I had been debating whether or not to include the epilogue. I mean, Doyle never wrote that Holmes survived that fall now did he? For all intents and purposes, the Great Detective was dead. I wanted something like that. It works either way but the surprise is a bit gone now right? I kinda thought that not including it would be more powerful somehow. I dunno. Comments?
This is the part where I suppose an editor comes in.
The fight scenes... could be more vivid. I must admit I just wanted to write it and go on. I could visualize the action in my head. Every blow-by-blow account. But I couldn't put it in word processor. Something, to fix! I suppose we could make another pass at it, time permitting but the real world beckons! I know, sucks sometimes doesn't it?
The Nightwing subplot could be better... to help explain the last chapter, I suppose.
The Oracle-Lady Blackhawk scene, hope the guys at Gotham RP enjoyed it:)
The Bruce-Diana dance thingy is based on JLU stuff. I hope my good buddy Bilky enjoyed it. She surprisingly loved that "Am I Blue" song Bruce "the Batman" Wayne sang for Wondy in JLU episode, "This Little Piggy".
Actually that subplot works, for some reason. It was written there purposely. Didn't think it would go that far though. Every good story needs a touch of the romantic side right? Personally, it could have been deleted the blowing up part scenes were much more enjoyable.
The story... I would have wanted more subplots. But I didn't have time to plan it out. No time. Story works anyway as it stands... not perfect but its there.
You know the title could be "The Batman and the Harbinger of Death" guest staring the JLA. Oh, well thats life. I just realized it after it was done.
I had hoped it would be deeper than this... maybe the next one, if ever?
Hope you guys had fun with it. This was my very first Fan Fiction. It was fun doing this. I certainly appreciate your feedbacks:D Thank you very much for reading:D
Cheers,
Arky
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