Dragon Queen

By: Isha (FlipFIZzoom)

I/N: Boredness bothers me… so I'm going to write an American Dragon: Jake Long fanfic. I don't totally like this cartoon because it's defiantly a copy of Danny Phantom and it's not as good. Yeah, can't you tell Danny and Jake are kinda alike (Going Ghost and Dragon Up? And they both need practice controlling their powers…) and this show is also like FOP because of the teachers (Crocker and Jake's teacher; who both believe in imaginary things like Fairy Godparents and Dragons). Anyways, I also don't own AD:JL obviously.

Story: Marissa Dratzy, a crazy hyper girl who is constantly moving from state to state, moves to New York. She doesn't know it, but she's also a dragon. And even though she's never tried to become a dragon, she can perfectly control her powers. With this move, she meets Jake, Spud, and Trixie and starts to have a crush on Jake.

Chapter 1

(Dragon Stealing the Spotlight)

After school was both a great time and a bad time for Jake Long. He either does 1 of two things; Saves the world as the American Dragon or skateboard with his 2 best friends Spud and Trixie. Well, this group of 3 is about to be a group of 2 and 2.


"Come on Marissa! Why don't we spend your last day at home from school shopping and relaxing and stuff." Marissa's mom said. "Then maybe later you can go around the places where the kids your age hang out and meet some people!"

"Fine mom… But instead of the relaxing and the hanging out, lets just got to the mall and buy me stuff!" Marissa smirked. "PLEASE!"

"Mari! You know we don't have a lot of money. I can buy you some stuff but not a lot. That's why we had to move to New York with your uncle CJ."

"Ok then! Buy me 'some stuff'! Now hurry up mom! Let's go!" Marissa smiled. She wasn't trilled about moving but since she had no control over it, she decided to just think positive about it. After all, she might make a friend sooner than she thinks.

Luckily for Jake and his friends, it was a half-day. They decided that after school they'd go skateboarding like usual, but Jake's Grandpa needed for him to go to the mall and get something. There was a secret entrance in one of the stores there that would bring him to a Mystical Mall.

Finally, the bell rang and school was finally out for the day. Jake explained earlier to Trixie and Spud that he had to run an errand.

"See you later guys! I promise I'll be back really, really, really soon! I don't understand why my Gramps can't go do this stuff himself." Jake said, hurrying to the mall.

Meanwhile, Marissa and her mom were having fun shopping when the mall suddenly went dark. Marissa sat still while she was eating, but everyone else in the Food Court and the rest of the mall hid, including her mom.

"What's going on? What's the matter with everyone? It's just a power outage!" Marissa was just puzzled at these people for hiding. It wasn't until she felt a warm breath of air on her neck. She turned around to see a mutated creature standing behind her. It's bloody fangs and deadly claws freaked her out, so she ran to hide. At that time though, Jake was at the entrance of the mall. Some guy ran out screaming for him not to go in there.

"Kid! I wouldn't go in there if I were you! Unless you want a monster to eat your arm off or something!" The guy ran away screaming and crying and panicking.

"Whoa dude! What was that guys problem?" Jake asked himself. But, coming from behind him was a stampede of frightened people. Jake ran to hid until to stampede was over. "Yo! There must be a HUGE problem in there! DRAGON UP!" Jake shouted in his hiding spot so that no one could see him turn into a dragon.

Unfortunately, Marissa was still in that mall trying to find a way to him. All of the exits were sealed tight after the other people ran out. After all of the running, Marissa ran into a dead end and she was cornered by the beast. She let out a screechy scream and started changing. She grew a tail and wings and claws and scales. Also, she didn't know that her screeching was one of her dragon powers, which made the beast deaf and scared, causing him to transport back to where he came from.

"Damn what was that?" Marissa just said realizing she just scared away the monster. She walked slowly away to look for a mirror because she wanted to fix her hair. She knew that all of the running and panicking she did that it was messed up. One glance into the mirror and she fainted at the sight of a dragon even though it was her.

Jake flew all throughout the mall looking for the cause of the people leaving the mall in a hurry. Then he literally stumbled upon the unconscious dragon. Staring down at her, he let out a shocked scream. That woke Marissa up. But after seeing another dragon she screamed (her screech power) in Jake's face.

"Dude… what's your problem… you're such a…" Jake started, but he was interrupted by a girl screaming in his face. A girl dragon that is…

"MY PROBLEM! I don't have a problem! You're the dragon here!"

"Umm… I think you should look in a mirror girl. Because I don't think I'm the only freak here…" Jake shyly said.

"FREAK! Are you calling me a…" Marissa looked at herself in the mirror; seeing a scaly, sharp-toothed dragon. "Oh crap! I am a freak! I'm a dragon! How did this happen?" She whimpered.

"Yo calm down! Dragons aren't all that freaky. I've gotten used to it. Hey! I've never met you before! Did you come from the Mystical Mall?" Jake asked.

"Hell no! I just came from Hawaii! My mom lost her job and we kind of became broke so we had to move here with my uncle. What's it to you?"

"Nothing really. I've never met a girl dragon here before. At least I can't say we've met before. Who are you?"

"My name is Marissa and I just came here with my mom to get stuff but a monster scared everyone away and I screamed him away! Who are you?"

"I'm… umm… Well, I never told anyone about this before!"

"What! You've never told anyone your name? What is it?"

"I'm… Jake…"

"Now geez! Was that so hard! So you're really a human though?" Marissa asked, being a bit more relieved.

"Yeah, you too?"

"Yup! And I'd really like to be one again! So how do you change back or whatever?"

"Well, that's simple. All you do is just relax yourself and think about being a human again then…" Jake explained, turning back into a person again.

"Awww! You are so adorable! Ok! Let me try!" Marissa relaxed herself, wishing to be a person again and then she was back to normal.

Well… that's all so far! Now, I think I got Jake a little OOC but I've only seen the show like 3 times or so and I haven't gotten all that much into it. And I think he lives in NY, but I'm not too sure. If you know, tell me if I'm right. Anyways, Chapter 2 coming soon!