O.K. guys, time for an author's note!
*Groan*
Hey! Don't worry. It won't be long. I just need to give some shout outs. So here thanks to all of my reviewers!!! Love ya lots!
Squall AKA Leon
Tiff()
Madmoomoos()
Chibi playing with fire
Destination/Destiny
Dark-of-stars
Masahi Kishimoto
Kogitsune
Yusuke
Kumori Ookami
Jazzi-chan
Geminidragon
I know it's been awhile since most of these people have reviewed, but I forgot to thank them on my other chapters. So here ya go! Oops, and one more thing. I want to thank those who reviewed my other fic, called Unsaid. If you haven't read it, please do.
Tulindo
Wildmage
Dark-of-stars
Squall AKA Leon
O.K. I swear I'm almost done.
Disclaimer: You know the drill, I don't own them, never have and probably never will. Now that I'm thoroughly depressed about it, on with the story...
'What's gonna happen?' Rainey thought.
She sat upon Kirara and thought while the cat demon rushed past trees and rivers. 'What powers could I possibly have?'
*gasp*
"Look."
Sango pointed to a huge castle on the horizon, blocking the setting sun. But this sunset was not like others. The very sight of it made Rainey's stomach turn. Kirara stopped just outside of the gates of the castle. As soon as they stepped down, the gates flew open.
"I don't like the way this is looking." Miroku said.
"Well, we've come this far, we might as well go the whole way." Kagome said.
"I'll go first." Inuyasha said. He walked through the gates and into the courtyard as the others followed.
*BAM*
*LOCK*
Everyone turned around to see the gates close behind them.
"Ten bucks says they're not gonna open." Kagome said to Rainey.
*rumble*
*rumble*
"What was that?" Sango asked as she felt herself starting to shake.
*Rumble*
*Rumble*
"Could it be an earthquake?" Shippo asked as he held on to Inuyasha leg to keep himself from falling over.
*RUMBLE*
*RUMBLE*
"Oh my gosh. We're moving up!" Kagome screamed. They looked around to see the trees outside the gates slowly disappear beneath the rising castle. The castle was floating up towards the darkening night sky. This couldn't be good. They waited for the rumbling and shaking of the castle to stop in silence, each person lost in their own thoughts.
"Come on. Let's get moving." Inuyasha said when the castle stopped ascending. The others followed him into the castle.
"I see you made it here safely." A voice from above them said. They all looked up to see the true Naraku, without the baboon outfit standing on a roof of a nearby building.
"Naraku, get down here and fight so I can kill you!" Inuyasha roared.
"Hmm...as tempting as that sounds, I will have to decline. I have no time to linger with the likes of you, but she does." As he said it he pointed to a young woman standing on another roof. With one movement she was in front of them.
"Who are you?" Inuyasha demanded.
The woman looked past him as if he had never spoken. She started to walk towards Kagome and Rainey.
"Not so fast." Inuyasha pointed his sword at the woman. "Maybe you didn't hear me. Who are you?"
With one wave of the hand Inuyasha was blasted to the side and rammed into a wall.
"Stupid child. Do you honestly think a half demon like yourself can stop a ruler of the spirits?" The woman continued to make her way to the two girls. She stopped about 10 feet away.
"So you're the girl my sister thinks is a match for me? I must say I am insulted." She sneered. Her brown eyes glistened with hate.
"Your sister? You mean the Queen of the Spirits?"
"Queen? Is that what she's saying? She's no queen. She's just the ruler of the dream spirits. She can't be queen."
"And what exactly are you?" Rainey asked.
"The ruler of nightmares and fear of course. I am Iyana Me-ushi."
"Are you the one who massacred all of those villagers?" Miroku asked.
"Yes." She sneered. She looked extremely proud of herself.
"Why? They had nothing to do with this."
"I had heard a rumor of my sister bringing someone from your time to that village." She said as she pointed to Rainey.
"So you killed them all?" Sango asked.
"Well, yeah. I was getting bored and I wanted to try out my powers with this jewel. She pointed to one of her horns.
"She's got a jewel shard embedded in her horn!" Kagome gasped.
"So you can see the jewel."
"What do you want with us?" Rainey demanded.
"Well apparently you seem to be in Naraku's way."
"What does that have to do with you?"
"Once evil has infested the earth, my kingdom will grow and spread. I'll be the ruler of all spirits."
"Why evil?"
"Everyone knows nightmares and fear feast upon evil. Once this world is taken over by that, mine will grow. So since you seem to be hindering Naraku, you're hindering me. And I'll just have to put an end to that."
With that Iyana Me-ushi jumped up into the sky and sat on thin air as if there was a chair there.
"Now, let's see," she said as she put her hands under her chin. "How do I want to do this? Oh I know, I'll-"
"Tetsuaiga!"
Inuyasha jumped into the air and swung his mighty sword. Iyana looked unworried. Just as she was about to be sliced by the sword, she disappeared and reappeared behind Inuyasha.
"You should've stayed down, mutt." She sneered. A black ball of evil light grew in her hands. It soon took up everything and everyone was inside of it.
"What is this?" Miroku asked.
"I can't see a thing." Sango said.
"Don't worry. You will soon enough." Iyana's voice came from all around.
Then there was utter silence.
After a few everlasting minutes in complete darkness, the sky was all of a sudden lit up, with a light.
'That light looks so evil.' Rainey thought. 'Something bad is gonna happen.' She didn't know how right she was.
END OF CHAPTER 13
So...
Whatcha think? Does that count as a cliffhanger? I'm sorry. If you couldn't tell, I'm kinda new at this. Anyways, I've been thinking, and I'm considering removing this story off of Fanfiction.net. It doesn't seem to be doing very well, and I don't want to waste my time, or anyone else's by keeping it around. So tell me what you think.
*Groan*
Hey! Don't worry. It won't be long. I just need to give some shout outs. So here thanks to all of my reviewers!!! Love ya lots!
Squall AKA Leon
Tiff()
Madmoomoos()
Chibi playing with fire
Destination/Destiny
Dark-of-stars
Masahi Kishimoto
Kogitsune
Yusuke
Kumori Ookami
Jazzi-chan
Geminidragon
I know it's been awhile since most of these people have reviewed, but I forgot to thank them on my other chapters. So here ya go! Oops, and one more thing. I want to thank those who reviewed my other fic, called Unsaid. If you haven't read it, please do.
Tulindo
Wildmage
Dark-of-stars
Squall AKA Leon
O.K. I swear I'm almost done.
Disclaimer: You know the drill, I don't own them, never have and probably never will. Now that I'm thoroughly depressed about it, on with the story...
'What's gonna happen?' Rainey thought.
She sat upon Kirara and thought while the cat demon rushed past trees and rivers. 'What powers could I possibly have?'
*gasp*
"Look."
Sango pointed to a huge castle on the horizon, blocking the setting sun. But this sunset was not like others. The very sight of it made Rainey's stomach turn. Kirara stopped just outside of the gates of the castle. As soon as they stepped down, the gates flew open.
"I don't like the way this is looking." Miroku said.
"Well, we've come this far, we might as well go the whole way." Kagome said.
"I'll go first." Inuyasha said. He walked through the gates and into the courtyard as the others followed.
*BAM*
*LOCK*
Everyone turned around to see the gates close behind them.
"Ten bucks says they're not gonna open." Kagome said to Rainey.
*rumble*
*rumble*
"What was that?" Sango asked as she felt herself starting to shake.
*Rumble*
*Rumble*
"Could it be an earthquake?" Shippo asked as he held on to Inuyasha leg to keep himself from falling over.
*RUMBLE*
*RUMBLE*
"Oh my gosh. We're moving up!" Kagome screamed. They looked around to see the trees outside the gates slowly disappear beneath the rising castle. The castle was floating up towards the darkening night sky. This couldn't be good. They waited for the rumbling and shaking of the castle to stop in silence, each person lost in their own thoughts.
"Come on. Let's get moving." Inuyasha said when the castle stopped ascending. The others followed him into the castle.
"I see you made it here safely." A voice from above them said. They all looked up to see the true Naraku, without the baboon outfit standing on a roof of a nearby building.
"Naraku, get down here and fight so I can kill you!" Inuyasha roared.
"Hmm...as tempting as that sounds, I will have to decline. I have no time to linger with the likes of you, but she does." As he said it he pointed to a young woman standing on another roof. With one movement she was in front of them.
"Who are you?" Inuyasha demanded.
The woman looked past him as if he had never spoken. She started to walk towards Kagome and Rainey.
"Not so fast." Inuyasha pointed his sword at the woman. "Maybe you didn't hear me. Who are you?"
With one wave of the hand Inuyasha was blasted to the side and rammed into a wall.
"Stupid child. Do you honestly think a half demon like yourself can stop a ruler of the spirits?" The woman continued to make her way to the two girls. She stopped about 10 feet away.
"So you're the girl my sister thinks is a match for me? I must say I am insulted." She sneered. Her brown eyes glistened with hate.
"Your sister? You mean the Queen of the Spirits?"
"Queen? Is that what she's saying? She's no queen. She's just the ruler of the dream spirits. She can't be queen."
"And what exactly are you?" Rainey asked.
"The ruler of nightmares and fear of course. I am Iyana Me-ushi."
"Are you the one who massacred all of those villagers?" Miroku asked.
"Yes." She sneered. She looked extremely proud of herself.
"Why? They had nothing to do with this."
"I had heard a rumor of my sister bringing someone from your time to that village." She said as she pointed to Rainey.
"So you killed them all?" Sango asked.
"Well, yeah. I was getting bored and I wanted to try out my powers with this jewel. She pointed to one of her horns.
"She's got a jewel shard embedded in her horn!" Kagome gasped.
"So you can see the jewel."
"What do you want with us?" Rainey demanded.
"Well apparently you seem to be in Naraku's way."
"What does that have to do with you?"
"Once evil has infested the earth, my kingdom will grow and spread. I'll be the ruler of all spirits."
"Why evil?"
"Everyone knows nightmares and fear feast upon evil. Once this world is taken over by that, mine will grow. So since you seem to be hindering Naraku, you're hindering me. And I'll just have to put an end to that."
With that Iyana Me-ushi jumped up into the sky and sat on thin air as if there was a chair there.
"Now, let's see," she said as she put her hands under her chin. "How do I want to do this? Oh I know, I'll-"
"Tetsuaiga!"
Inuyasha jumped into the air and swung his mighty sword. Iyana looked unworried. Just as she was about to be sliced by the sword, she disappeared and reappeared behind Inuyasha.
"You should've stayed down, mutt." She sneered. A black ball of evil light grew in her hands. It soon took up everything and everyone was inside of it.
"What is this?" Miroku asked.
"I can't see a thing." Sango said.
"Don't worry. You will soon enough." Iyana's voice came from all around.
Then there was utter silence.
After a few everlasting minutes in complete darkness, the sky was all of a sudden lit up, with a light.
'That light looks so evil.' Rainey thought. 'Something bad is gonna happen.' She didn't know how right she was.
END OF CHAPTER 13
So...
Whatcha think? Does that count as a cliffhanger? I'm sorry. If you couldn't tell, I'm kinda new at this. Anyways, I've been thinking, and I'm considering removing this story off of Fanfiction.net. It doesn't seem to be doing very well, and I don't want to waste my time, or anyone else's by keeping it around. So tell me what you think.