I redid this chapter because I thought it was way to short. The ending kind of sucked when I had read the story after. I'm going to change a few things around. Also I want to start three new stories in which interest me the most now. But since my access to a computer is now limited updates are going to be slow but have no fear thank goodness my laptops here. Also Jack in Black is a group that I made up. Tori and Hikari are my characters if you want to borrow them I'll give you the full summary of how they look. So here is version 2.0 of Sixth Sense.
The Sixth Sense
Chapter one: Moving In....
Kagome Hirugashi was a girl of 17. She had long raven hair that reached her mind-back her eyes were blue and had a grayish tint. She always wore black and gray. She was a loner and was doing great without friends. See Kagome wasn't normal she never was. She had a sixth sense. Every day she wished she never had been granted with this 'gift' as some people would call it. To her it was a curse.
Kag P.O.V.
We finally arrived at our new house in Tokyo. It wasn't big and it wasn't small either. It was a pale blue color with white. It had a wrap around porch and was three stories high if you counted the attic. I slowly opened my door and got out. I checked on the other side of the car and realized that my family had already abandoned the car. I sighed and closed the car door softly. I stride over to be where standing waiting for me to hurry up. I sighed once again and pushed back a piece of my hair that had slipped into my face. I climbed up the two steps that were connected to the porch.
My parents opened the house they walked in casually but I reached over and touched the door knob I closed my eyes. I saw blankness I reopened them to find my parents staring at me. Mother spoke after what seemed like ages" Honey relax the house was just built this summer. There is no way anything could be lurking in this house." I could tell my parents were uneasy about me being psychic. I didn't have to read to read there mind to know it. You could just see it on their faces. I just shrugged my shoulder and asked where my room was. I grabbed two of my smaller boxes and piled them up. I went to the direction of where my room was supposed to be. I kicked opened my door and dropped my boxes on my already brought bed. I went back downstairs for the rest of my boxes. I really do try not to use my powers unless it was a dire emergency but in this case it was.
After unpacking which wasn't hard because most of my stuff had already been there I just had to arrange them, I took one good look at my room. The was were Navy blue with silver lining the corners my curtains were black and had silver trimming on it. My bed was queen size it also had black sheets me pillow was black and that too had silver trimming. I had a black table lamp on my rose wood dresser. I had three of them in my room. My computer desk was also rose wood. On it I had a state of the art Mac computer (a/n: I only put that in there because I think it the only computer you can get multi-colored) It was a see through purple majesty colored its main color though was some kind of whitish clear color. Beside my table I noticed my guitar sitting on its stand. It was a laminated black fender with a dragon encircling it on it had my name written in bloody red kanji. I had gotten it for my 10th birthday. It was a present from my uncle he is a member of Dir En Gray. I threw my self onto me bed hopping to catch some shut eye before dinner. As soon as my head it the pillow I fell asleep. I was awoken by a sharp pain on my abdomen. I opened my eyes and saw my little brother Souta sitting on top of me smiling. "Hey there lil one" I said with a grin on my face. He's smile instantly fell he then pouted and stated "I ain't lil. Anyways mom says its dinner time." I grunted and rolled my self out of bed thus causing Souta to fall with me. I got off the floor and Souta I gave him my hand so I could pull him up. His memories suddenly flashed through my mind. But it was okay because I was used to it by now. He ran out of the room and I paced after him and down the stairs.
In the dinning room mom had the food on the table it smelt good. It was spaghetti. We all settled down and ate quietly. The door bell rang emitting a piercing noise. We stopped eating and looked at the door. Finally dad got up and answered it. I got up to see who it was.
At our door there was a family of two standing there. The oldest women who I suspected to be the mother spoke up "Hello! I'm Jinkada, Tori and this is my daughter Hikari." I searched them up and down trying to analyze their personality. The mother Tori who probably were American considering her first name had on a pair of plain jeans and a blue t-shirt that stated the numbers 1993. She had dirty blonde hair and rainy gray eyes. The same for her daughter except for the fact that she had black hair. Hikari was wearing black baggy jeans with chains hanging off on both sides and a tee that said ByTe Me in sticky cap letters.
To me what their looks are saying is that the mom is young and nice but Hikari was a total tomboy that came with a bad attitude.
I finally tuned back in to what they were saying when I noticed dad was inviting them in. He led them into the dining room were he introduced them to mom and Souta. I went back to eating my spaghetti and tuning them out cause dad offered for me to show Hikari around our house since she was showing me around her school. I must have missed that part. I sighed and pushed my self up from the table. I led Hikari around the house giving her one sentenced summaries of the house. When we reached my room I could tell she liked it by the way she was nodding her head. She shifted under her wait so I offered her my bed to sit on. "Thanks" "No prob." "Um... I should probably tell you about the people you'll meet at school. First off, there is Kikyou and her lacky's stay away from her that's total trouble. So is Naraku's group but Kagura is cool and so is Kanna but don't let Kanna in on to much info cause se'll go and blab her mouth off to Naraku. Then there's Inu-Yasha Kikyou's ex-boyfriend but they're an on and off thing. Miroku is a total lecher so be careful of his right hand. Then there's Sango and Kohaku they're siblings but Kohaku is starting to get involed with the wrong people. Seiko and Reika are twins, but they're very pesky and smart-alec. Then there's Sesshomaru total hottie but he hangs around with only two people: Jaken he's a jounior and Rin she's some ninth grader that he saved from a couple of bullies. Oh! and then there is Kouga what a total jock strap. He is such a dunce. ( Kaze: How dare you say that about my Kouga-kun. Somebody is so getting a salary cut.) And there is Hakaku and Ginta there ninth graders who look up to Kouga. Last but not least Ayame. Poor girl's in love with Kouga but he rejected her. And that's about it." " Hikari, we're leaving." " okay coming mom! Later." She bounced up and fled down the stairs. I followed her out but went to the bathroom. I undressed my self and took a quick shower and brushed my teeth while I was in the shower. I got out and dressed myself in my pajamas which were ust and big tee and boxer cut underwear ( boxer shorts.) I flicked the lights off and left the room. I went into my own room and opening one of my dresser draw(sp?) and pulled out a pair of white socks. I sliped them on my feet. I jumped on my bed and turned off my lamp. I closd my eyes and sat on my bed meditating. I neede to rid my mind off everything.
As soon as I found peace in my head I went to sleep dreaming another dreamless sleep. Tomorrow was going to be Saturday. I was going to have to help my parents finish unpacking. But for now I needed to sleep.
Chapter End.
Kaze: so what ya think? Good, bad, way to short? Tll me. Please review it gives me the will to write.
