Hi guys! Thanks for wanting to read my story, this really is a cool website. I've always wanted to write stories ( fanfic, of coarse) and to have them reviewed by others, so that I can grow as a writer. I know I'm not the best, but in time I hope to be at least good, so, please coment on the story that lies ahead. I gladly accept Ideas for the story, or constructive critisims, but remember, I'm only a 15 year old girl, so go easy on me! Enjoy!

Tohru Stood in the kitchen as usual, chopping up carrots as the mid afternoon sun shown gently through the windows, splashing into the room with vivid rays of white and yellow, brightening tohru's face and pinking her cheeks, a smile sliding across her face as she began to hum a classic tune of which she couldn't remeber.

As she was about to put the chopped carrots into the boiling stue she felt a pressence behind her, turning to see shagure standing in the opening, a soft smile accenting his boyish face.

" Tohru.. Yuki, kyo and I are going into town to...umm, pick a few thing up, yeah, thats right, get some things. We won't be back till later, but we're also expecting Haru, so would you mind staying around the house today, until we return?"

" Of coarse not Sohma-san , I wasn't planning on going anywhere today anyways. What time do you expect Sohma Haru ?"

" At any momment, however, we've got to leave soon or else We'll not get that...umm...stuff, see ya later!"

Tohru thought it odd that they had left in such a hurry, and seemed to stammer at just what he was going to get. It must be a guy thing...she thought, continuing to fill the stue with more vegetables, humming the same tune. A few minutes had past when she heard the bell ringing out side the house. She rushed quickly to open it, looking up at the guest. It was Haru as she had thought, his Large shadow overpowering her own in the evening light, a cheerful smile across his pale face, dreesed as usual in the dark rocker get up, his layered strands of Ebony and white whipping in the wind. A slight blush crossing the bridge of Tohru's nose and cheeks.

" Are you just gonna stand there or are'ya gonna let me in?" His voice was sarcastic yet playful as he slumped against the doorway.

" Yes, of coarse Haur-san. Please come in." With her invite he walked in, taking long strides. He perked his nose to the air, sniffing as a grin slid arcoss his face once more.

" What is it your cooking Tohru, it smells wonderful..."

" Its vegetable stue...Its almost done if you'd like some..." She said weakly, trying to be polite.

" I'd love some, its kinda chilly outside and a nice bowl of stue would be perfect." He walked into the dining room, taking a seat on a matt as Tohru dissapeared into the kitchen, coming back moments later with a steaming bowl of stue.

" Here you go Haru, enjoy!" She smiled big, her eyes closing in response.

" Aren't you going to have some?"

" No, I had some as it was cooking, I'm fine." Although she wasn't eating, she sat next to him anyways, not wanting to be rude and leave him.

She seems to get cuter and cuter every time I come over... Haru thought, taking a peek at Tohru out of the corner of his oaken eyes. He finished his bowl and streached, licking his lips and patting Tohru on the head.

" That was great, my complements to the chef."
" Thank you Haru, I'm glad you liked it."

" Well, shall we go see whats on t.v. , mabe a good movie tonight, Fridays always a good night for movies."

Tohru blushed at the thought of being all alone on the couch with Haru, she wondered she she could resist scooching next to him.

" Sure, let me just do the few dishes real quick.." She grabbed the bowl, rushing to the kitchen to quickly do the dishes, sprinting to the living room where Haru sat, glancing up at her.

" I found a movie, when the onie came to town, sound good?"

" Umm...sure, I'm a scardy cat though.."
" thats okay, you can hug me when your scared, I won't mind..."

Tohru's face flushed crimson as she sat next to him, keeping her distance.

" Why so far, scoot closer." He demanded, pulling her closer.....

Cliff hangger ! Sorry, but I had to, to insure that you'd come back next time. Its getting hot isn't it, just wait till mext chapter, oh that

Haru! He's such a playboy! Anyways, I hope you enjoyed it, and please RandR, I really apreciate any kind of comments or ideas, helop me to make the story you want to read!