Hikari Ookami (AKA: Hikari Lunar): Review and give ideas!
After some tense minutes there was a frightening shriek. It seemed to come from all around the group, and then it grew silent again. Hikari pointed her long wolf snout to the sky and Hakisuma's jet black fox ears twitched. An ominous fog had begun to form. Then suddenly, shadows leapt forward onto the group, happening so quickly that they were all taken by surprise.
"Ahh! Inu Yasha, help!" Kagome screamed as she was swept away by a shadow demon.
"Oh no, you don't!" Inu Yasha swung his Tetsusaiga but missed. His eyes widened as he was engulfed by a hoard of shadows.
"Wragh!" Miroku rushed over to help, but he too was tackled by a group of demons. Hikari had leaped into the trees, dodging and slashing at the shadows that were pursuing her.
Hakisuma remained calm and scooped up the shaken Shippo. "Hide here!" She stuck Shippo into a hole in a tree. "Come Kii! Kii...?" Hakisuma looked about wildly. "Kii! Kii! Where are you?" Her worried voice rang out through the battle-sounded night.
Sango looked over after catching her boomerang. "Kii has gone missing as well? Kirara disappeared too!" She turned away to chuck her weapon again. "They're maybe together somewhere. Don't worry, they should be safe." Hakisuma nodded and began fighting off a snake shaped shadow with her blade.
"Grrr...get off!" Inu Yasha had managed to hack away the mass and run through the shadow that held Kagome. "You okay?" He asked as Kagome wiped some of the demon's blood off.
"Yes, yes..." Kagome gasped. "Hakisuma! Watch out!" There was a loud crash, she gasped, "Shippo!" he was being chased by a demon. The demon lunged out and with its razor sharp claws it slashed at Shippo.
"Ack!" Shippo fell and the shadow was immediately upon him. "Hakisuma help me!" Hakisuma didn't have to think twice, clutching her Akai Sakura she tore right through the demon. Blood spurted freely onto the ground. Hakisuma cradled the injured Shippo in her arms.
Kagome walked over to her side, "Here, let me take care of him for now. Inu Yasha and the others need your help." Hakisuma nodded, she looked down at the jewel hanging from her blade's hilt. It was beginning to glow a soft red, and then it paled.
Kagome glanced curiously at Hakisuma. Hakisuma looked up and frowned, "I have a feeling that this is going to be like my dr-.." There was a loud roar as a shadow demon lunged from behind the pair. It grabbed Hakisuma and flung her away. Kagome and Shippo then became its next victims. It ripped at their flesh, blood staining its ebony claws. Inu Yasha attempted to make his way to then but run through by a pair of black claws. They when right through his chest and he was rendered unconscious.
Hikari watched from above, "Hakisuma! Kagome! Shippo!" She was about to climb down when a shadow slammed into her. She flew backwards, and there was a sickening crack as her back rammed into the tree. All the air in her lungs were knocked out. She transformed back to her human form and the hilt of the Divine Blade clattered to the ground below. "Ugh,...what the..?" The shadow swung towards her on a thick vine. It kicked her off the side of the branch and she fell straight into a web of vines. Hikari became tangled. More shadows approached and begun to tighten the vines around her body. Hikari cried out weakly as a vine began to tighten around her waist. She threw up everything that was in her stomach. The vine slowly began to rip open the flesh at her side. Vines wrapped around her chest and neck were cutting off any way of getting air. Hikari started to gasp franticly for air as she became deadly pale. Her lungs burned from the lack of air, and her vision blurred. Hikari wheezed as the shadows pulled back on all the vines. The green, vice-like ropes tore her feeble skin, leaving gashes all over her body. Her body let out a snap and she when limp, blood trickling out of her open mouth.
Miroku and Sango were being beaten to death. "Sango! MOVE!!" He shoved her to the side as the demon's hand flew forward. It got a hold of his arm and twisted it, then the shadow tossed him against a rock. Miroku slouched over limply like a rag doll.
"Miroku!!!" Sango shouted in shock. She gasped and lunged towards Miroku, using the lasts of her strength.
Meanwhile Hakisuma had regained consciousness and was making her way back to the clearing. She gasped at the sight she saw. Everyone looked dead like her dream. The was a sharp twang that broke the eerie silence. "SANGO!!!" She dashed in front of the bleeding Sango and raised her Akai Sakura. The thick black arrow ricocheted off the blade. Hakisuma then rushed off to help the others. She hack away at the thick vines around Hikari's body and she dropped to the ground with a thud. "Sango, you should rest!" Hakisuma panted out tiredly as she when along slaying the rest of the demons.
Sango was dragging all of the other limp bodies together. "Yeah...maybe...your right.." She plopped down and Miroku woke up.
"Ouch...you okay Sango?" Miroku asked smiling. Sango nodded and laid back. "I'll take care of the demons! You guys just rest!" Hakisuma continued slaying the rest of the demons. The shadows' poison gases filled the air and her delicate fox sense of smell didn't make it any better. She was covered in dark blood, some which was of her own. Soon they were all cleared out. There was one shadow left...it was standing by the group. Hakisuma walked quietly behind the shadow. "Father?" The shadow spun around and pressed it's hand against her mouth. And Hakisuma fainted.
:::::A WHILE LATER:::::
Hachi, the raccoon demon, was walking through the part of the woods where the group was. "Oh no! Master? And his friends!" He looked them over. "I'll have to fly them to Kaede!" He transformed into a large strangely shaped creature. Hachi picked up the group and was off.
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