My teaser was cut-off, so here's the whole thing!
Up until quite recently, Destiny Island was normal. But now that the mysterious girl with no memory floated up onto the beach, Kairi has some competition. Not only that, but she's heard of two other girls appearing on -their- island. As the mysterious girl remembers her past and decides what to do with the decisions and tasks on hand, a whole other life unravels for not only her, but Sora and his friends.
Yes, so... let me introduce myself. I'm Moonii! Hmm… I've decided to give FF a second chance. You're probably really confused right now, so I'll just explain everything briefly and get to my next story as quickly as I can. My last story (The Future), which I never finished, was a big struggle for me because I felt as if it were heading somewhere I didn't want it to… but in order to please my readers I would've had to have written certain scenes that I didn't feel comfortable doing at the moment. So as far as 'The Future' goes, I'm still pondering over whether or not I should continue writing it. Oh well, when I do figure it out, I'll post it. But for now, my future (hah, what a coincidence) is dedicated to "Shadowy Reflection of a Forgotten Past," which, initialized is, SRoaFP; kind of different.
That's another thing. The title I chose right now is just kind of thrown out there and random, and besides the fact that the main character in this story forgets her past, it really has nothing important to do with the plot yet. One day I just felt like writing and this is what I came up with so far. If you like it, I'll keep writing -- so review! :) I want to thanks my friend Alexa (talaandkailuver) for inspiring me to start writing again, :P You should read her story, too. If we get a lot of reviews My explanation is longer than I wanted it to be! You'll soon realize that I can drone on and on… so if you review, which I'd really appreciate since I never get that many which isn't very motivating, I'll need some constructive criticism. Thanks for choosing this story and I hope you enjoy it! :)
Please remember to review! :)
Introduction x Chapter 1
The Girl
Drip, drip, drip…
A girl around the age of 14 sat in a pool of golden light, dazed and confused. She looked upward into the light but she couldn't see where it was coming from. All was black and cold around her, and she couldn't move even if she tried; who knows what was waiting in the darkness. She started to shiver, even though the coldness in the place was because of it's surrounding.
There was a noise: a sandy, scratchy grating sound on the surface of the Earth. The girl jerked her head towards the sound but she couldn't tell where it came from. All at once she heard every sound a person, animal, and creature could create. She saw everything there was to see, and knew everything that was to be known in the world. She was the One.
"You have been chosen."
The voice sounded of thousands of angels singing a melodic tune, and the claps of diabolical crime. It was full of happiness and hate, and consumed her mind. She sobbed upon the floor, unsure how something invisible to her eyes could make her feel so many emotions at once; hatred, pain, love, passion, warmth.
The girl fought it. It was breaking into her soul. She reached out to push it away and it pried further still. It was all too much, and she didn't want to be the One. She didn't know what being the One meant. As she lay there in the full emptiness of the spiraling darkness of nowhere, a crystalline tear slowly fell off her face and hit the ground below her...
Drip, drip, drip...
Above her, a light shone; of skies, of stars, of beauty and all there was to love. Instinct told her to stay where she was, but there was some type of emotion tugging at her core... yet, she couldn't identify it. Her bruised and broken body was eager to move, and the touch of broken glass stuck in the palms of her hands was excruciatingly comfortable. She could not feel anything, and there she was... lying in a dripping, black emptiness unable to get up onto her own feet. She closed her eyes and went into a state of unconsciousness, and let the overwhelming light take her...
She heard the cry of gulls, and the aroma of sea salt filled her. She liked the scent of the sea.
"She's stirring!" someone yelled. The person's voice sounded miles away and it bellowed in her head like a beating drum... but such a faint echo. She realized there was someone nearby, and as she tried to open her mouth to speak, no words came out.
"Where am I? Is anyone listening? Won't somebody help me? Why won't you answer? I feel so alone..."
So! How'd you like it?! I know the first chapter was short, but I liked it how it was and I thought if I added more it would ruin it. But I promise you, the chapters will get longer as I get reviews (IF I get reviews! :P) as I go along and write. Thank you for reading, and please review! I need all the tips I can get! :)
