Well Everybody this is my first fan fiction so please be nice to it,
And more so me. I pheer (yes it is spelt correctly) rejection. Goes into a corner and weeps I probably have a few grammatical or parigrafical errors…please don't hate me Cowers in the corner again. I fought with the editor thingy to get my story to look right..it was hard work...so please like my story. -
If you are all nice in review a lot I will put the next chapter up as soon as possible.
Now...I should get on with the story before i get distracted by another shiny object, so...on with the story. O and by the way the sentances ending in+'s are Daisuke (sorry this i couldnt figure out, how to get the+ signto stay at the begining of the sentances..soif anyone can help me plz do!)and the :'s are Dark when they talk to each other. Enjoy!
Slowly waking up, Daisuke realized he wasn't in his own room.
When he was more awake he got the idea to talk to dark.
Dark! Dark! Get up+ Groaning Dark woke up.
:Gnnn…why wake? I'm tired…:
Where are we+
Waking up Dark realized what Daisuke didn't know.
:Heh you don't remember do you:
WHAT DON'T I REMEMBER+
:Hump...I'm tired..:
Didn't you sleep last night+
:No, you where making too much noise:
Well where ar..wait…what noise+
:Too tired…..falls asleep:
DARK! Wake Up+
+What noise+
:The noise you two where making:
Us two? There is no us too+
:Heh…yes there is:
Whatever, I'm getting up…+
Daisuke went to get up but realized something was not allowing him to get up.
Dark! What's holding me back+
:Gnnn…look next to you..:
Slowly turning around Daisuke saw who had their arms wrapped lightly around his body.
It was…To be continued…
Well that was my fic. Was it good? Please tell me! Until next time... I bid you good bye. Goodnight you have been a great audience. -
To all my loyal Readers, thank for reviewing my story. Im sorryI havent updated in almost a year, but so many things have been going on.
I regret thatI have to discontinue this story because of the lack of time and writing skill on my part. I wishI had the strength to write another chapter but alas, I can't.
But, allow me to quell some of the cliff hangeringness of my story. Wasn't going to be Krad(ewww...nasty..),Risa, Riku, Daisukes grandpa(I read one like that b4...I had sooo many nightmeres...) Or any of his relatives...Im sure that narrows it down a little. - P
Well until I have more time, and skill (P)I bid you good bye.
Parting is such sweet sweet sorrow. So I say good bye 'till...i dunno...lol JA NE!