Once again, thanks to everyone who reviewed this
so far, you're all great people!! And an additional thanks to: Laina
and Destiny Lupin, who are subjecting their characters to my fic.
J/p!
I know that I've kinda been dragging out this story, but
I'm trying not to skip too much right now. Since I want to try and
start out in the first year and do every year, though I dunno if
that'll be happening.
I think I figured out why I had so much
trouble getting out those last few chapters, it seems I'm more
creative and whatnot at night, so I'll probably be writing the rest
of my chapters at night.
Also, don't be surprised if some
random sentences or phrases are thrown in, phrases from Spanish,
possibly from French or Italian. It was just a warning, and if I do
throw in any "foreign" words, I'll put the English meaning
in parenthesis next to it. (You can probably just ignore this, for
now anyway, since I probably won't be throwing in any random phrases
for a while. so till I decide to do that umm. yea. Lol)
Okay,
so enough with my babbling and on with the story.
Disclaimer:
You know the drill, having seen it in many other fanfics... nothing
belongs to me, except for a few characters and the plot; the rest
belongs to JKR, one of the people who reviewed, or a singer/band that
I decided to 'borrow' the music from. (Though the music factor
will be decided on how brain dead I manage to get while writing this
chapter.)
Thorns by Faerielights
Chapter 6: The Night Before
Last
Chapter:
Lily stepped into the fire shouting "Lupin
Estate!" and her aunt followed with Lily's trunk.
When
Lily stepped out of the fire she caught sight of all her new friends
and relaxed ever so
slightly
"Lily!
There was a rush to see who could crush her bones first; the people
in this race were Remus, James, and Sirius. Everyone else just
laughed as Lily began to exaggerate her need for air by mock
gasping.
"Silly Billy Lily boo, guess what we're gunna
do? We're gunna play a game, and don't look at me like I'm insane!"
Sirius sang somewhat poetically.
When Lily looked at everyone
else puzzled, they just shrugged their shoulders, and the only
explanation she got was that he had been talking and singing in verse
all day.
"Ooh, ooh! Guess what Lily bean! I'm Britney
Spears! (A/N: yes, I do know that she wasn't around back then, but
humor me) Wanna see me perform?" Sirius half screamed with
hyperness. Not waiting for an answer he continued, "Ok, just
wait a second, I have to get ready!"
He then ran out of
the room and upstairs, leaving Lily to wonder about his sanity. James
and Remus just chuckled. When Lily was about to question as to who
the person in the room that she had yet to meet was, Sirius ran back
into the room dressed in a ridiculous get up.
Sirius was
wearing tight, hot pink, glittery bell-bottoms, and a triangle bikini
top that was also bright pink and covered in glitter. The top was
stuffed with pudding filled balloons for a chest, since he was kind
of lacking one. He had on a long blonde wig (the hair reached halfway
down his back) and was wearing heavy makeup. The music started up,
and everyone cracked up as they heard the first few chords of Boys
(A/N: regular version, not the remix). And he had changed around the
lyrics and started serenading every female in sight.
He walked
onto a make believe stage saying the first few lines to a painting of
a fairie, who blushed and hid behind the flower.
For
whatever reason, I feel like I've been wanting you all my life. You
don't understand, I'm so glad we're at the same place at the same
time It's over now
He started to shimmy across the stage,
and was singing to a pretty girl with long brown hair and green/blue
eyes.
I spotted you dancin', you made all the boys stare
Those lips and your green eyes and the sexy hair I said, shake my
thing and make the world want you Tell your girls you'll be back, I
wanna see what you can do
With this he kicked his heel and
turned around doing a "model walk" as his friends had
dubbed it.
What would it take for you to just leave with
me? Not tryin' to sound conceited but me and you were meant to be I'm
a nice guy, You're a sexy girl Let's turn this dance floor into our
own little nasty world
With that, Sirius turned so that
his back was to everyone and pretended to make out with someone while
dancing.
Girls, sometimes a boy just needs one Girls, to
love him and to hold Girls, and when a boy is with one Girls, then
he's in control
Sirius then decided to switch to the
original lyrics and pulled James up onto the make believe
stage.
Pulled your boy off the dance floor Screamin' in
his hear Must of said something about me, 'cause he's looking over
here You looking at me with that sexy attitude But the way your boy's
movin' it, it puts me in the mood
James gave Sirius a
weird look and tried to walk away from him.
What would it
take for you to just leave with me? Not tryin' to sound conceited but
me and you were meant to be You're a sexy guy, I'm a nice girl Let's
turn this dance floor into our own little nasty world
Sirius
turned around and pretended to be making out with someone while
dancing (A/N: again). Everyone was laughing at James red face, while
he tried to hide.
Boys, sometimes a girl just needs one
Boys, to love her and to hold
Aunt Jo walked in on
Sirius' performance, and after she had finished laughing she asked
"What is going on in here?"
"Well you see Jo,
we were having a karaoke night, as a last night of summer sort of
thing, and Sirius was dancing to 'Boys' and embarrassing James"
Remus started off.
"Wait, you don't have to say anymore,
you just explained it all with that one bit," Mr. Lupin cut in,
smiling. He had walked in the room in time to hear Remus's
explanation.
"We just came out here to see if anyone
wanted some dessert. We're having dirt," Jo said. (A/N: dirt is
chocolate pudding with Oreo crumbs on the top, it's really good, and
even better with gummy worms. Oh great, now I'm making myself hungry,
guess I'll go get some food.)
"FOOD!! WHERE?? I WANT
FOOD!!!" Sirius hollered, and took off towards the kitchen.
"We
better hurry, cuz if we don't Sirius'll eat all the dirt," James
darted after Sirius.
"If left by themselves they'll both
eat it and we won't get any" Remus said and headed after the
other two. Everyone that was left in the room just looked at each
other, to the door, back at each other, and then they all took off
for the kitchens so that James, Sirius, and Remus wouldn't have the
chance to eat all the
dirt.
11:00
P.M:
"Okay you guys, you have to go to bed, we'll be
getting up early since we have a long ways to travel. (A/N: let's
just say that aunt Jo is very punctual, and they live a good hour or
two away from the train station.) Plus we want to be early so that we
can make a good impression." Aunt Jo said, trying to reason with
all the preteens.
After arguing with them as to why they
should go to sleep now, it was 11:30. The girls were in one room, and
the guys in another, and almost everyone fell asleep by 12:30. The
only person that stayed up was Lily. She sat up, worrying and
wondering about Hogwarts; after all, she had spent her whole life
with a muggle family. What if no one liked her other than her cousin
(A/N: I dunno if I ever clarified that Remus was her cousin.) and his
friends? What if the only reason that Remus and all them pretended as
though they liked her because Remus and Lily were related?
'No
sense in worrying about things like that,' Lily thought to herself
(A/n: well duh, who else could she be thinking too.) 'We'll just
worry about that sort of thing when the time comes.'
After a
few more minutes, Lily had dropped off into a restless
sleep.
A/N:
All right, I've been putting in way to many notes, but I can't help
it. Umm I thought about it, and realized that b4 I had said the James
and Lily hated each other (or rather annoyed each other a lot) and
we'll just say that the hate part comes a little later on, they'll
hate each other over something stupid and then, even later in the
story, they'll realize that they were dumb to have hated each other
over such a stupid reason, and will either become bf/gf (though I
doubt it'll go from love to hate so fast.) or friends to bf/gf (which
is a lot more likely)
Also, I could really use some ideas for
chapters, like pranks for James and lily to pull on each other, ooh I
just got an idea for why Lily and James'll become enemies. ::rubs
hands together deviously:: Bwah ha ha! Ok, sorry about that. So,
anyway, like I was saying before, please send me some ideas for
pranks or something, cuz I still need ideas.
I might not
update for a while because "Hell Week" is starting up in
about 4 days. Oh joy. But you can't hate me cuz it won't be my fault,
it'll be my coaches.
And one more thing: REVIEW, REVIEW,
REVIEW!! But only if you want to, or if you have ideas for this
story, and I will give you credit for anything you give me.
