chocolates. I hope it happens, or it will be a wasted Valentine's. Now that I think about it, it might also embarrass me. I'll be the only Sohma male who didn't get chocolates on Valentine's day this year. THIS SUCKS! It better happen after school or else I can't show my face to the family until like White Day.
I wait until school's over. I hope that even just one girl would give me chocolates. I think about so much I don't even notice that Kisa's trying to tell me something. Until finally she nudges me. "Huh? What is it Kisa?"
"School's out." She tells me. I look at my pocket watch. WHAT? Already. That was fast. I guess time flies when you're thinking.
AN: I believe it.
As we head to our shoe lockers, I sigh in disappointment. Kisa catches this and asks if I'm okay. I reply as I'm opening my locker. "Yeah, I'm fine. It's just that no one..." I get cut off because I am instantly showered by boxes of chocolates, literally! "(YES! It's happened!)" I inwardly smile because being buried doesn't give my body much movement. Shortly after I'm buried, I hear another avalanche of boxes.
I'm not sure who it is, until Kisa says, "Oh, kora Megumi and Sakura. Where's Sasuke?"
I'm guessing that Sasuke's head popped out of the chocolates. "Here! How you doing Kisa?"
"Genki desu."
I then hear him say, "Doko Hiro wa nan desu ka?"
When I hear, "You see that?" I start digging out. "Hai, he's in there."
After a couple of more scoops, I'm finally able to pop my head out. "Woo! I thought I was going to suffocate." I say in relief, regaining my breath.
"I guess we both have something in common." Sasuke's head says to my head.
"I seriously doubt that you got all those chocolates because the girls think you're so cute and good looking." I tell him.
"Well, maybe, or maybe because I have a lot of friends." He informs me.
"Bet I have more chocolate than you!" I then announce.
"That's okay. I don't want to take advantage of you." Sasuke tells me. Is he serious? Does he honestly think he has way more than me? We'll see about that.
"Oh, backing out I see. It's okay if you don't want to since I'm more popular." I say with pride.
"We'll see about that!" Sasuke leaps out of the pile and starts counting his chocolates. Shortly after I start too. After a few minutes, both of us finish counting and the end result is...
"78!" We both yell.
"Hey, I beat my last year's record. But I'm tied with you!" Sasuke yells and points at me.
"It ain't over till it's over!" I yell back.
"Isn't everyone having so much fun." Megumi comments while we argue.
"Oh! I almost forgot! Here Sasuke, happy Valentine's Day." Kisa hands Sasuke the chocolates. How could she!
Sasuke then smirks at me. "79. I win." He then laughs.
"Oops! That reminds me." She hands the chocolates to me. "Here cutie!"
"ACK! We're tied again! Sakura! How could you?" Sasuke yells at his lady friend.
"What?" Sakura says sarcastically.
"Hah! We're tied and you don't win!" I gloat to Sasuke, nearly laughing in his face, even though I didn't win.
Megumi then seems to notice something, it's a bag of chocolate boxes. Probably from Tohru.
"Sasuke, what's that?" Megumi points to Sasuke's bag.
"I don't know. Let me see." He then discovers a box of chocolates made out to me from Tohru. Sasuke's mouth then falls wide open.
"What? What is it?" I ask, already knowing what it is.
"Nothing! It's uh nothing of importance." Sasuke lies. Sakura then grabs it and hands it to me.
"It's from Sasuke's cousin, Tohru. I guess you win." Sakura informs me.
"An even 80. Who's the most popular one here, Sasuke?" I ask smirking at him, glowing with pride.
"Why should I tell you!" Sasuke says.
"Come on! I want to know." I continue gloating.
"Oh fine! Anata." Sasuke grumbles and points at me.
"Hah! I know." I put the final chocolates in the pile.
"What are you going to do with all those chocolates anyway?" Sasuke asks while sticking all his chocolates neatly in the bags he brought. I then look at my pile. Oh crap! How am I going to carry all these chocolates? I wonder how Yuki and the others managed.
"I don't know. What are you going to do with yours?" I then ask him, maybe he has a solution.
"Well, I'm going to do what I always do. Give them all to my brother and sister and keep a little bit for myself." Sasuke answers. When he finishes, he picks up the extra bags and gives them to me. "Here. It'll be kind of hard to bring them around without something to put them in." He informs me.
"I guess. Thanks. I have no use for them so I guess I'll just give them away." I then tell Sasuke.
"To who?"
"There's no one I know that I could give them to. Whatever, I'll just give them to your brother and sister too." I respond to his question. I don't know, I'm feeling a little generous today.
"That's cool. Come on. Let's all go to my house and drop off these chocolates. Then we can do something fun." Sasuke plans.
"Sure, let's go." I agree. We then head off carrying the 159 chocolates, plus whatever amounts the other three received, we had with us to Sasuke's house so we could give almost all of it to his siblings. I've never met them. I wonder if they're anything like Sasuke.
I look over and see Sakura mumbling something to Megumi. What's she telling him?
Megumi's answer I hear. "Well, it's not only Sasuke's chocolates this time. It's Hiro's too." He says. Sakura then mumbles something to herself.
Shortly after, we reach the Toko residence. "Here we are! I guess you're finally going to see my home." Sasuke tells Kisa and I. "Come on! I'll introduce you to my family."
As they enter, Sasuke discovers that no one's home except Satski and his mom. "Mom? Where's Shinichiro and dad?"
"They're shopping for some things we need this week." She completely doesn't notice that she has visitors. There seems to be something that's bugging her, maybe that's why. "Sasuke, there's something I need to talk to you about. I'll be in the kitchen when you're finished." She walks away and leaves us for the moment.
"I wonder what's wrong? No matter, come guys, we'll drop off the chocolates in the living room and you four can do whatever while I talk to my mom. Just stay in the living room, I don't want my mom getting mad for anything." We all nod at him.
We enter the house and find his little sister watching TV. "Hi oniichan!"
"Yeah whatever." He then lifts up the chocolates, "Look what I have!" She jumps up in excitement and scrimmages through the bags. Man, she's huge! I wonder how much she weighs and how old she is.
"Valentine's chocolates! Wow there's so many! Way more than last time." Satski yells in happiness. No wonder she's so fat.
"Well over half of them are my friend, Hiro's." Sasuke informs his little sister.
"Arigato Hiro and oniichan!" She starts opening some of them. Thankfully Kisa doesn't gobble candy like that.
"Remember to leave some for Shinichiro. I'm going to talk to kaasan now. Just stay here and watch some TV. I'm sure it won't take long." Sasuke leaves us and enters the kitchen.
I then decide to ask Satski what there is to do. "So uh, Satski right? What's there to do?"
She gives me a weird look while munching on some chocolate. "All there is to do is watching TV. We have games but you have to get my older brother's permission to ask." She informs us.
"I'm pretty sure Sasuke wouldn't mind." I respond.
"No, she means her other brother, Shinichiro." Megumi tells me. "We'll just watch some TV." Megumi then tells Satski.
She puts on some anime that I don't think any of us, not even Kisa would watch. "Uh, Satski? Could you by chance change it to something else?" I ask her politely.
"There's nothing else to watch." She answers.
I give her a stupid look. "We'll be the judge of that." She hands me the remote and I start flipping channels until we find something that all of us want to watch. While changing channels, I ask Megumi "Hey, how old is Satski?"
"She's only eight." I look at him weird then at Satski weird.
"Seriously?" I ask in disbelief.
"I know, Sasuke told me that at his church, his sister is 'the' heaviest kid under the age of ten that he's met, and he knows most of the kids." Megumi confirms.
"She must be like 85 lbs." I stare in awe at her size.
"Around that much, and she's just going to get bigger and bigger." He comments.
I finally notice it. "I take it you don't like Satski." I say.
"Ahh, you noticed. None of us do. She's such a brat. What Sasuke does to her is funny." Megumi continues. I wonder how no one else is noticing our little conversation, maybe it's because I stopped changing channels and they started watching whatever it was on.
"Like what?" I ask.
"Whenever he meets another kid around Satski's age, or a little older, he'd try to carry them, to see if they're heavier than Sasuke. And everytime, they we're always lighter. He and his brother also have funny nicknames for her like fat baby, or fat head, or seven bags of rice. Sasuke even used to call her things like super brat, annoying brat, princess brat." My laughing finally becomes noticeable. "I know, it's funny. He even told me that when Satski told on him to his mom, she just laughed because she thought it was funny, what he was calling her."
"That's funny. Too bad I don't have any brother or sister to pick on." Oh well, there's always Kyo to annoy.
Ten minutes later, Sasuke emerges from the kitchen, looking a little happy.
"What are you all doing?" He finds them playing stupid games with Satski.
"We were bored so we decided to have a little fun with your sister." Sakura answers. I didn't even notice they we playing games. But it was fun talking to Megumi.
"Right." He says sarcastically. "Haha gave me 2000 yen so we can spend the day together. What do you want to do?" he asks us. "Oh, and movies, amusement parks are out! Got that Hiro?"
"Oh sure. I really don't know then." I answer.
"I know! Let's go to the Mall! We can play games, eat whatever, and just look around!" Sakura suggests.
"Do you want to go?" Sasuke asks the rest of us.
"Sure. I'd love to." Kisa replies.
"Why not?" I say after her.
"Ika zo." Megumi finishes. We then set off to the mall downtown. Upon reaching the mall, we plan on what we're going to do for the past, I don't know how many hours.
"Okay, first I think we should just look around. You know, browse around and see if there's anything we want so we could go back here later with more money, unless you guys have money already than you could buy whatever you want. You guys have money right?" Sasuke asks.
"Yeah, but we're saving it up for something." I tell him. Hmph, he doesn't know that the money I'm saving is for his birthday. You'd better get me something for mine Sasuke!
"That's okay then. We'll just use the money my mom gave me." That's good.
"Okay then, let's look around this place. It's the first time I've been here." Kisa announces.
"Yeah me too." I add to her comment.
"Then we'll just have to show you two around." Sasuke tells both of us. We begin with the first level of the mall. Looking around toyshops, electronic stores, and clothes departments that only Sakura would go to. We then stop at an anime store. Why am I not surprised? We split up for a little and look around the place.
While secretly following Sasuke so I could find out if there's anything that he wants here, which there most likely is, I overhear him saying something. "Cool, I could get this DVD right now, but that'd be using the money kaasan gave me. Oh well, I could always wait until next time." He puts the DVD back and looks around other places. Here's my chance, I go over, after Sasuke leaves, and grab the DVD. I dig into my pocket and find that it's exactly the right amount of money for it.
I go over to Kisa to tell her. "Hey Kisa, I know what to get for Sasuke's birthday. You wait here and don't tell Sasuke or the other two." She nods and waits. I take the DVD tot he cashier and purchase it without any sign of Sasuke or the other two around. I quickly stash it away in my bag, then rejoin the others.
"Did you find everything you were looking for?" Kisa asks them.
"Nah, nothing I could afford." Sasuke answers. Kisa and I wink at each other.
"Nothing I really want." Megumi then answers. Really, there was nothing he wanted?
"I don't even know why I'm here. I don't even really like anime." Sakura comments, what a weirdo. I know she likes Sayonara Pussycat and that's an anime.
"No one asked you to come in. You could've just waited outside patiently for the rest of use." Sasuke tells her. Haha! She got told! Sort of.
"Well, let's drop the subject. Any other stores in this level you want to go to?" Sakura asks us.
"Iie. Let's go upstairs." In the second level, we go to a bookstore and check out that place. Books? I rarely read books.
AN: Does he? I'm not sure.
I see Megumi buying a book and quickly stashing it away. I bet it's for Sasuke too. We don't stay there very long, seeing is how none of us really appreciate reading. We then go looking around again in search of another store we can wander in.
As we're walking around we past by a Sanrio store. Sakura asks them if she can go look in there with Kisa quickly. "Sure, but be quick. You know how I feel when I'm hanging near a girly store." Sasuke informs her. Sakura, trying to get Kisa into that really girly stuff.
I don't even want to observe what they're doing in there. I don't want the guys to think I'm looking around in that place. A little later, the two come out, Sakura beaming with joy. What happened in there?
"Are there any kinds of other stores you guys want to go to? Because I'm kind of hungry." Sasuke asks us. Strange, once he said that, my stomach hurt a little. I'm hungry.
"None that I can't think right now." Megumi answers.
"Yeah, I'm pretty hungry too. Ika zo taberu." Kisa says. We finally stop browsing around.
"So where do you want to eat?" Sasuke then asks us.
"I don't know. How much money did your mom give you again?" I respond with another question.
"2000 yen."
"Hm, let's try getting something that's not so expensive so we still have money to play games." I state. I'm so smart.
"You want ramen?" Megumi asks. Not even!
"Nah! I'm sort of sick of that stuff." Sakura responds. Thank goodness, we're not eating that junk.
"I like sushi." Kisa then announces. Good idea.
"Sushi sound good?" Sasuke asks.
"Sounds good. Let's eat!" I shout out since it's been decided. We head to the first Sushi place we can find and order up. We're lucky since that day, the restaurant was giving 35 discount on all kids, so instead of paying 900 yen, we spent only 585 yen. I wonder how I knew that. It's not that bad, considering how cheap it was.
"Cool, we still have 1415 yen left. That's enough to keep us busy at the arcade for a while." Sasuke tells us. Wow, that's a lot left.
We head to our final destination, the arcade at the top of the mall. Sasuke splits the money between Sasuke, Sakura, and I since Kisa didn't want to play games and Megumi wasn't really in the mood. That's okay, more money for the rest of us.
I see Sasuke run off somewhere deep in the arcade with Kisa following him. Sakura already disappears before I see where she's going. I go to play some shooting games.
I go play some fighting games after getting a couple of high scores, not bragging or anything. That is, until I hear a voice yelling out to me.
"HEY HIRO, BET YOU CAN'T BEAT ME AT THIS GAME!" Sasuke yells to me. That's my cue to take him up on another challenge.
"You're on!" We insert our tokens and start dancing to the first song "Kind Lady". Don't underestimate me Sasuke. I will wipe your face into the ground. As the song plays, Sasuke dances well, I'll give him that, but it doesn't compare to my skills.
Something I didn't notice until later on was the crowd Sasuke and I were attracting. Soon after, the song ends. The scores come up and it's Sasuke who wins by a few thousand points. Crap! I let him off easy. We begin our second song, "Look to the Sky", and poor Sasuke gets confused in the beginning, unlike me. So it's me who wins the second song!
"So you want to play huh? Let's see how you do in my territory!" Sasuke presses the button and selects ".59". NO! That stupid boy, picking this kind of song. I hate these kinds of songs. Grr, I lose by a lot, making Sasuke the overall winner. Cheater, he's going to get it.
"Okay, you win that round, but let's see how 'you' do in my territory." I choose the first song, and I bet to Sasuke's surprise, it's something that he probably wouldn't choose at his level of skill, "Paranoia Evolution".
"What! You're good at this song? But I never even tried it yet." Sasuke yells to me. Nah nah!
"Then that's uh-oh for you." The song starts and Sasuke tries his best to keep up with me, but ho hum, he loses. He then lets me choose the next song. I don't know why, maybe he has a song he wants to save for last. I see the shock in his face as I choose the next song, "I Do I Do I Do".
"You can beat this too! But I've been trying to beat this song for a long time!" Sasuke yells once more. HAHA! I'm good.
"Then I guess you're dead." The song starts up and Sasuke keeps up until the chorus goes underway. Then he starts falling behind and ends up losing. I look at him and notice how annoyed he's getting. Oops, did I go a little too far? He then chooses the song I wouldn't even choose on heavy, "Break Down".
"Are you nuts! This songs freaking hard!" I inform that little brat.
"I know, that's why I picked it." The song starts and Sasuke and I are trying our best to not fail. It's so hard we're not even trying to beat each other anymore. For some strange reason, the song ends and we both pass. The crowd I spoke of earlier claps at our spectacular performance, I must say.
"Since when did we have an audience?" I ask Sasuke.
"I don't know, but that was weird. I picked this song so we would fail and you wouldn't get your victory." Sasuke tells me. That loser.
"You're messed up. So it's one-one for both of us. Want a tie breaker?" I ask.
Sasuke reaches in his pocket only to find it empty "Oops! I'm all out of money." I then see Sasuke smirk. What's that smirk for? He probably won't tell me anyway.
"What?" I then check my own pocket. "I'm all out too! This sucks! I guess we have no choice but to leave." I suggest.
"Matte. Let's see if Sakura ran out already." She then appears with a bunch of stuffed animals from the machine she was playing. My and Sasuke's mouths hit the floor.
"That's what you spent haha no okane on!" Sasuke yells. WHAT A WASTE!
"So, I couldn't resist! And there was nothing I wanted to play." Sakura uses as an excuse. LAME!
"Are you going to give any to Kisa?" I then ask, giving her the evil eye if she doesn't.
"Doushite?" She asks holding them back. How selfish!
"Sore okane wa anata no ja arimasen. Why should you keep all of those?" I then tell her. That's mean.
"Okay fine! I'll give half of them to Kisa." Sakura gives in. Hiro prevails once again!
The three of us leave the arcade and find Kisa and Megumi waiting outside talking to each other.
"Did you three have fun?" Kisa asks us.
"Hiro and I created an audience and Sakura won a lot of prizes." Sasuke informs them. "We had a horrible time." He jokes. Of course it was a horrible time! I was stuck with you!
"Yeah, I'm sure." Megumi responds.
"Here, I won some of these for you." Sakura hands Kisa some of the toys. Good.
"Doomo arigato gozaimasu." Kisa thanks her and takes the toys.
"So what do you say we get out of here?" I ask them.
"Yeah, I'm tried now." Sasuke tells us.
"So what do you want to do?" Kisa asks.
"What do you mean?" Sasuke asks her.
"Do you want to just leave and go our separate ways or do you want to go somewhere before that?" Kisa asks again being more specific.
"Let's go to Tohru's. You haven't met them yet, right Sakura?" Sasuke asks her. Hmm, why am I getting left out of the conversation?
"Not yet, but what time is it?" she asks before giving them an answer if she wants to go.
"Uh, wow it's already 7:42! Do you still want to go and visit Tohru? It's getting late now." Sasuke asks us again.
"Yeah it's late. I don't think we should go. It might not be safe seeing is how we're all under 16." I inform the bunch.
"So let's just go home. We can walk you two to your house. Megumi, Sakura, and I all live near each other so we'll be fine." Sasuke offers us. Ahh, how sweet! Little goody goody.
"Thanks. I'd feel better if more people were with us." Kisa tells them. We exit the mall and head to the Sohma place. After about 17 minutes, we reach the Sohma gate and say their farewells to the both of us.
After the three disappear from our sight, I turn to Kisa and see her beaming. "What's that for?" I ask, caught off guard.
"Come on Hiro, admit it. You know you had more fun than any of us." She tells me.
"Not even! You know I can't stand Sasuke. And those friends of his are so weird." I respond.
She then rolls her eyes. "Sure Hiro, maybe I should tell Sasuke all about this."
"Do what you want! I couldn't care less." I tell her. Okay, maybe I'm being a little harsh, but that's how I am. I can't help it if I don't like admitting things.
"Come on Hiro, my mom's probably worried about me, and I bet your dad's worried about you too." She says while pulling on my arm.
"Sure thing." We go inside the gates, back into our homes, where we'll always be welcomed. I hope Sasuke and the others made it back safely, because he's officially now my best friend.
OWARI
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I look at my work with pride. It's long, longer than Kisa's was. I got the longest story! HAHAHA! It better be the best!
Three days later, I quickly jump onto one of the school computers to check my reviews.
kawaii-onigiri 02-22-05
That's so cute! Sasuke didn't explain to me all the way what happened. That's so sweet! I love how you ended the story!
neko-over-nezumi 02-22-05
It's pretty good that you're being a kid. Don't waste that Hiro. Nice story.
princenezumi 02-22-05
I'm happy for you. You found someone that you spend time with besides family. This story made me smile.
gurl-luver 02-22-05
How fortunate for you! Like I told Kyo, there will always be someone out there who truly wants to be your friend, and I guess Sasuke's that person for you.
rabbitboy16 02-22-05
WHAT? You had another get together and didn't bring me along! That's not fair!
nezumiforever 02-22-05
Okay, now I'm getting a little jealous. It seems that everyone who spends time with Sasuke and Hiro seems to have a lot of fun. I never knew you to be like this Hiro.
nekoforever 02-21-05
HOW CUTE!
solitarydragon 02-21-05
It's good that you're doing what you wish. Being with those who you enjoy being with, knowing that they'll look out for you and those you care about. Excellent work Hiro, I'm surprised by this story.
fabulousbigbrother 02-21-05
You lucky lucky boy! I remember Hari, Shigure, and I having fun days like that! Hm, now that I think about it, I actually don't. Oh well, it'll come back to me!
sissy-n-sheep 02-21-05
You remembered that Hiro, I'm glad. I told you!
free-yourself 02-21-05
That's my little Hiro. I don't recall having spent a day like that with you, ever. I hope I get a chance to spend time like that with you.
yankee-doodle 02-20-05
Another Sohma eh? Cute story you got there kid. Wish you the best.
shockwave 02-20-05
Megumi never told me of this tale. Very touching. All I felt was happiness from this story.
Mrs.YukiSohma 02-20-05
Another relative of Yuki's? I remember your name from the little girl who wrote not too long ago. I'd like to meet you. I want to see the face of the person who wrote this adorable story!
for-my-sis 02-20-05
I forgot to mention this story to my sister. She probably found out now since you wrote this but what the heck? I'm actually surprised how well you remembered everything. I'll store this so I could always cherish that memory.
Future Yuki Pres. 02-20-05
The cutest story of the year! Girls will be giggling over this story!
chibi-onigiri 02-20-05
What to say? What to say? I bet everyone else will reply nicely to this story of yours. It was good, although I wasn't too fond of those comments you made about me. But that's okay, I tease you a lot too. We're best buds anyway! Almost brothers! I'm saving this story, even though I could never forget this either, just for the heck of it. Amazing wok Hiro. Best buds forever man!
I smile even wider. YES! Does this mean my story's the best? Okay, I get the point that it was the cutest, but I want it to be the best. Oh well, I can't get everything I want.
Hm, wait a minute, there's no reply from Hatori. Maybe he didn't want to talk about it any further than he wrote about. Can't blame him.
Oh well, that's it for me, see ya!
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AB-Angel: It's done! Chapter 10! How do you like that chapter? It's too bad, because I refuse to update this fic until I get more readers for my other Fruits Basket fic. I kind of, no, really like that one more than this one. I wrote a song for it for goodness sake! Until I get more reviews for Broken Bond (sequel to Family Discovery), I will not update this fic. But please, still review and vote because after I update Broken Bond, I'm immediately going to update this fic. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
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To FruitsBasketcase
I don't know why Hatori would write a story either, but that's what the readers wanted, right? Did you get my email of the song? What'd you think of it? There's two versions, I solo and a triplet version. The solo is 4:53 long and the triplet is 7:10 long. I know, it's long. It's a really nice song. It's the only song that I wrote that I actually fully composed. Remember what I said, if you live in the US and have free cell phone calls in the weekend anywhere in the US, call me or let me call you and I could maybe sing the song to you. Thanks again for being my first reader for my Broken Bond.
To wenna
Uh, oblivious means they don't know. So it means that Kana had no idea what happened in the past days, but let's forget that. Oh, you only read up to the fifth book? How about the anime? The anime shows up to the seventh. Oh, and by the way, who's Mayuko?
To Animefreakkagome
I have a song for you
Can you vote next time? La di da do di!
To wutsmyageagain
I don't celebrate Valentine's Day, weird huh? I just wrote a chapter that has it and I don't even celebrate it. Religious thing. I'm Christian, Church of Christ, not Latter Day Saints.
To Suriana Amaya
Was that you who anonymously reviewed 8 times? I'm not sure.
Okay grr to bobo are the same person, I'm just not all the way sure yet who.
To Rory-Lighten
I very happy that you love this story! Thank you! Oh, and about Akito, don't even bother thinking about it. I hate bad guys, unless they turn good that is, or if they're not really all the evil. So don't ever expect a fic from Akito.
To GirlWaterShaman
Did you read Broken Bond, because I didn't receive a review from you. I only got one review for that fic so far, that's why I said I refuse to update this one until I get readers for that one.
To Sami the archangel
Try setting you mind to drawing. I only really do something like writing or drawing only when i really set myself to do it. Just tell yourself that you're going to draw and do it.
Vote and review! But remember, until I get more readers for Broken Bond, I won't update this fic. I'm sorry, but I really want to finish that fic but I can't work on it without any support. AB-Angel out!