Dear readers,
Yet another note and yet another teaser. That's right, this chapter of Right Kind of Wrong is on the other page too. So yes, that means more yaoi goodness I'm not taking the chance to put on here. Just remember, go to my profile, click on the link there, and find the story for all the uncensored goodness.
Before the teaser I must say thank you, thank you much for all the reviews! I'm so happy with all the positive feedback I'm getting for this fic, especially since it was reposted, but it's really nice to get comments from everyone who is either reading it now or reading it again. For those who have read it before guess what, I'm finally posting a NEW chapter!!! I wanna put up what I said before the fic got taken down because there were things I wanted to say that I didn't get to say, so here we go.
I must say the reviews this time around were interesting. I'm really glad the last chapter didn't confuse a lot of people, not like I thought it would (I expected mass confusion). Some people said they got confused but they still liked it, so that makes me happy. Then I have to say that I don't think I've gotten reviews that were so... well... divided.
Some want Sasuke and Naruto, some want Gaara and Naruto, I think someone asked for a threesome and I know someone asked for Itachi and Naruto, maybe even Itachi and Sasuke. Sasuke got called all kinds of names along with Itachi, so yeah; it was interesting to read all of that.
Anyhow this next chapter, which is on the page in my profile, kind of has things resolve, sort of. Itachi, if possible, gets worse. Citrus warning, not a full blown lemon but it does get pretty bad. Not revealing whom it's between, that's a secret (although the teaser will reveal it). There is more Gaara and Naruto stuff, and some mention of Zabuza and Haku, I will at least say that much. I'm saying all of this here because it looked weird on the other page (all the text was smushed together or something).
Anyhow, here's the teaser:
The walls of the bedroom were muffling the music out. A fairly decent room consisting of normal bedroom accessories. A closet, a dresser, a computer desk and a bed. There were a couple of posters on the wall, there were a few scattered text books since Kisame was technically a graduate student when he wasn't an expert drinker and party giver. Naruto couldn't recognize anything, couldn't tell if the posters were of rock bands or jungle animals. Couldn't tell if the computer was a Dell or a Samtron. If you asked him later what color the dresser was he wouldn't be able to answer.
But the bed...
Itachi gently lied Naruto on his stomach and just looked over him. Looked over every single inch, every single detail.
If you asked him later Naruto would be able to tell you how soft the bed was. How it was already unmade and already smelled of alcohol and multiple orgasms from others that had come in that night to do the same thing Itachi wanted to do. He could tell you about the cotton sheets he felt underneath his body, how cool they felt to his skin when Itachi slowly undressed him and let him lie in that spot scared and naked. Dizzy and unaware of his surroundings, but very aware of what was about to happen. Desperately trying to at least roll away and put up a fight, maybe pull the sheets around himself to make it at least a bit harder for Itachi. But every time he tried to move something he felt even worse, felt the room move around and felt the colors swirl around his eyes and blind him.
"Just relax, Naruto." Itachi whispered against his ear. Always speaking in that mockingly sympathetic voice because behind it was something sinister and disgustingly evil. Behind that overly sexy image of an older Sasuke was something dangerous. Something along the lines of taking candy from the stranger in the beat up child kidnapper van. "I won't hurt you. I just want to see what Sasuke sees in you." The softest of whimpers escaped Naruto's lips when he felt Itachi trail a finger down his back as if inspecting a new toy.
Stop it. Naruto wanted to scream the words but he couldn't even get any other sounds out of his mouth besides the occasional traitorous moans of pleasure. His body had given up a long time ago and had decided that Itachi was too damn good at touching a person to not enjoy it.
And slowly, very slowly from each touch, each kiss, each whispered word to just relax... Naruto's mind began to give up too.
That's all for the teaser. Go to the other page noted in my profile to read the rest. New chapter new chapter yay!!!
Ja ne,
Chibi
